Fire in her Eyes

David Roman
Author: David Roman
Word Count: 308
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Fire in her Eyes

A story about a little lady with fire in her eyes and ready to spill blood!

“she came out fighting and I got hot and took her straight to my bed!
That little honey from Painted Post could really knock em dead”
She was a two fisted fighter with blood in her eyes and fire coming out her nose.
And she would wrap her legs around you and make you do the loving all night long!
I never had a filly that could ride me like that lady she could really hold her own.
She would buck me to the left and buck me to the right she would really ride that pony all night!
Then when she thought that I was finished she would wrap her arms around me and say come on daddy lets see whats ya got tonight!
And then she’d buck me to the right and buck me to the left and then I would start to cry out loud.
Then she’d look me in the eyes and say that aint all ya got because this ol gals gonna work that bone!
And then she’d kick me in the side and say come on baby ride and lets see what I can get out of you tonight!
And then she’d buck me to the right and buck me to the left and then I thought that I was gonna die!
Then she took a little breather and kicked me in the side and said this baby’s ready to go!
Then she got up on her knees and gave me just a squeeze and then she started a long slow ride.
She road me to the front and then road me to the back and then she started to get really hot and then she looked me deep in the eyes and said baby your getting ready to die!
Now lets ride mother fucker ride!!

  • inge

    inge

    wauw i’m happy i’m not that pony haha, good on ye!

  • David Roman replied

    Here come the sheriff to get that gal! I thought that would wake you up Miss Inge!!LOL

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    Ride on stallion, go, go, go, hot stuff hon xxxxx

  • David Roman replied

    Oh Miss C I thought that would get ya HAHAHA shes a real rider baby!

  • inge

    inge

    haha i good story to wake up, feeling better than yesterday allready, off to work now, see u !!

  • David Roman replied

    Glad you liked it Mis Inge see ya later

  • Danielle Davenport

    Danielle Daven...

    Holy Smokes!!!! lol…. whew, I think I need a cold shower!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Glad you liked it miss D! LOL

  • karen Bradshaw

    karen Bradshaw

    wow now thats agression…..not for me…...well wrote my friend xxx

  • David Roman replied

    Hey Miss K glad you like it not aggressive in awe of her womanly power!

  • Devalyn Marshall

    Devalyn Marshall

    It’s hot in here!!! Great writing!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Oh Miss D I know the fire engine is on the way to cool you down baby!LOL thanks Miss D glad you like it!

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    wow !! love it!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Miss janeymac glad you like it!

  • Romo

    Romo

    Well I guess this one was appropriate to read after reading field of honor which brought me to tears….this one brought me to laughter….excellent writing…..ride on my friend:)

  • David Roman replied

    LOL glad you liked this Ms Romo thanks

  • KristineNora

    KristineNora

    WoW

  • David Roman replied

    Yea wow !LOL

  • KristineNora

    KristineNora

    wait I just read this again LOL my comment … I stand by it LOL

  • David Roman replied

    Me too!! Wow!

  • Jewd

    Jewd 21 days ago

    yeehaa… cowboy…ride on…good stuff…

  • David Roman replied 7 days ago

    Thank you my friend ain’t nothing like a good rider. Glad you like this.

  • meredithjean

    meredithjean 7 days ago

    Did you see FF Cupola’s ‘The Black Stallion’ years ago? That dark equine beauty had ‘fire in her eyes and smoke comin’ outa her nose’. Your rider is redder and scarier – rev’m up little boy and ride! Yeeehah!

  • David Roman replied 7 days ago

    Oh here comes the holidays so I think some where in the world there will be some riding going on. So little lady get ready you never know when your gonna have to mount up.LMAo
    And Ride em baby!!!!
    Thanks your comment makes me smile.

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