Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow too...

The sun won’t shine, let skies be blue.
Grey clouds stop light glimmering through.
Smiles and laughter – distant thoughts!
Those memories all long since lost.
Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow too,
Makes no difference to me, what about you?
The outlook’s still bleak, no excitement to share.
Can anyone hear me? Does anyone care?


Debbie Black

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© Debbie Black 2008

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  • RichardV
    RichardVover 4 years ago

    WOW Deb. Short, but great. Excellent writing…x

  • ragman
    ragmanover 4 years ago

    Yes I hear you loud and clear ~ the words are music to my ear

  • ragman
    ragmanover 4 years ago

    keep at this concise writing girl ~ when it’s from your heart it’s top of my chart

  • Anne van Alkemade
    Anne van Alkemadeover 4 years ago

    Nice work Debbie. Good questions too – you have to get a good response from them!

  • demon
    demonover 4 years ago

    I hear you and of course people care…let the grey clouds be blown away and the blue shine through…

  • Russell Holder
    Russell Holderover 4 years ago

    It makes a big difference… if you care! If you don’t care… it will never make a difference! Write on!

  • Debbie Black
    Debbie Blackover 4 years ago

    thank you all for your lovely comments!

  • awsiv
    awsivover 4 years ago

    yes i do love your writing…

  • Ben Ruskin
    Ben Ruskinover 4 years ago

    i care..and i definitely heard you! really well written

  • Rachael  Hope
    Rachael Hopeabout 4 years ago

    Oh this is wonderful! Thanks so much for sharing your pain so beautifully!