The Mandolin.
The Mandolin. belongs to the following groups:
Complex Simplicity of Art, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Dark artists, dark art, Fantasy Art, Imperfectly, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Models with a difference (photoshop images welcome), Put Out! or Get Out!!!, Shameless Self-Promotion, Verses Dark, Villains and Villainesses: The darker side... and Woman Appreciationonce I saw a mandolin
in some old rusted back-street bin
it was cracked and broken
but somehow it made me cry
sometimes I feel like painted steel
sometimes I guess I’ll never heal
men and women come and go
they only leave their names
so many sleep among the tombs
so many die in rented rooms
so many want their final fix
in the moonlit hours
some people don’t believe in sin
some people run on cups of gin
others make their little idols
out of credit cards
the gambler playing in the wind,
the man in chains, gagged and bound,
sees not the wise man’s tree, and
doesn’t get so much to say.
I say you have to hit the ground
to see the truth that Schindler found
some people like to live their lives
in fragments on their own.
your daughter isn’t coming back
unless it’s in a body sack
we all live under mounds of crack
chatting over tea.
I’ve seen old men with children, and
children holding old men’s hands
I cannot find a woman who’s not
pierced with bloody knives.
through a blizzard all men dream
the world is not a winding stream
the world is not an ordered house
it doesn’t pay to tell
the truth is not an open door
for many life’s a raddled whore
who charges through the nose for more
than she can deliver
you pilots of the rusted ship
your bank vaults are with oil adrip
don’t worry: no-one listens as
you take the Nobel prize.
Adrena87
Absolute literary brilliance!!!
darkvampire replied
Thank you so much for your kind comment, Adrena.
frogster
Nicely written
darkvampire replied
Thank you, frogster.
Gregory John O...
That Mandolin sure inspired a good piece !! ( I had to sell mine to pay the rent )
darkvampire replied
What a shame, Gregory. I hope you managed to buy another sometime.
Poisonlolly
i love it! well written piece!
darkvampire replied
Glad you like it, Poisonlolly.
ArcadiaTempest
Drugs, money, need for fame, politics, the prostitution of who we are in our lives…. you got to know it isn’t always going to end pretty… Really fabulously well crafted verse !
darkvampire replied
Thank you so much, AT.