There's just something....

Something strange about this feeling,

Nothing here but pain – no healing.

“There’s just something…..”

Something stopping pleasant thoughts,

From deep within, you feel so lost?

“There’s just something…..”

Something different in the air,

But does anyone REALLY care?

“There’s just something…..”

You find a friend who really cares,

And listens as your soul you bare,

“There’s still something…..”

Something holding back your dreams,

All those plans and crazy schemes…

“There’s still something….”

Find a way over those high built walls!

You built them yourself so you know how they’ll fall!

“There’s just something…..”

A friendly face and listening ear,

Won’t be surprised if you shed a tear.

As “There’s just something….”

Something good can come of this,

Just keep believing it exists!

“That special something….”

Happiness that knows no bound,

Will find a way back and astound.

“Now THAT’S Something….”


Debbie Black

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© Debbie Black 2008

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Comments

  • Naturegirl
    Naturegirlover 4 years ago

    That is something…. thank you

  • David Meacham
    David Meachamover 4 years ago

    Silver lining somewhere – excellent work Deb

  • marvintunstall
    marvintunstallover 4 years ago

    great work!!!!!!!!!

  • rockinsue
    rockinsueover 4 years ago

    truly wonderful debz

  • photogenic
    photogenicover 4 years ago

    lovely debz.

  • Debbie Black
    Debbie Blackover 4 years ago

    thanks x

  • Anne van Alkemade
    Anne van Alkemadeover 4 years ago

    I love the refrain and also this
    Something good can come of this,
    Just keep believing it exists!

    Great work Debbie. Keep them coming.

  • Debbie Black
    Debbie Blackover 4 years ago

    Thanks Anne.

  • Suzanne German
    Suzanne Germanover 4 years ago

    Hi Debbie plea\sed to meet you and welcome to the group!
    a nice poem about hope and faith in sharing with another….lovely thoughts.

  • pijinlane
    pijinlaneover 4 years ago

    That is definitely ‘something’ … beautiful writing