The Room by DavidROMAN
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The room was silent you had long gone.
But the smell of you lingered on.
The room it breath a quiet sigh when you shut the door.
A tear some would say as if a room could cry.
Your spirit filled the room with joy.
It gave a lifeless place new meaning.
Your voice filled its walls with music.
And as you sang it hummed along with you.
As heads swayed to your melody.
This room once a lonely place had a heart again.
And so it hummed a tune with you.
The lights turned low to reflect the mood.
As teardrops slowly fell.
And like the mood in this room it held them in its arms.
The room was just four cold walls till you came.
And as the evening carried on its walls began to breath.
To come alive with the life you gave to it.
As heads swayed from side to side the room came to life.
It breathed anew with voices in the air.
And as the evening came to an end.
As the lights began to fade.
As the doors finally closed.
And you had long gone home.
I heard a sigh one last time as I turned the lights off
I thought I heard one final tear.
And then I closed the door.

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clematis, blue clematis, flower, plant, natire, poem, poetry, david roman

Comments

  • Redviolin
    Redviolin9 months ago

    Wow…you can really write…and capture the complete beauty of the flower..raising it to high art

  • You think so I am still not too sure but I like to practice so maybe one day I will know what I am doing.
    The flower I photographed with my phone at my car garage.
    Not bad Glad you like them my friend thank you

    – DavidROMAN

  • LudaNayvelt
    LudaNayvelt9 months ago

    beautiful poem and image , David

  • Thank you Luda thats very kind how are you?

    – DavidROMAN

  • lisameryl
    lisameryl9 months ago

    Beautifully photographed and written!!!

  • Lisa thanks a lot

    – DavidROMAN

  • LudaNayvelt
    LudaNayvelt9 months ago

    I am fine , had couple days off and back to work now.

  • sharlee
    sharlee9 months ago

    So pretty Mr. D !

  • Thank you Ms S thats very cool and a fav too.

    – DavidROMAN

  • Valerie Anne Kelly
    Valerie Anne K...9 months ago

    Exquisite sweetheART a fab fave* & google+d ;~} Valz

  • Thanks a lot Ms V

    – DavidROMAN

  • Bev  Wells
    Bev Wells9 months ago

    wow lovely shot

  • Not bad for my phone glad you like them.
    Thank you

    – DavidROMAN

  • Val Spayne
    Val Spayne9 months ago

    From your phone! Brilliant.

  • All my last 20 or 30 flowers have been from my phone enjoy and thanks

    – DavidROMAN

  • Betty Smith_Voce
    Betty Smith_Voce9 months ago

    This is is particularly beautiful David…very lingering in thought.

  • Yes it has a soul the room we never think about that moment when the walls warm up and move with us as we glow in the room. And it becomes one with us a part of the event.
    So came the poem made me think about the things that we forget.
    Anyway glad you like it thank you Betty.

    – DavidROMAN

  • Heloisa Castro
    Heloisa Castro9 months ago

    lovely capture

  • Thank you Ms H thats quite nice

    – DavidROMAN