im sitting
on the uncarpeted steps
of my new house
and im beginning to think
that it’s
company
im more afraid of
than it is
loneliness
most people probably
kill themselves
because they’re so
lonely
but i think i might be
wrong
because i would probably
commit suicide
because
i just
want
some
alone
time.
im not suicidal. =].
I am just a normal person,
in a weird world,
trying to do what’s right,
and make people smile.
Comments
I absolutely love this thought process and share the same idea.
The more I read your writing the more phenomenal it and you become, Nice work =)
oh my… thank you. =]
i hate to be so presumptuous but perhaps consider switching the last two words
just try it out in your head
it reads with such a clear, more pronounced rhythm that way
the way i would like it:
“because i
just
want
some
time
alone”
sincerely damien