"Shake someone"

David Roman

"Shake someone"

What the hell is going on people dying every minute!
I sit an try to understand what the hell is wrong!
When grown men continue fighting for too many years!
An no one seems to want to say enough of this madness!
So I sit and look an shake my head and ask my friends what do they think?
An we all seem to come up with the same answer… that this shit is sick!
I look at all the tiny ones that live where I do.
An then I really want to cry when I think of all the little one that have died, an will never know the world an learn to play baseball.
Or sit out in the front yard with a friend and eat ice cream as their little sister learns to ride a bike.
This really pisses me off that some men don’t care enough to say ok this is enough!
So this is my poem.

“Shake Someone”
I really want to run an say what the hells is wrong!
When people kill one another in the name of god.
When bombs are dropped on one another for so many years.
I want to shake someone and say what the hell is wrong?
Who is the person in control thats making these decisions.
I’d like to shake you until your head fell off and someone smarter took over!
Who is the one that said we need to fight and kill one another?
For what their silly ego.
Why can’t they simply say ok this is enough of this !
I’d like to find you an shake you until your head fell off an someone smarter took over!
Its time to make peace and stop all this killing!
Can I shake that into your stupid head?
This hate has gone on for so long its part of their creation.
Hate and more hate seems the way this can’t be all there is.
When will they say look at me I am fighting like my father.
An his dad did the same thing too.
And his dad did it too!
Look at us the human race full of hate an greed.
An in the end who suffers more than our little ones!
We teach them all our virtue’s that some mens lives don’t mean a thing.
An soon they learn to do the same and drop a couple bombs.
Is that the answer ask a child…
Even they know that its wrong.

As of today 555 dead and 2,750 wounded!

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"Shake someone" by David Roman
"Shake someone" by David Roman
  • Romo

    Romo

    Gorgeous flower…and a very powerful poem…hopefully someday we can all live together with all our differences in peace.. in the mean time all we can do is speak out…....peace, love and light:)

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Romo thats nice of you to comment!

  • mikequigley

    mikequigley

    lovely capture and words-
    “Where have all the flowers gone- long time passing”?????????
    Best wishes mq

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Mike good to see ya an I like the new look my friend.

  • helene ruiz

    helene ruiz

    stunning ! absolutley stunning beauty at its best!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Helene thats very cool of you!

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    I was just thinking along these lines tonight, watching the news about the Gaza Strip. Those poor, poor children, and their poor parents. It’s heartbreaking, an anger making. All your poems, are great, David, but this kind of poem is your strong point. Very powerful and moving my friend. And the image is very beautiful, and has a distressed feel to it. Agnes xx

  • David Roman replied

    Score 530 to 5 and 1000‘s injured what a sick tally! I wonder who’s the sick one that thinks force is the answer!
    30 lb bombs Verses 500 lb bombs.
    500 meter area of coverage verses 10 meters of coverage!
    Complete block destroyed verses a wall!
    Tanks, Helicopters, F1 fighter jets,all the latest war weapons Verses Sling shots,no planes, no Helicopters, no tanks,out dated bombs and rockets and on foot!
    Seems a little unfair to me.
    Its so unfair I find it hard to keep my mouth closed!
    An the more I listen the more I hate!
    This is the effect of war.
    Glad you popped in my friend!

  • mimi yoon

    mimi yoon

    gorgeous capture david… i want to cup my hands and catch those petals as they fall…
    such fresh ones too…

    i watched a program on 2012 on history channel last night and a bit scared still…
    maya’s calendar ends on 12.21.2012.

  • David Roman replied

    Yea Miss MiMI the world is a mess full of fools running the place! Power money and thats all that counts!
    What happened to the good old days!
    Thanks for your comments!

  • kalaryder

    kalaryder

    Excellent words David, expresses my sentiments on war and killing in general. The photo accompanies the words well

  • David Roman replied

    Wasted energy and human life !
    An still we do it year in a year out all over the world! I guess we never learn where are the men of virtue?

  • Janis Zroback

    Janis Zroback

    I’m so pleased to see one of your beautiful photos again David…

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Janis good to see ya and happy New Year too!

