The sun won’t shine, let skies be blue.
Grey clouds stop light glimmering through.
Smiles and laughter – distant thoughts!
Those memories all long since lost.
Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow too,
Makes no difference to me, what about you?
The outlook’s still bleak, no excitement to share.
Can anyone hear me? Does anyone care?
Comments
WOW Deb. Short, but great. Excellent writing…x
Yes I hear you loud and clear ~ the words are music to my ear
keep at this concise writing girl ~ when it’s from your heart it’s top of my chart
Nice work Debbie. Good questions too – you have to get a good response from them!
I hear you and of course people care…let the grey clouds be blown away and the blue shine through…
It makes a big difference… if you care! If you don’t care… it will never make a difference! Write on!
thank you all for your lovely comments!
yes i do love your writing…
i care..and i definitely heard you! really well written
Oh this is wonderful! Thanks so much for sharing your pain so beautifully!