Dawn Breaks

David Roman

Dawn Breaks

This isn’t one of the flowers from my show and “Poems for Her” but will be in my book!

Dawn Breaks before my eyes and your six thousand miles away.
I see the fire start to rise right before my eyes.
I feel the flea’s inside my shirt biting down on me.
And I think about you in our bed safe without me.
Dawn breaks another day its been two years of this.
It seems to me that this dry place has made me hate the sun.
And as I look out on the horizon all that I can see, is sand forever and then forever more.
Dawn breaks before my eyes I wonder who has died.
I hear mortar fire far off in the hills I bet its them again… killing some of us.
Dawn breaks its night where you are.
Safe in our green land.
I can smell your hair and feel your skin as I look at this dry place.
I see your smile as I think about who’s that way out there?
Is it a friend or will I have to kill again today?
I killed a man yesterday as I thought of you.
My soul died with him as he fell to the sand, I wondered who he was!
But this is war so they say, so I hold on to that thought.
Without that thought I just might crack up!
I am not the kid who left your arms two long years ago.
You asked me when I was back on leave if I had killed someone?
What could I say but a lie “I never shot my gun”.
When every night someone’s been shot and I am dying with him too.
I am here to kill thats my job to protect my country’s needs.
But what they are I still don’t know but then I’am just a Joe.
Dawn breaks as you sleep I think of you each day.
Without you there I’d go insane this place is so unreal.
To think that children have no choice but to live with death each day.
And all I ever knew when I was young was will the Yankees win.
I look into their tiny eyes an ask what will they do when they grow up?
An then my captain says to me watch out they’ll kill you too!
I look at them so young so small their eyes have seen it all.
And all I ever knew back then was swimming in the pool.
I don’t think they’ve ever seen a pool or know even how to swim.
But one thing as I look at them I see that their old men.
Dawn breaks as I think of you another day has gone.
Its night time here I’ve watched the sun roll away again.
And with its setting in the sand I see a new night come.
And with the night gun fire comes from the hills again.
I watch as I see gun fires light coming from the hills.
My minds grown cold to its fire I’ve seen so much of it!
And deaths at times can be a friend just to leave this place.
Its so crazy here thank God you’ll never know such fear.
Thank God I have a safe place this night the shots are miles an miles away.
Next week it will be my turn to ride up in them killing hills, so this is my time to think of you!
I ask myself as I pray that I get home safe to you, oh lord don’t let me get killed by sniper fire tonight?
Nights are long in this place they never go by fast.
It seems to me that time is dragging it’s lazy ass.
Nights are lonely and days are long it seems like fifty hours in a day.
I scratch myself till I bleed these damn flea’s it seems are working with the enemy!
And now I see the sun come up again full of angry fire, as if its in protest of this hateful place.
The flea’s have made a meal of me each an every night.
It seems they are the only ones who will win this useless fight!
Dawn breaks and I wonder who has died?
One day closer till I am home safe in bed with you.

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Dawn Breaks by David Roman
Dawn Breaks by David Roman
  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    This flower is so absolutely beautiful, David. It is the most incredible color … Truly only God can make a flower like this.

    hmmm … what line???lol … Be patient!!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Oh and thanks a lot!

  • KristineNora

    KristineNora

    Yes..It comes together with great passion….the center spark hold much heat. ; ] k

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Ms K thats wonderful!

  • mimi yoon

    mimi yoon

    just gorgeous david… gorgeous

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you MiMI your so kind! And your shoes looked great on the cover yesterday! Congrats Butterfly!

  • mimi yoon

    mimi yoon

    thank you david… that piece was featured on the homepage twice… : ) lucky me~

  • David Roman replied

    Someone likes you my friend and your wonderful work!

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    This flower is beyond words beautiful. Totally mesmerising. I have never seen such a red before! I want to give the poem some time, and I have to go out for a while, so I will tell you what I think later. A very, very powerful image, David. Agnes:)))

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Agnes and enjoy your night out and don’t bring the music! Ry Cooder was cool!LOL see ya

  • Kate Adams

    Kate Adams

    Just beautiful David.!!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Kate

  • Romo

    Romo

    This is so very beautiful, both the flower and the poem….The flower is just gorgeous and the poem so full of heart which speaks for so many soldiers….love it:)

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Romo thats so kind of you glad you like it!

