My Moonlit Lake

Dawnsky2
Author: Dawnsky2
Word Count: 163
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By the lake am I,
I cannot see it
for the hour is late,
but I can smell the freshness
and I can hear the water
lap gently to the bank.
The rush of the willow beside me
speaks, in hushed whispers.
Soon I will see,
see the lake.

I hold my legs as I sit,
upon my blanket spread
with my chin rested upon my knees,
I come here often to see the magic.
I watch for the moon.

The breeze coming in from the south
and pushes the cloud from shrouding the moon,
I anticipate the view.
And all of a sudden
she shines down,
down upon her lake
and for a short while
I see,
I see the vastness spilling out before me,
illuminated by moon light,
in silver and white,
magical and enchanting,
but cold and deadly.

By the lake am I,
watching liquid silver ripple,
until,
until the night breeze
once again
brings the clouds,
over my moon.

My Moonlit Lake

I wrote this ages ago, i thought i had put it on Bubble but i hadn’t..

My Moonlit Lake belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical
  • janeymac

    janeymac, 2 months ago

    fantastic!!!

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee, 2 months ago

    oh MY! I was so there with you…. your writing took me there completely…
    Like the most beautiful meditation…...thank you!

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2, 2 months ago

    oh wow,, you are very welcome Wendy,, thank you so much..:)

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2, 2 months ago

    thank you very much Jane :)

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams, 2 months ago

    I was there too Laura..thanks for journey.well done.

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2, 2 months ago

    oh you’re very welcome Cyn :)

  • liesbeth

    liesbeth, 2 months ago

    Well then it gets to be a crowd soon.. for you had me with you also… in vision and emotion.
    thank you indeed..

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2, 2 months ago

    hehe,,,, i think i shall take a midnight feast for us all,, hehe,, thank you so much liesbeth :))

  • SharonD

    SharonD, 2 months ago

    Lovely writing Dawn.

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2, 2 months ago

    thank you ever so much Sharon :)

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lake, night, sky, poem and moon