The Sioux Warrior

Dawnsky2
Author: Dawnsky2
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The Sioux Warrior

The Sioux Warrior by Maureen Bloesch

The Sioux Warrior belongs to the following groups:

Spirit of the Native American and Up & Coming Writers

I was very honoured when Maureen Bloesch asked me to collaborate with her for the Native American Challenge

This night was calm and still. Above the treetops the stars spoke to one another of times past. The Moon Spirits silver light rested on my shoulder and bathed my soul. Alone was I and becoming at one with the nature.
The orange flicker of the small fire I had made to help me on my quest, held my eyes at its centre. A warm homely feeling fluttered in my stomach and crept slowly to my heart, where it stayed. The crackle and spit of damp wood burning comforted me, my shoulders loosened, I sighed deeply.

Resting softly on the palm of my hand was the Crow feather, many of the barbs had parted, rendering it aged and worn. Gently, between my thumb and fore finger I stroked these barbs. Never would they sit together again, but its appearance didn’t matter, it was what it stood for that mattered to me.

I closed my eyes and reflected upon a distant memory, one that seemed to be all around me, one that drifted silently upon a fond breeze, and hovered above me with the strength and gracefulness of the Hawk. I knew I would stay strong.
With the warmth in my face and the smell of my little fire, I was whisked away and a memory brought to the fore. In that instance I had gently slipped, to a Nation elapsed.

Upon that fond breeze, furthermost from my minds eye, and shrouded in the finest mist, came a fluttering of feathers. I watched in anticipation as they grew ever closer, ever larger. The Crow feather in my hand became warm to hold, and trembled as if in expectancy of meeting old friends.
Across the mountains to the left, came the familiar light air that would touch my soul; it weaved toward me, with gentle strokes that settled on my face. With it, came the sound of drums beating the rhythm of life, carried on timeless winds.

For me the beating drums seemed distant, yet so near, and in my very soul I knew what they were. They were the many beating hearts, of my Ancestors. They would come to Guide me, to walk with me, to teach and show me. A tender blanket of protection draped over my being, wrapping around my very spirit, keeping me warm and safe.

The Forest of tallest trees heard the beating drums and answered in hushed voices, promising to shelter, promising to provide food and sustain the life within.
Wild horses on the plain heard them. In one huge body they galloped at great speed, the thundering of their hooves echoed in the stillness of this night. Their power emanating from the great strength held in their bodies and spiritual souls.
I glanced down; the coolest most refreshing water touched my bronzed toes. I traced its source with my minds eye. Along the river, women gathered precious water for their families to drink, to nourish their crops and water their animals. More valuable to them was this water,
The Water of Life, than the yellow stone often found in the river. Before my very eyes the crystal waters, so pure and true, turned red. Despair filled my heart and as if something knew I was not ready for this insight, the water instantly became fresh and clear, all but my face and the Crow feathers in my hair reflected upon the rippling surface.
Behind me, in their rustling spirit voices, the trees warned me of a predator, the wolf. I turned to see his cunning eyes lock upon me. He held his head low. I felt sure he thought I would not see him hiding there, but I did. As by some strange understanding that had passed between us, he turned and walked away. Stopping only once, to look back at me.

All of a sudden the mists came. The Moon began to fade. The horses thundered away into the dust created by their many hooves, the women walked from the river and became absent. The Forest around me became silent and the Hawk flew back to distant skies.
The only thing that was left was a true feeling of my Ancestors, standing at my side for always, to Guide me, to walk with me and show me.

With heavy lids, my eyes opened. My fire had all but gone, just a solitary wisp of smoke slowly ascended, I watched it curl around unseen objects before dispersing.
Through the trees the Sun rose, bringing the earth below alive once again.
A new day had begun, I cradled the insights of a Nation elapsed in my innermost core.
I still held the Crow feather gently in my hand, but now instead on just one, I had two.

  • ellamental

    ellamental

    This rocks my Friend Thank you for sharing the talent!!

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    thank you very much indeed ellamental, i really enjoyed writing this, :)

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    Brilliant writing gorgeous, suits the image so well, tells a profound story indeed xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    thank you carlotta, Maureen gave me just a few words to use in the piece,, i hadnt seen the image at all until i had finished the writing, we think they go very well together :)

  • Debbie Sandersfeld

    Debbie Sanders...

    wow, what a great piece of writing. very well done.

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    thank you very much Debbie :)

  • krafty

    krafty

    Fantastic words Laura…well done to both of you.xxxxxxxxx

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    thank you very much Cyn, from the both of us ): x

  • Susan Bergstrom

    Susan Bergstrom

    Stunning, wonderful collaboration!

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    thank you very much indeed Susan :)

  • Rosemaree

    Rosemaree

    Fantstic work Laura… It touched my heart… It sent me walking… will write to you of it…

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    so glad you liked it Rosemaree,,cant wait for your bm :)

  • Rosemaree

    Rosemaree

    This one is a shy dancer… He has a connection to the ancestors it is reflectd in the moon…

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    did you get my bm?
    thank Rosemaree :))

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    a fantastic written piece, sure goes with this wonderous picture,well done, laura,dawnxx

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    and you know what? Maureen did not show me the art work before hand, she just gave me certain words to use,, and this is what happened, so happy it went very well with Maureens great work.
    Thanks Dawny :)x

  • Samantha Dean

    Samantha Dean

    What a fantastic story!!! So well written!! Gorgeous artwork as well!! Well done!! :-)

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    thank you so much Samantha :)

  • Maureen Bloesch

    Maureen Bloesch

    dawnsy2, I am so elated of how you made my art come to life….
    Thank you :>)xx

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    thanks Maureen, i really enjoyed writing this piece and it has spured me to write some more,, thank you for the opportunity:) xx

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    Awesome so well written. Kudos.

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    thank you very much indeed Barnsis :)

  • PaulAlbert

    PaulAlbert

    Communicative read, being in touch with the creative spirit, requires focus, deserving recognition , most appreciative that you have colloborated with this artistive soul. Enjoyed ! paul

  • Dawnsky2 replied

    Thank you very much indeed Paul, i am glad you enjoyed it :)

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