  • Tamme Marshall

    Tamme Marshall

    OMG – this is so incredible – the most beautiful red – you captured it so perfectly!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Tamme thats really cool of you and a Fav too thats super my friend! Thanks and the poem too?

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    This is a very powerful, very haunting piece of writing, David. The contrasts work so well – between home and desert, between tender feelings and despair, between the ideals and the reality. And the repetition of each new day makes it all the bleaker. How may young lives have been wasted in war, and I do not mean just those who died. Agnes:)))

  • David Roman replied

    Hey Agnes I just added a couple of new line I thought would make the person more real in his thoughts !
    The last line is new!
    And a few minor changes but its a lovely poem!
    Thank you for coming back to let me know what you thought!
    I see they kicked you out of the party again your home so early!
    Gotta stop bring the music!
    An I like your new photo too!

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    I’m glad you repeated that line. It ticks like a metronome. And the last line makes it so personal. I didn’t go to a party, I went late night shopping, and they had their own piped music. LOL. I’m glad you like my phot, and I’m glad you liked my flowers. Be warned, I might feel a tune coming on!! Agnes:)))

  • David Roman replied

    Oh my thats gonna force me to shut down! But I like Willy Nelson “Star Dust memories” I have the tape and just love it! Along with his songs with Ray Charles! Hot !

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    LOL. Yes, I love the stuff with Ray Charles. “Seven Spanish Angels” – no, not a link. Nelson is such a fine guitarist. But my hero is Dylan. And Paul Simon. Agnes:)))

  • David Roman replied

    Oh my Dylan an Paul Simon. Humm well your dating yourself my friend!
    Dylans cool Paul Simons cool too but they had their time wel Dylan is still doing it but Simons day I think was 15 years ago And I really liked him with Garfunkle once he left that was that for me.

  • mikequigley

    mikequigley

    lovely flower and story mq

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Mike thats nice of you to comment! Glad you like them both!

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    I’m sure Dylan and I will be very happy together! Now this is MUSIC

  • David Roman replied

    doesn’t play right plays with a lot of breaks !Galic Music? Hummm too much for me to understand!
    See your party choices Hummm you gonna be excluded my friend!lMAO

  • David Roman replied

    Your right that is a pretty flower!

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    Sorry. What’s a pretty flower??

  • David Roman replied

    My red flower up above you Gee how fast you forget must be the music!

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    No, I didn’t forget. It’s just that pretty is too small a word for that flower.

  • David Roman replied

    Oh my your gonna give me a big head! But thats ok I got broad shoulders!LOL

  • handprintz

    handprintz

    Gorgeous flower David love the colour,and the words very emotive wonderful work my friend x

  • David Roman replied

    Hey Roo girl glad you like my work you must be crazy!LOL Thanks Trudi

  • Mindy McGregor

    Mindy McGregor

    Beautiful work David!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Mindy thats sweet of you.

  • Janis Zroback

    Janis Zroback

    Gorgeous rose David…you sure know how to show them at their best…

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Ms Janis I wanted a blood rose with some white or yellow as hope so this was in my HD so it finally made it! Thanks a lot.

  • Kasey Cline

    Kasey Cline

    WOW David. This is intense. Both the flower and the poem…
    The Flower – BEAUTIFUL! Love that vibrant red (my favorite color)
    The Poem – Has so much power to it and tells such a deep story.

    Very very good my friend!

  • David Roman replied

    Oh Miss K thats really nice your lovely comments thank you!

  • Yool

    Yool

    A very moving poem …..and the flower is fantastic with this light shining from the blood red bloom.
    Chapeau my friend !!!!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Ms Yool thanks for the comments glad you like them both.

  • Di Jenkins

    Di Jenkins

    Blood & fire here !!! Wonderful, dramatic shot!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Di thats great!

  • June Ferrol

    June Ferrol

    Beautiful lighting David, my eye is drawn straight to the centre of the flower.

  • David Roman replied

    Hey June good to see you my friend thanks for the complement thats great!

  • eXposure

    eXposure

    gorgeous rich colour and beauty David.
    outstanding beauty as always :>)

  • David Roman replied

    Gee eX thats really nice good to see you thanks!