  • Kate Adams

    Kate Adams

    Strong words David and they speak volumes…I remember sitting with my grandfather as he watched the BBC News about the wars in the middle east..it hasn’t changed from then to now… it has been going on for 100’s of years..it has been going on my entire life. Stunning image David!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Kate sad isn’t it! hate so strong there that it will take 100’s of years to heal the wounds! Maybe it will never heal!
    Makes me sad! Good to see ya an thanks for coming my friend!

  • Yool

    Yool

    Strong words my dear friend !!!!
    Love the crushed flower to go with the words…

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Yool well I don’t think they are strong enough but I don’t really want a fight on RB so I will just keep it light! Lets pray for peace!

  • handprintz

    handprintz

    If enough of us make the effort to do the shaking maybe someone will listen,beautifully written my friend and lovely picture

  • David Roman replied

    Too many people afraid to die for what they believe in not like the 60’s when they were up in arms determined to fight injustice! But I believe in shaking the system thats how we grow. Thanks for your comments my friend.

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    It’s madness and it just keeps on. More and more are becoming fed up!! Beautiful image and powerful poem David!! :>)

  • David Roman replied

    Yea it a sick situation and seems to be growing! I am really pissed an here in europe folks are really on the edge with what’s being done to these people with out a real army!

  • Ann Morgan

    Ann Morgan

    Welcome to the club sir!!!!! This has got to stop and the US is the only country that voted to keep it going. Makes you feel like you’re going to spit nails!!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Yep the gotta do their dirt before Obama comes in office they don’t really know what his view will be on this based on his attitude to conversation first! Bush gave them the green light I bet but isn’t telling us he’s done that! We will see many dead when the full story comes out! Its been said they are bombing anything that moves.
    An no one is talking about the land they are stealing and the settlements they are setting up that have kept this stuff going on and on.
    I wonder Why not? Why not talk about the issues and not the bombs its the issues that are the foundation for the bombs!
    Glad you stopped by my friend thanks!

  • Jane Keats

    Jane Keats

    It’s a tough world, that’s for sure. These times make me glad that at least my children are in the southern hemisphere, but if someone decides to use the bomb to end all bombs, well, then there is nowhere to hide! I applaud your writing and the beautiful image with it Mr Roman. Just keep spreading peace and happiness, one day maybe they’ll get the point.

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Jane is sad and we are lucky to live where we live.

  • Shanina Conway

    Shanina Conway

    I don’t understand it either David….it makes me angry, sad and as if we have failed in humanity 101.
    Our Govts sit back and allow this to happen, I’m angry, I’m sad I’m sick of our govt’s making decisions based on influence and not on what is right .......Sweet image though David;)

  • David Roman replied

    Humanity 101 yes thats a course we need to teach all these idiots with power and bombs! But they seem to be the movement of the times! hate, greed, and stupidity!
    Thank you my friend good to see ya.

  • karen Bradshaw

    karen Bradshaw

    Powerful words my friend, i dont understand whats going on in the world today, but every night i pray for world peace even though i know it will never happen in my life time but its a hope yo hang on to…... and i love the flower as always David well done xxx

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Ms Karen we are praying together for a better way to this mess but sadly its too deep and too much hate to see clearly on booth sides.

  • karen Bradshaw

    karen Bradshaw

    Oppps that should have said I like the pic….. well it is 3am and just in from work lol xx

  • Ann Morgan

    Ann Morgan

    By the by here is another bit of very scary info the US gov isn’t warninng the people about. go to this url please, if there is one thing you would do is please take a look/ listen to this short video on the Baltic Dryy Index.
    http://thegreendragon.ning.com/video/vital-critical-you-must

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Ann I will look.

  • Clive

    Clive

    Very, very powerful words David, I couldn’t agree more, wish I had thought of them…great shot of the flower also my friend

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Clive lets pray for a solution.

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    Lovely flower …. I bet it is sweet. Today I want only to think of the flower … tomorrow I will have more of voice perhaps … but not today.
    I do want you to know that I appreciate your talent for taking pictures. It is what makes me smile today. Thank you, David.

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Judi lovely flower isn’t it we see what happened with too much violence?

  • Farah M

    Farah M

    Divine! Love the warm green!

