Started off sunny and ended up Gray
This is a little tune I came up with as I was riding down the road today thinking about a broken heart! Not mine!
Today wasn’t just another day as I lay in my bed watching sun beams dancing on the walls!
I wake up bright and early with the thought of seeing you first thing on my mind.
As I stroll down the hall with a little smile and my heart beat one hundred miles an hour.
I got a whole day of things that we gonna do!
Starting off with this ring that I bought for you.
I am gonna get down on my knees and do it right!
I am gonna say all the things I could never say.
like you mean all that life has to me, and the stars in the sky don’t shine as bright as my love for you!
I am gonna say all the things like you want me to and then baby I am gonna ask you to marry me tonight!
Oh my phone is ringing I hope its you my heart beats racing out my chest as I run to get the phone thats down the hall!
I can’t wait to say all these things to you that I love you baby and want you to be my wife.
Your crying baby on the telephone what’s that your saying to me baby as I listen to ya on the telephone?
Slow down baby I cant hear a word ya say.
Take a breath baby an just say it to me.
What’s that baby that your saying to me?
Oh no baby you cant be saying that to me!
Oh no baby say it ain’t true.
Ya wanna leave me for somebody new?
I thought ya told me that ya loved me just last night as I held you in my arms as you cuddled up close to me!
And now I am standing here listing to ya tell me that ain’t true that you met somebody new!
Tell me baby what I am hearing coming out your mouth just ain’t true!
My day started off sunny and ended up Gray.
My day started off sunny and ended up gray.
My baby turned this day into a thunder storm.
My baby told me that she’s leaving me for someone new.
I never saw a thing that would tell me we were through.
I guess sometimes you don’t see the writing on the walls until they fall!
My baby told me that her heart was with another man, I never thought she had time to even meet someone new!
She went to work I picked her up and we came home and made love all night long.
I never ever saw this moment coming in my whole darn life!
My day started off sunny and ended up Gray.
I never saw this day coming in a million years.
I had it all planned out what we were gonna do.
I was gonna do it the way I was suppose to do!
I was gonna get down on my knees and ask you to marry me.
My day started off sunny and ended up gray
My day started off sunny and ended up gray!
My baby turned this day into a thunder storm.
My baby told me she was gonna leave me for someone new!
dairygirl08
this is fantastic, full of emotion, and very powerful as well,
David Roman replied
Thank you dairygirl glad you like it can you sing?
inge
poor guy happy it’s not you:) nice work
David Roman replied
Thank you Miss Inge I was thinking this would be a cool country tune for some hunk to sing!
Susan Grissom
Hi David,
Your such a fine poet.songwriter. I think you should move to Nashville.
David Roman replied
geeeee thank you Miss S ;))
dairygirl08
your very welcome, lol, no I can not sing very good sorry, hubby can so can my daughters
David Roman replied
There we go now we got a group! LOL glad you liked it I added a few lines more.
See ya and thanks for coming and thats quite an honor you liking my work!
inge
if you hear my sing you will cry haha
David Roman replied
poor thing thats too bad I would think such a pretty bird could sing a cat up a tree!
janeymac
so tender , and full of hurt as well ! lovely writing David !! Jane
David Roman replied
Thank you Jane, Conway Twitty could do justice to this little number!
janeymac
yes I reckon he could ! you put the words done so well !! fantastic. Jane
inge
haha maybe the other way around:):):)
dairygirl08
You are very welcome, and I do really like it, been through this kind of thing, via phone and face to face, not nice but such is life, you just have to move on and to hell with the other person because at the end of the day it is their loss!!
David Roman replied
Yea I guess so but this was a silly song for me as I was driving an listing to some country music so it popped into my mind!
So I jumped on it while I could! I have so many songs that come and I usually dont write them down in my mouth and out like that and forgotten so I decided to be a little different this time!
Glad your settled in and dont need to be on that phone!LOL see ya
Kim Bender
Wow…............ could be a nice country song!!! Really cool!!!!!!!!! Just like it happens in real life.
David Roman replied
Yea Baby how many times you make that call you heart breaker!
Glad you liked it Miss B
Kim Bender
Never Mr David! I bet you are more that type, LOL !!!!!!!
Danielle Daven...
Hi David… you should definitely write down what ” pops” into your head from now on..lol Now this is something everyone can agree on since weve all had broken hearts….. great job!
David Roman
I guess your a heart breaker too Hummm miss D ? Glad you liked it ! I guess your right but I’am too lazy to always pull a pen and paper out! And then when I get home I forgot the song and just say oh well ya should of had a pen with ya dummy!LOL
Ann Morgan
For a minute I thought this really happened and on top of everything else. That would be way too much. Anyway read the posting about all the brewhaha. CRAZY if you ask me..like the poem. my relationships usually never got that far and I got dumped 99% of the time. Admitting this in public is stupid. I don’t care. I’m 52 and happy for the first time so…......
David Roman replied
HAHAHA thats cool ! Naw I was riding my car today and thought of this as I was thinking to a song I heard! But it came on so I just went with it glad you like it!
And thanks for coming to visit!
karen Bradshaw
What a sad poem…... but has happened to many a person…well written my friend xx
David Roman replied
Yea its suppose to be a country western doozie ! Kinda Sad or Ray Charles would of been nice or Willie Nelson hell anyone come on and sing my song!
Glad you like it my friend!
Kelly J
BTDT…. sad but true… or not…. :)
David Roman replied
It was your last boyfriend who told me that so I made a story about him!LOL
Well its just a story we have all heard at one time or another right? I know someone broke my heart on the telephone years ago!
Kelly J
At least it’s not these days – it would be by text!!!
David Roman replied
Yea I guess your right Miss K always ready to bet me to it you little devil!
Kelly J
No!! It is real… victim of that myself!!!! LMAO
David Roman replied
I guess you were making the phone call to him you heart breaker!
Humm I bet I can find a Kelly song crying on the phone! No texting on the phone!
Racheli
So sensitive, sad, what a creative talented writer, i don’t like the situation, but i like how you submit a story.
David Roman replied
Well some times situations are what they are and its better we look at them as true to life as we know!
And I cant sell a story about some upper middle class woman having a fight as her man gos to work on the morning commute now can I as hes sitting in the window of the train taking him to his manhattan office 40 storys off the floor hes thinking of what he did to his wife as he passes each and evey floor!
From the first to the 30th hes been a jerk and from the 31st to the 40th hes trying to make up for what he did!
By the time hes at the 40th hes bought her a new mink coat and on the way down hes bought her more! See thats a real bummer!LOL
Hummm maybe I can do a piece called 2upper class love”
YEA MRS R I THINK THAT WILL WORK!
Kelly J
Nah.. you couldnt ! :)
David Roman replied
We’ll see but to avoid a law suite I need a release that your allowing me to use you in a story poem ok?
And I might pop you in a sweet little thing! LMAO well I dont know about sweet but it’ll have you laughing!
See ya Miss K
David Roman replied
We’ll call it Kellys story with a twist! See ya
Devalyn Marshall
Loved it!!
David Roman replied
Sounds like and Waylon song! I like it too glad you do too!
mrscarlotta
I could hear Tammy Wynette singing this spectacular piece, brilliant hon xxxxx
David Roman replied
Thank you Miss C I was in a writing mood that day so it got a little crazy but I like it too!
Romo
I think this may make a great Blues tune…..love the blues:)
Aurora Pintore
VERY BEAUTIFUL DAVID !!!!!!
David Roman replied
Thank you thats so kind of you! Thanks for your comments an coming by today!