salt stung

And so I believe
all that was screamed in my face
so selfish this man
cold eyes become this disgrace

Waited for the privilege
sit down and speak of your issues
show us emotion
please cry, we’ve brought lots of tissues

Okay, now fuck off
just take care on the way
come back again
but just don’t forget to pay.

So push harder
I can’t see this road any more
salt stings my eyes
as I feel my right foot on the floor

Don’t care for the brakes
have forgotten where I’m going
keep a safe distance
from the baggage that I’m towing


davrberts

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Comments

  • Shoaib .
    Shoaib .about 1 year ago

    oh wow def feeling this piece
    the foot to the pedal.. feeling torn and reckless
    be well man
    great writing

  • Shoaib you are very kind indeed, thanks very much

    – davrberts

  • CreativeKitty
    CreativeKittyabout 1 year ago

    wow this is so powerful and intense, great write.

  • thank you so so much Jenn, very kind as always

    – davrberts

  • Ami  Wilber-Mosher
    Ami Wilber-Mo...about 1 year ago

    Great piece Dave! I had to stop and reread it a couple times. Good job.

  • thank you so much Ami, your comments are so kind

    – davrberts