  • David Roman replied

    Me too, thanks a lot Farah !

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    So sad David ….........why is life so cheap and worthless /? poor babies have no future !
    Beautiful flower my friend ! Jane xx

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks a lot Janey Its too unreal to even understand this type of stress every day my whole life!
    What deep hate these people must have for the world.

  • Kasey Cline

    Kasey Cline

    WOW Mr SA! Have not seen you in awhile…Miss ya! This is beautiful and yes so sad! Love the color of the flowers!!! Hope you are well!

  • David Roman replied

    Alls well just busy but I will be posting again I am sure of that! Thanks for your kind words Ms K

  • Sharon House

    Sharon House

    Such tragedy in the world today David. I applaud your stance and appreciate your words, and so wish that the “power of one” may overcome.
    The sad reality of it all is, I think, that we are not going to see a change in our life time. I pray continually for peace and harmony throughout the world – to see an end to all this suffering, especially as you said, to the children.
    Wonderfully powerful words my friend and beautiful image to accompany.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Sharon may wiser men move in to the white house and help. But the reality is the machine has its spokes and they seem to support one another’s stupidity!

  • Kim Bender

    Kim Bender

    Excellent work Mr. David!! War disgusts me, as well as the people involved in it!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Ms Bender thats very nice and I know you understand the stupidity of war very well.

  • ajax

    ajax

    Image fits just right David we live in a delicate world.

  • David Roman replied

    Good word for crazy I like that !
    Thanks my friend for coming to visit.

  • David Roman replied

    Oh and the fav too ajax.

  • Di Jenkins

    Di Jenkins

    I want to shake them too! Applause!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Make you wanna scream its so stupid! Historical hate too deep to repair so it seems!
    Thanks for coming to visit me Di see ya soon.

  • ajax

    ajax

    An innocence can disappear…a life lost..a war too start…the earth to crumble…a war to finish as easy as this flower has dropped it’s petals… A delicate world my friend c ya xx

  • merlin67

    merlin67

    I am scared when I see and hear about such evil acts of aggression. It makes me sad to think that one human being can feel so much hatered towards another human being. Your words are very moving David – and I wish your voice was bigger – to make these governments sit up and listen. It is indeed a very fragile world that we live in

  • David Roman replied

    well its getting worse it seems every where you look people are out of control!
    Thanks for your comments M67 maybe someone is listening!

  • Kim Bender

    Kim Bender

    This is so sad! Watched CNN…............looks like to me they try to kill all the people of Gaza!!!!!

  • David Roman

    David Roman

    I think they think because the Hamas was elected democratically that all the people who live there are Hamas. An they state that the Hamas is the enemy so you figure it out what they are really saying. To me this is just an excuse to wipe out a race of people who have a right to freedom and self rule without settlers taking over their land and moving them out! This is the reason for bombs an everyone knows it but no one is talking about it!
    Very sad situation!!

  • Devalyn Marshall

    Devalyn Marshall

    Hi David, this is a beautiful image and wonderfully shot. Again another great written piece from you. I could not agree with you more! Hugz

  • David Roman replied

    Hey Ms Devalyn really good to see you and thanks for your support and great comments.

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    Mr D you never cease to amaze me with your brilliant talent of poems and shots, brilliant work my special friend xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Ms C I have a really cool poem called “good neighbors like you” its a really deep poem maybe too strong for here . But your comments as always are welcomed thank you . And thanks for the fav too thats very cool.

  • linda858100

    linda858100

    lovely

  • David Roman replied

    Thats cool! Thanks

  • LYN EVANS

    LYN EVANS

    Fabulous photo David and very powerful words/ There’s too much hate in the world. which drowns out the beauty sometimes.

  • David Roman replied

    Yes its a sad world we are living in when people find reasons to hate one another when there is so much we could do to lift each other up! And find joy in!
    Maybe with loving parents and faith in one another we can see the light! Lets hope so!
    Thanks a lot for your kind words

  • CATNIPMEOW

    CATNIPMEOW

    My little boy and I pray for peace every night…............
    To comfort our soldiers and theirs…........
    To comfort the Mothers who have lost their children
    .........and the children who have lost their parents
    So many painful tears ~
    What a beautiful tribute and photograph….........

