Bumbles ride,1. by Laura Redmond
Laura Redmond

Bumbles ride,1. by

image to accompany a series of poems i am writing.

I am sitting on the soft green moss
And I bet you wanna know why?
Oh the day I‘ve had,
It’s brought a tear to my eye.
Today I rode on a tortoise shell,
I wanted a lift to the wishing well,
I go there every Sunday morning,
with a very shiny penny.

I thought today, it would make a change
since my wings were feeling kind of strange,
to catch a lift with Trevor.
On I hopped
And off we popped, down the bumpy lane.
We started off at a very slow pace
perfect, after all,
we weren’t in a woodland race.
I lazily yawned
glancing at the meadow beyond.
From under the mushrooms the fairies waved
the babies rolled and laughed and played,
what a glorious day.
The Butterflies fluttered by,
bees buzzed from flower to flower,
and the sun was high
in the pale blue sky,
it was very pleasant for mid July.
I was happy to sit on Trevor’s hard shell
thinking I’d have a nice ride, to the wishing well.

But poor old Trevor trod on a stone
it was bad enough to make him moan.
He picked up his leg and gave it a shake,
but now we know this was a mistake.
I toppled over to the right
I nearly fell off, but not quite.
The cane slipped from my butterfingers
clattering on his shell, like firecrackers.
I turned to grab it, but I missed
and it bounced off of my boney wrist
right on top of Trevor’s head!
And that was it.
Trevor got scared
and I wasn’t prepared.

Off we flew up the lane, at thirty miles an hour
I didn’t know he would pick up speed
once we rounded the corner!
We must have been doing forty-five
when we shot passed Mrs. B Hive.
I hadn’t realized he could go this quick
I decided it must be his party trick.

As the wind rushed by my face
I wondered how my hat had stayed in place.
By now my bum was getting sore
and my feet were dragging in the floor,
all of a sudden he jumped a twig
I don’t know why, it wasn’t big!
But that was enough to send me flying
my eyes popped open, and I considered crying.
I clung to the front of his lumpy shell
and then we passed the wishing well!

Up ahead the pond grew nearer
I could see the ripples, become clearer and clearer!
I closed my eyes as I don’t like water
I don’t wash very often, not as much as I oughta!
The next thing I knew is that Trevor had stopped
and straight over his head I had popped.

I found out later that he can’t swim
and so now I will have to teach him,
But for now, I’m sitting on the cool green moss,
and drying my poor soaking wings
thinking about the days comings and goings.
Next Sunday I will go to the wishing well
But certainly not on Trevor’s shell!

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About Laura Redmond

Laura is a self-taught book cover artist.Having started her career as a visual-merchandiser,creating displays for fashion shop chains, Laura has developed her artistic talent and gone on to produce some wonderful artwork ranging from pencil sketches and oil paintings all the way through to computer designed works of art. Some of which are displayed here.
Laura is now a published Author, book cover artist, creating book cover images for marvellous authors.

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poem, children, book, ride, tortoise, bumble, stories, laura, dawnsky2

Comments

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omaralmost 3 years ago

    Perfect match for your written work…awesome!!!!!!!! xooxoxxoo

  • thank you ever so much Sally :)

    – Laura Redmond

  • cherylc1
    cherylc1almost 3 years ago

    So adorable and enchanting!!!

  • thats very kind, thankyou cheryl :)

    – Laura Redmond

  • flame7
    flame7almost 3 years ago

    These are wonderful :)

  • thats very kind thank you Kelly :)

    – Laura Redmond

  • Dawn B Davies-McIninch
    Dawn B Davies-...almost 3 years ago

    oh this is cleverly done laura, its just how i imagined it would be from your fantasit poem, well done again,dawnx

  • Cheryl Dunning
    Cheryl Dunningalmost 3 years ago

    oh he’s so cute..excellent work..and fantastic poem to go with it

  • thanks ever so much Cheryl, :)

    – Laura Redmond

  • Arla M. Ruggles
    Arla M. Rugglesalmost 3 years ago

    Outstanding work!

  • thank you ever so much Arla :)

    – Laura Redmond

  • Rainy
    Rainyalmost 3 years ago

    This is lovely work!

  • thank you so much Rainy :)

    – Laura Redmond

  • LoneAngel
    LoneAngelalmost 3 years ago

    wonderful image

  • thank you so much Angel :)

    – Laura Redmond

  • cougarfan
    cougarfanalmost 3 years ago

    Fabulous Work Hun:))))))xoxox

  • thank you Trena :)

    – Laura Redmond

  • Jo Hoden
    Jo Hodenalmost 3 years ago

    Love it….xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • hehe,, so glad you like it Jo, thank you very much :)x

    – Laura Redmond