  • eXposure

    eXposure

    busy in the real world David ,
    training for new position in work as physio aid
    and alot happening!

  • David Roman replied

    Well good to see you and good luck on the job with your training I know thats stressful!
    See ya my friend

  • Nala

    Nala

    First of all i have to say thats a wonderful shot of a beautiful Flower…..... the words are well so moving and so true . . well done as always my friend . . . . .

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Alan thats cool of you!

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    The poem is excellent …touches the soul…...gorgeous colour , very fiitting for the poem….a beautiful flower ! lovely work David ! Jane x

  • David Roman replied

    Oh there you are my friend thank you for coming ! I was missing you! Thanks Janey for your lovely complements got me smiling!

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    Awwww so nice to be missed ! Jane xx

  • David Roman replied

    Well you leave deep foot prints my friend! Good to see ya

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    Thank you my dear friend ! good to see you too! It’s lovely to come to your page and see gorgeous flowers and read some very romantic poems and others that have an important message for many of us ! Janexxx

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Janey did you have your celebration yet I know its soon!
    And congrats again my friend!

  • karenanderson

    karenanderson

    and you find my work outstanding ! .. :0 ... this is so beautiful … I have tears in my eyes after reading this .. brilliant work ! :))

  • David Roman replied

    Oh my Karen thats such a lovely comment! Thank you and yes I find your work outstanding my friend quite moving!

  • Angi Baker

    Angi Baker

    Excellent capture of this beautiful flower…xxx

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you my friend hope you read the poem too!

  • Angi Baker

    Angi Baker

    yes, I read all of your poems and you do some excellent writing my friend…

  • David Roman replied

    Oh Angi you flatter me and I like that! Thank you my friend and this is David not Fred!LMAO

  • LudaNayvelt

    LudaNayvelt

    beautiful capture with some magic light and powerful poem. You are real talent,

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you my friend thats very kind God added the light I just borrowed the flower and his set up!LOL

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    Thank you David , we had a lovely lunch today , at our favourite restraunt . Our anniversary is on Tuesday, so I don’t get my pressie till then ! lol Janex

  • David Roman replied

    Well I knew it was soon !!

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    yes and thank you so much my dear friend for your wishes I really appreciate it ! janexx

  • AnnieD

    AnnieD

    Wonderful, wonderful image David and very powerful words!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Annie glad you like the writing too thats great!

  • ajax

    ajax

    David you’ve brought the two together so well….vibrant ,emotive. I like the way you’ve focused on the flower centre,new beginnings.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you ajax I was lucky ! LOL the writing was the hard part but it does fit with this flower of hope! Thank you my friend.

  • Ginger  Barritt

    Ginger Barritt

    Oh, David…..I haven’t been by to see you in a long time….Your gallery is absolutely glorious!!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thats very Kind of you thank you!

  • Susan Epps Oliver

    Susan Epps Oliver

    I like the idea of the soldier caught up in some battle of huge proportions….and not of his making…...and his immediate problem is the very smallest thing…..fleas. Such a great depiction of the general human state…...all mixed up :)

    The image is very beautiful too :)

  • David Roman replied

    You know Susan you amaze me with your insight! I was hoping someone would get that!LOL well congrats to you! An thanks for your kind comments too!

  • Anne Vis

    Anne Vis

    Fantastic shot, David! Great depth! I always find it very difficult to take photographs of red flowers, for some reason they seem to blur out … so I am very impressed! :-)

  • David Roman replied

    Gotta do it by hand or they will Blurr out my friend! It took me a lot of messed up photos until I got it right!
    But see there is away! Glad you like it its a sweet flower with a lot of power like that poem thanks for your lovely complements my friend!

  • Sharon Johnstone

    Sharon Johnstone

    The image is stunning, the poem very moving, thank you for sharing both David.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Sharon thats really nice ! And its especially nice about my poem thank you!

  • Shanina Conway

    Shanina Conway

    Beautiful poem David and I just love this image…stunning colour;)

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Shanina thats really cool of you

  • joanw

    joanw

    Outstanding rich color and perfect lighting!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Joan

  • Brian Carey

    Brian Carey

    Love the colours, great shot!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks a lot Brian thats great!