  • David Roman replied

    Teaching that war is wrong and hate is wrong is a better way than forgetting that our children learn from us and remember these things long into their lives!
    Thank you for sharing this with your child hopefully he will lead others to a better world!

  • Nala

    Nala

    What a beautiful shot and the words . . well done my friend and so many good things been said
    Wonderful

  • David Roman replied

    Hey Alan good to see ya and thanks a lot ! Been busy but I was thinking of you hope alls well!

  • naturelover

    naturelover

    Am missing your work- I just love the flower it is so beautiful- but the poetry so sad and moving- beautiful work!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Oh my look what the cat brought in!LMAO well better late than never!
    Good to see ya my friend and thanks a lot for your kind comments!

  • KristineNora

    KristineNora

    Hello sweet David , hold my hand…we will walk together ..it will be o.k. ..........k

  • Nala

    Nala

    Hi

    Yes all well just first week back at work and not been on much . . hope all is going well and you getting the place nice . . . have fun

  • LudaNayvelt

    LudaNayvelt

    very nice David, at least at RedBubble we stay hopefully at peace no matter where I you from.

  • LudaNayvelt

    LudaNayvelt

    very nice David, at least at RedBubble we stay hopefully at peace no matter where I you from.

  • Anne Vis

    Anne Vis

    Awesome work, David and great text!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Anne its good to see you today!

  • Ken Boxsell

    Ken Boxsell

    Cracker of a shot David…....Such vivid colour

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Ken good to see ya hope you had a super New Year too!

  • LindaMcCarthy

    LindaMcCarthy

    You have expressed with passion what so many of us feel. Makes me physically ill to see the children suffer so- on both sides. Beautiful flowers and a wonderful angle, David.

  • David Roman replied

    10 days ago and just posted on my computer hummm have I been sleeping!
    Thanks a lot Linda thats very nice of you it seems money talks an children suffer. Maybe some cooler minds will wake that region up one day!

  • Yool

    Yool

    Great image and a valid question …..it is so pointless!!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Yes it is! But men and their egos will always be the wall between peace and happiness!
    Thanks Yool good to see you again you been missed!

  • Meeli Sonn

    Meeli Sonn

    Yes, what a hell is wrong with the world? Great poem and amazy photo.

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks a lot my friend yes its a crazy world we need a man with a vision or a woman who can right this ship! Who will step forward to help us?
    Thats my cry please someone help us!!!!!

  • blamo

    blamo

    In a word Brilliant …..............

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Blamo you make me blush!

  • SharonD

    SharonD

    Beautiful capture David.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you again Sharon you have been very kind to me! Thats wonderful make my day!

  • cherylc1

    cherylc1

    gorgeous flower and fabulous capture!!

  • David Roman replied

    hank you for the fav on my work today thats very kind.

  • AnnieD

    AnnieD

    Love the detail in this David! The colour of the petals is so lovely! The poem…so many true words David….

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you AnnieD I been busy on my Gallery /Cafe so forgive me for being late.

  • Mindy McGregor

    Mindy McGregor

    Wonderful work David!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Mindy been busy with my gallery so thanks again for your comments!

  • Nith

    Nith

    ooooh o wonderful works

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Nuth come back again!

  • Donna Chapman

    Donna Chapman

    stunning

  • David Roman replied

    oh you again ! Hummm thats great but you better be careful you might get addicted to my site!LOL
    Have you checked out my other sites?
    Go to my home page an you will find links to them you might like them too!
    Great to see ya Ms Donna

  • Kathy Reid

    Kathy Reid

    Very powerful words David, yes it’s time to make peace in this world. Lovely image to express your thoughts.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Kathy I wish this was a dream an we could snap out of it.
    What a mess our world leaders have put us all in. Leaders a strange word for men that wage war.
    Oh how I love my dreams a chance to get away to reality.
    Because this is madness!
    Thanks for coming to visit me an your welcome back anytime you need a place to smile.

  • elfie

    elfie

    Very poignant writing,,,lovely image…

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Elfie thats very kind of you!

  • bluerabbit

    bluerabbit

    Wonderful work! I love the color and the composition.

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