Little Girl Lost
She never really fit in,
Too shy, too loud,
Never getting the balance
Wanted by the crowd.
They pointed and laughed,
She shivered and cried,
If only they knew
How she was feeling inside.
Surely they would stop this,
This teasing and taunting,
At night in her bed
These dreams that were haunting.
Just misunderstood,
A little girl lost,
Only needed one friend,
She’d be free of these ghosts.
Living in hope
Of being looked at and loved,
Always hoping that someday she’d be
Neither pushed at nor shoved.
Comments
lovely piece, i feel like i can relate to this.
wonderful, and welcome to redbubble, keep up this first class work
beautiful piece
Powerful.
Welcome.
well written and deeply felt….
and yes, welcome to Redbubble!
Powerful work. Well written, and full of feeling. Many people I think can relate to this. People being bullied at school or work etc. Well done.
very well written Debz welcome to RB keep up the work you only get better by doing more , and experienceing life and seeing it through your own eyes, feeling with your own heart
Beautiful piece of writing keep it up.
Welcome to the redbubble club hope you enjoy it here as we all do.
This is a great piece of writing, which I could relate to as well. Well done Debbie.
aww..poor thing..you really feel for her as you read it. i understand why it’s been published! excellent :)