*THE CROW BOY*

Dayonda
Author: Dayonda
Word Count: 280
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*THE CROW BOY*

A crow-child is forced to take a bath when his mother stands on the edge of the birdbath and scolds him till he does it right, while his father looks on from a nearby tree branch.

*THE CROW BOY* belongs to the following groups:

The Birds

Peeking out a window with the curtain half closed, I watched the mama order the young one into the bird bath. He’d wriggle around in the water, then look at his mom as if to say, “I’m done, can I please get out now?”

Mom would squawk at him till he crouched down again and nervously flipped his right wing a little. Again he was in trouble: “Do it again,” she apparently said.

After getting him to bathe his right side, she wouldn’t give in to his wails but instead made him turn around in the bath to flip his left wing and splash water up under it, over it, and put the wing-pit into the water. Then she made him duck his head under, all of it, beak, nose, eyes, and all. He had to dunk his head 3 times before Mama approved. Once he was clean enough to pass her inspection, she let him sit on the edge of the bird bath while she washed her face, ducking and dunking her head several times.

While Mom was washing up, the little guy set up a rucus until his father flew in with a tasty morsel to shove into the little one’s beak. That shut him up for a moment or two. Then all three of them began walking the yard, looking for goodies.

It was a very sweet and touching scene, but it was also funny because the little guy obviously didn’t want his bath at all!

If I’d gone for the camera, they’d have seen me and flown off. So all I can show you is this mental picture.

  • arteology

    arteology

    LOL delightful! dont feel bad, crows are not an easy breed to photograph…...but to witness scenes like this is bliss…..great story im smiling

  • Dayonda replied

    Thank you for your kind words regarding the “Crow Boy” writing! (0=

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Dayonda, Can just picture it…you painted a picture with your words…Hugs, Sally xxxooo

  • Dayonda replied

    Thanks, Sally. That’s exactly what I mean to do with my writing.
    And—thanks for the new Cat Groups!

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith

    Nicely written though Dayonda. I could se it as clear as if in a photo.

  • Dayonda replied

    Thank you Anne!

  • James Hennman

    James Hennman

    When you can write like this maybe you don’t need that camera after all…

  • Dayonda replied

    lolol—it’s the same skill, really. And I can’t give up the camera- I just bought a 50-300mm lens for the big one that sits by the bird window.
    I shouldn’t be making fun of a very lovely and sincere compliment- truth is, what you said pleased me very much. Thank you James.
    Dayonda

  • wildhorse

    wildhorse

    The mental picture is more in the mind, paints a Imagination that every one has forgotten how to use its great !!!!

  • Dayonda replied

    Wildhorse, how sweet of you to read my stuff! Building word-pictures has been a challenge to me,but it’s what I wanted to do, so I tackled it head-on. Thanks for the compliments, and I agree, we need to use our brain muscles more than we do these days. Dayonda

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