Little Girl Lost
© Debbie Black
Little Girl Lost belongs to the following groups:
! * Irish Eyes * !, 0 Nowhere Like Northern Ireland, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, First Things, Self as Other, Up & Coming Writers and Young enthusiastsShe never really fit in,
Too shy, too loud,
Never getting the balance
Wanted by the crowd.
They pointed and laughed,
She shivered and cried,
If only they knew
How she was feeling inside.
Surely they would stop this,
This teasing and taunting,
At night in her bed
These dreams that were haunting.
Just misunderstood,
A little girl lost,
Only needed one friend,
She’d be free of these ghosts.
Living in hope
Of being looked at and loved,
Always hoping that someday she’d be
Neither pushed at nor shoved.
blueclover
lovely piece, i feel like i can relate to this.
susan davies
wonderful, and welcome to redbubble, keep up this first class work
wdavies285
beautiful piece
roybarry
Powerful.
Welcome.
Wendy Slee
well written and deeply felt….
and yes, welcome to Redbubble!
Catherine Veal
Powerful work. Well written, and full of feeling. Many people I think can relate to this. People being bullied at school or work etc. Well done.
michael51
very well written Debz welcome to RB keep up the work you only get better by doing more , and experienceing life and seeing it through your own eyes, feeling with your own heart
Patrick Ronan
Beautiful piece of writing keep it up.
Welcome to the redbubble club hope you enjoy it here as we all do.
Jodi Webb
This is a great piece of writing, which I could relate to as well. Well done Debbie.
Ben Ruskin
aww..poor thing..you really feel for her as you read it. i understand why it’s been published! excellent :)
Shanna S.
People can be so cruel. Some People don’t realize what bullying and picking on can do to somebody.This poem really touches me deeply.
Debbie Black replied
Thanks Shanna.
dSart
can relate excellent
LisaB entity
soo awesome i can really relate !! wonderful words Debbie xxx
plyle
very cute very cute! i hope that she found her way.
redcordial
beautiful can relate
except im lonly yet have friends…..
tracyxkeema
nice writing x
Isa Rodriguez
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