You and I

David Roman

You and I

Watching the shore I see my life wash out to distant places.
I see my life as if it were the wave thats coming in.
One moment its in full view I see it loud and clear.
And now its taken a new course no longer in my view.
My life has been the same as you I whisper to my friend.
You move with a mighty force like I did when I was young.
But now as you reach the shores and the end is close for you.
You seem to have more in common with me the mortal man.
I watch you as you stumble in a small and fearless friend.
When once you were a mighty thing with force to scare most men.
But now you limp up to my feet I can feel your feeble cry.
I hear you loud and clear my friend, that the two of us will die.
You die here as I stand and feel you cling to me.
But you my friend will rise again to beat these shores again.
But I your watchman standing here too old to have much fear.
Watch as you go rolling out to come back in again.
As if you were afraid to die alone it’s me you wish would come.
My time like your is not too long I seen many go to you.
And as I stand and watch you come I really have no fear.
We share a common tread my friend my body’s made of water and one day soon you and I will swim the sea together.

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You and I by David Roman
You and I by David Roman
  • inge

    inge

    lovely shot David, nice and soft,,

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Inge thats nice of you! Nice to see you again.

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    This is so beautiful, David. Lovely focus and rich glowing colours. Your written piece is very moving:)

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you its morning here 350am and I was listing to some jazz on TV and caught this idea and it just went on so I decided to pull up a flower and finish this thought! Glad you like it its peaceful.

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    Sounds lovely. Jazz is perfect for this early hour. And I’m listening to my nephew play guitar. He’s amazing.

  • David Roman replied

    Enjoy the day !And thank you!

  • Tamme Marshall

    Tamme Marshall

    LOVELY – pic and poem!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks Tamme glad you like it. A little jazz and the soul opens up!
    See ya and thanks for coming too!

  • handprintz

    handprintz

    Oh David this is just beautiful …..............

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Miss Trudi I saw it today down the street and I had to shoot it and 4 other flowers .Had the flower bug I been so busy on My Mask and VeniceCarnival that I wasn’t doing much with my flowers my soul. I have a bunch of flowers sitting in my HD but I wanted a fresh one so this is what I got.
    Glad you like it my Roo friend. See ya

  • Ronald Rockman

    Ronald Rockman

    “YOU ARE GOOD” mein herr

  • David Roman replied

    Just the Jazz my friend and the night time magic.
    And growing old!LOL
    Thanks for your support and coming! Thats cool really cool.

  • Clive

    Clive

    Excellent capture, and the words are fantastic, how true it is

  • David Roman replied

    Sad but true and loving in the thought. Thanks Clive

  • bowenite

    bowenite

    Very nice David. Well done!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you B

  • Romo

    Romo

    Beautiful and soft image and a lovely poem:)

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Romo thats sweet

  • David DeWitt

    David DeWitt

    This is sumptous! The color envelops the whole with a a beautiful green stem balancing it. The flower form is very feminine – beautifully done.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you David thats a nice name too!

  • naturelover

    naturelover

    Beautiful soft tulips- lovely poetry-all good David x

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Ms NL

  • karen Bradshaw

    karen Bradshaw

    What a beautiful flower to see first thing in a morning and words to complement xx

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Miss Karen thats very nice. It taste good this morning didn’t it?LOL I missed my Latte gonna go get it now!

  • Di Jenkins

    Di Jenkins

    Wonderful work David – text and photo!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Di glad you like the text.

  • mimi yoon

    mimi yoon

    beautiful david…

  • David Roman replied

    Thanks MiMI

  • poupoune

    poupoune

    Gorgeous!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Poupoune

  • Nala

    Nala

    HI David . . great shot as always and the words are wonderful well done :-)

  • David Roman replied

    Hey Alan thanks a lot good to see you this morning.

  • betha

    betha

    Beautiful shot!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you B

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    I love the poem David so beautiful and love the colour of this fine flower ! Jane x

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you My friend your just a romantic like me. ;))

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    Isn’t it beautiful ? Jane x

  • David Roman replied

    mouth watering! Thank you Miss Jane I don’t know how many times I have read this poem and I still love it.
    See you my friend.

  • eXposure

    eXposure

    superb beauty …
    golden moments

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Ex thats sweet of you.

  • Kim Bender

    Kim Bender

    The poem….......very touching…...beautiful!!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Miss Bender thats sweet of you.

  • ajax

    ajax

    Lovely shot with the flower beaut yellow very soft.The writing is superb,soft and understanding

  • David Roman replied

    Yes we understand that at some time in our life I hope.
    I look at that poem and say this is right just right.
    I added a couple of lines from its original that I wrote last night today so it flows with a little more deepness.But its a funny thing writing you always see room for more and when do you say enough!
    I guess a poem is like life it can continue until…
    Well until someone’s reading your poem to others or the wind or about you to your mourners maybe the wind.Oh well you get it I think.
    Thanks Ajax

  • mikrin

    mikrin

    Wonderful dof David!!! Beautiful soft colors!!

  • David Roman replied

    Hey M good to see you again hows it going?Gearing up for the meeting?LOL

  • mikrin

    mikrin

    LOL!! had some major computer meltdowns!!! All better now though!!

  • David Roman replied

    Thank Goodness now back up my friend.LOL

  • ajax

    ajax

    I certainly get it David,I have written 2 tributes and I read them for my grandparents.Very hard to do read out that is.Writing them was the easiest for me. I wrote with my heart and guts.

  • David Roman replied

    You get it! Now come on lets start posing some of your work for all of us to enjoy my friend.

  • Racheli

    Racheli

    That wonderful moving poem read in the same breath, just sent it to a friend.

    about the flower…..hmm… what shall i say? subtle, romantically, so very…......
    Both sides are great, David.

  • David Roman replied

    Thats so sweet Mrs R that you wanted to share that poem makes me smile real big!! See :))))))

  • Susan Epps Oliver

    Susan Epps Oliver

    Beautiful rich colour, David :)

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Susan glad you like it.

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    So brilliant is your talent, you shine brighter every day I VIEW your work, magic is your world hon, thank you for being who you are, very special indeed xxxxxxxxxxx

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Miss C your a special talent too a gift from above! Thanks for the lovely comments too!

  • ShirleyL

    ShirleyL

    Hey David,

    You blow me away with your talent as an artist and photographer, I just love your work and look forward to more.

    Love Ya

    Shirley

  • David Roman replied

    Oh my you bring a smile to me its good to see you friend. And thank you for the warm comments that brings a smile to me!
    I hope to see you here again and this time with your art and then I can come and share a laugh and maybe leave a comment!
    Thanks for coming to Visit me Miss S and the lovely comments thats sweet of you!

  • LaRae

    LaRae

    Beautiful Shot

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you my friend good to see you again!

  • Damienne Bingham

    Damienne Bingham

    Very pretty colour and nice use of dof.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you Miss Damienne thats really cool of you.

  • Larasolnishko

    Larasolnishko

    It is rare to find poem about death, i like words and allegories you were using, hope you have more poems to come and i will read them and enjoy as i enjoyed that one…

  • David Roman replied

    Hello Ms L every flower I have on my site has a poem so you can find some really good one when you wanna read a little!
    Thanks for your complements they make me smile.

  • SueAnne

    SueAnne

    Awww looks like my state flower….? You have photographed it perfectly, and your wirtten piece is a perfect final touch for it.

  • David Roman replied

    Thank you so much the flower was down the street from me saw it every day as I rode by! Its a sweet little thing.
    Glad you like it!

  • LudaNayvelt

    LudaNayvelt

    I really love this shot David

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