  • sweetscent62

    sweetscent62

    Stunning image David : ) this lady in red is gorgeous… Well done! Wen x

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you so much !

  • linaji

    linaji

    THIS IS ONE OF MY FAV OF ALL FLOWER SHOTS.. SOMETHING INCREDIBLY SENSUAL AND OLD AND NEW .. WOW!

  • David Roman replied

    Nice enough to hang on your tree My sweet?

  • naturelover

    naturelover

    Another excellent meaningful poem – and an incrdeible flower the colour is glorious!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Oh thank you my friend thats so kind of you! You really know how to make me like you!LMAO your a real sweetie! And glad you like the flower too!

  • Ken Boxsell

    Ken Boxsell

    Wow…......awesome shot David…...Superb lighting…...that centre is an instant eye grabber

  • David Roman replied

    Hey ya big Ape good to see ya here thanks a lot!
    And I see ya got good taste my friend! And thanks for the fav too!

  • LindaMcCarthy

    LindaMcCarthy

    Gorgeous flower, David, and the words to your poem are filled with authentic emotion. Impressive work!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Linda just trying to be honest to myself and my soul! The flower was Gods words!

  • Ingz

    Ingz

    Really lovely, the colour is so warm and absolutely stunning. Very beautiuful words.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you thats so kind and heart warming my friend thanks!

  • Aritheeagle

    Aritheeagle

    “The flea’s have made a meal of me each an every night.
    It seems they are the only ones who will win this useless fight!”

    Dave … this is great stuff…... and compliments !

    ~Ari

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you so much your making me smile! Maybe theres hope for me and my writing?

  • Diane Rodriguez

    Diane Rodriguez

    What a profound piece echoing the pains of war, and being so far away from home, I couldn’t ever
    imagine the pain to have to live with the knowledge of taking anyone’s life.
    Very well done David, both on the poetic story and the roses.

  • Louise Cooke

    Louise Cooke

    the large screen view of this is so rich, so velvety..just love the treatment of this David..superb!

  • Anne-Marie Ladegaard

    Anne-Marie Lad...

    Stunning rose, David! Love the little green buds too. :)

    I’ve had a rather hurried gaze at your awesome work – extraordinary and brilliant! Will take more time later to browse at it at my leisure with a nice glass of red!! My sister recommended I look at your work and I’m glad she did! :)

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    This is the last time I ask “What line?” ... Whew!! You need about an hour to get to the bottom of this … Mr. Sweet and Popular … :)

  • David Roman replied

    Oh the lines gone I took it away!
    Can u imagine what its like replying to all my comments ? Gee its a long day!LOL have a great weekend my friend!
    As you know I been in Berlin so my lifes been stressed out! But I am back will do Mars Attack 14 soon!
    Gotta kill someone off! Hummm who must go!

  • KcranmerArt

    KcranmerArt

    I see you haven’t lost your touch…Missed you my friend!

  • David Roman replied

    Missed you too ! Hope schools going well !
    And thanks for coming by and your lovely comments !
    See ya soon I hope!

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    I wanna LIVE!!!! :)

  • David Roman replied

    We will see but I think you might!

  • CanDuCreations

    CanDuCreations

    Beautiful red flowers with a great yellow center part

  • David Roman replied

    Hey Can thanks for the comments good to see ya again!

  • Geir Floede

    Geir Floede

    So very intence red with spot in red and yelllow. Beautiful

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks a lot Geir.

  • Archetipo

    Archetipo

    Hi David, great piece of art and poetry. Very nice!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Luca glad you like it! Good to see you again too!

  • rodsfotos

    rodsfotos

    A wonderful range of rich red colour tones in this beautiful floral close-up image, beautifully captured,
    Regards, Rod.

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Rod good to see ya and come on back again!

  • Antanas

    Antanas

    Lovely shot

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you A

  • kalaryder

    kalaryder

    David, this is one of your best and with such a beautiful flower – they compliment each other.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you my friend glad you like this one I do too!
    An the flower is a real winner!

  • Tamme Marshall

    Tamme Marshall

    My finger hurts from scrolling down the page ; P This is GORGEOUS!!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Hey Tamme good to see you love your new look! Thanks a lot for the complements!

