Forgotten Song
Forgotten Song belongs to the following groups:
Spirit of the Native American, Spiritual Art, The beauty of poetry, The Healing Journey, Up & Coming Writers and Wolves in ArtThis is a poem i wrote for dawndavies’ Forgotten song
so glad you like it dawn thank you, your image inspired me.
Forgotten song.
I watch her from a distance
There she sits, upon the hill
Silhouetted against the dying sun.
Whatever happened to their existence?
Whoever caused their blood to spill?
And now, what is done is done.
On the rise her head lifts
The breeze takes the howl adrift
As she cries, for the life of her pack.
The mournful sound of loss and grief
Is carried upon rustling leaves.
For what is done, is done
And there’s no going back.
For a moment, in the Golden haze
She sees me from where I stand
And from the depths of my heart I feel her pain.
With pride she holds my gaze.
Her Forgotten song goes unheard to some.
But I hear her all the same.
I close my eyes.
Her words are soft and wise.
One single tear adorns my cheek,
As she finds the words she wants to speak,
She tells me the story of the Forgotten Song.
With that, she appears before me
No longer is she upon the hill I see.
I reach down to touch her,
She is not real
But I feel the warmth and life in her fur.
She allowed me this moment of insight
Before she fled back to the night.
And suddenly,
Under my fingers was no longer the softness of her fur
But just the gentle spirit of her
And of the Forgotten Song.
For what is done, is done.
LoneAngel
simply beautiful
Dawnsky2 replied
thank you so much Angel, Dawns art work, just made the words flow, :)
dawndavies
Oh wow, laura, this is outstanding, thank you so much, I am honored by your beautifully written poem, a lady of many talents, dawnxx
Dawnsky2 replied
aww, you are sweet, thank you so much dawn, i am very honored to to be able to write for your poem, the words just came to me after looking deeply at Forgotten song. :)x
dawndavies
aww thank you so much laura, you should feel very proud of this, i know i am,dawnxx
Susan Bergstrom
Well done…both pieces!!!!
Dawnsky2 replied
thank you from both of us Susan :)
Cherubtree
so lovely..brought tears to my eyes..
Dawnsky2 replied
oh i am sorry to make you sad,
this means the writing was good! hehe
thank you Cherub :)
Kim Calvert
Beautiful work Laura, the words and the image!!
Dawnsky2 replied
thank you so much from both Dawn and I Kim :)
Polly Peacock
This is just awesome and also, sadly true…Your words echo your love of the wild and nature as it should have been…What a fabulous tribute to Dawn and her beautiful artwork!! Another fav for me dear Laura!! xoxo!! :))
Dawnsky2 replied
aww Pol, thats so sweet, thank you ever so much,
I thank you from Both Dawn and I :)x
starbucksgirl26
Beautiful-this is amazing
Dawnsky2 replied
thats very kind, thank you so much Starbuck girl :)
tkrosevear
awesome collab ;) xoxox
Dawnsky2 replied
thank you very much Tk :)
SharonD
Beautiful writing laura
Dawnsky2 replied
thank you very much Sharon :)
Wendy Slee
this is heartfelt and beautiful writing…..I “felt” it deep within and saw your vision…..
Dawnsky2 replied
thats fabulous, thank you so much Wendy :)
Chelsea Allen
Wow. I repeat: WOW. I love the poem it’s so well written. A lot better than my whimpy poem about farming! I love the image as well.
Dawnsky2 replied
Thank you for your ‘WOW’ Chelsea, this is a very kind comment, and i think your poem on Farming is fabulous! :)
Songwriter
I am left with the heartache of a beautiful collaborated work and I pray that we can learn from the lesson you are showing and speaking. Thank you both so much.
Dawnsky2 replied
and thank you for such a beautiful comment Songwriter,, i thank you from both Dawn and I :)
CherrieB
Two great works that go so well together, inspireing and simply brilliant
Dawnsky2 replied
I thank you so much from both Dawn and i Cherrie,:)
Dawnsky2
dawndavies
it sure looks at home with your poem laura, many thanks again for the honor, dawnxx