  • helene ruiz

    helene ruiz

    absolutely phenomonal color! just excellent!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks a lot Helen your the color person so full of ideas! Thanks for coming to visit!

  • Meeli Sonn

    Meeli Sonn

    Great poem , veru good color of wild rose

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you thats very kind and yep its a wild rose quite lovely wasn’t it? I am glad you came come on back again!

  • Patricia Gibson

    Patricia Gibson

    this is really, really, really good!!! amazing colour!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Patricia thats really cool of you. Yea the colors were on that day could of been the morning coolness but it was quite lovely !

  • mare

    mare

    Incredible work…

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Mare thats very kind of you! Thanks for coming to visit my work!

  • LYN EVANS

    LYN EVANS

    A glorious shade of red here, this is such a beauty.

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Lyn for bringing me back to this flower it is a beauty! But what I really love is the Poem its so clear and moving hope you read it too!
    But thanks a lot for cominh to visit me!

  • LYN EVANS

    LYN EVANS

    I did read it David, what a talent you have. I must visit again.

  • David Roman replied

    Oh thats very nice now I can smile my writing means more to me than my fotos ! I can shoot so thats not the problem I just started writing poems so when people tell me they like that then your an artist you know what that means! So thanks a lot!

  • Sharon House

    Sharon House

    A hauntingly beautiful poem David. What a sad world to bring up our children of today.

  • David Roman replied

    Yes it seems to be the future! Things are too big and falling apart all over the world. Makes me real nervous to think what a kid grows up with today. All the garbage cluttering his or her young mind!
    Thanks for coming my friend.

  • linda858100

    linda858100

    FABULOUS

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Linda and welcome to my site.

  • Devalyn Marshall

    Devalyn Marshall

    Dear David, the flower is stunning. This was wonderfully written. My brother is a pilot in the Army and he has comepleted two tours of duty in Iraq. Speaking with my brother I feel your words are close to what he felt during both tours. I pray all wars on this earth end soon.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you my friend I love this poem so much its a deep loving poem with a message! I know your brother can relate to this as so many others that have never been to war can.

  • Mariaan Krog Art Portfolio

    Mariaan Krog A...

    So very beautiful!

  • David Roman replied

    Your so kind thank you Mariaan have a wonderful New Year with your lovely family and most of all be safe!

  • Ilunia Felczer

    Ilunia Felczer

    your gallery is beautiful as well as your work….

  • David Roman replied

    Thats very kind of you Ilunia come back again there are many things you might like to look at an read.
    Good to see you and your BM this morning thanks a lot.

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    Gorgeous rose and the writing is perfect hon xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • David Roman replied

    You got good taste Ms C thats one of my favorite too but then I love most of my writing! Its like its someone elses work! Thanks for coming to visit me today thats very cool!

  • linda858100

    linda858100

    lovely

  • David Roman replied

    You think so? An I hope you like the poem too Ms Linda.

  • Dawne Olson

    Dawne Olson

    Truly captivating image! I was searching for myself (how corny does that sound?) and found your flower. What a treat! Stunning photograph and gripping words!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Dawne seems like a perfect fit to me! Glad you like them ! An thanks for the fav too thats flattering my friend very flattering! Come back again

  • IngerMargrete

    IngerMargrete

    Wonderful colors and light – this is really beautiful work!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Inger thats very kind !

  • Barbara  Brown

    Barbara Brown

    You’ve captured the colors so beautifully and the highlight in the center is great.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Lenzart thats very nice of you!

  • Carole Boudreau

    Carole Boudreau

    Lights withing the flower…

  • David Roman replied

    Did not use a light only gods light!
    But its nice to see your comment of concern thats sweet!

  • Scott  d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    perfect ;

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Scott thats super it is perfect.

  • Kathy Reid

    Kathy Reid

    Stunning image and very moving poem!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Kathy I don’t know how many times I have read that poem and it still moves me.
    Glad you came by.

  • Ingrid77

    Ingrid77

    wow – gorgeous!!!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks a lot Ingrid

  • joan warburton

    joan warburton

    This is stunning! Will be back to read the sidebar, though. Didn’t have time this trip.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Joan thats very cool of you an 2 more days until my opening oh my!

  • TIMKIELY

    TIMKIELY 22 days ago

    brillant shot

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