abortion abuse babies children killing murder politics women
I think this is such a beautifully written work. So moving. xo
Thank you, Lori. I’m really glad it reached you x
Honestly….. this is about…if not THE best work, on this subject I have EVER read! I would send it to ever PRO LIFE entity….that exists… for the sake of the tiny lives, that just might be saved, because of this OUTSTANDING work!! It is SO moving, and SO right on!!! Because of all the advances of medical care, and meds….there is hardly one example of taking a life….to protect that of the woman… that there is NO need to abort!!! The #! reason…. is selfishness… or inconvenience.. I know that those would argue about …..“what if”…. the woman was raped. But it is still a BABY inside.. and it had NOTHING to do with that rape. It depends on weather or not, that woman has the intestinal fortitude, and faith, to carry on, with that pregnancy, then adopt the child, or keep it!! Yes, I said keep it…. as many do, and through faith, are able to forget what happened in conception, and love the innocent child. But if not…. there is NO unwanted child!! Some where, some ONE wants that child!!! All I can do, is to thank you, for this wonderful ….. OUTSTANDING, MOVING WORK!! BRAVO!!!!!
And it’s TOO bad, that we have to put a safe filter over a work like this…. and let other’s that have filth in them, go uncovered.!! My opinion….
I agree with every word about abortion you have written. I wasn’t going to bother posting it, as I have already fallen foul of the “pro-choice” people, and I wondered whether there would be anyone on here who agreed with me; and already there are two! Thank you also for your comments about my poem, though they are undeserved.
Please do NOT stop!!! As I said……there are SCORES of us….. who do agree with you!! I can introduce you to many…many of them!!! I am grateful, that what ever led you to post these…. that you DID!!! Do not worry about what others may think!! We are speaking for those who have NO voice!! Bless you for all of your inspired writings…. !!!!
a beautifully, moving piece of writing
Thank you again, WTB. I’m really glad you feel like that.
Yes. I am mighty glad you have written this and posted this here. You wonderfully surprise, beyond what your online name might suggest!
You bravely asked for critique. Here are a few points that I think worth making – while not at all detracting from your work, which I find worthwhile and welcome and valid, just as it is.
1: while abortion is often a decision of the mother, it is not always so. It may be imposed against her will, eg China’s brutal enforced ‘one child’ policy.2: while abortion may be the mother’s decision enacted, and in some cases even her act, in most cases it is others who do the killing. They too may be victims, trapped – within a system, by delusional belief. Therefore it is a wider social as well as maternal responsibility.3: countering these points, these born individuals all are agents with at least some scope to have governed their own situation; the unborn individual has had no such freedom of choice, being wholly dependent and at their mercy.
Have you seen this ? ..the most gentle and compassionate I have ever seen, music video to Massive Attack “Teardrop”.
Always pen the truth in your heart. It matters not what others might think. This is truth, this is about someone lost to the world… maybe a doctor, or a teacher or a wonderful parent and friend. We have so many protections in the law for criminals and even terrorists, but no law to protect the most innocent of beings.
a very powerful write!right or wrong we have the ability to choose,unlike the unborn!
Thank you, dogfish; how true!
I like the way I read it as the child inside, safe and secure, then at the last, a birth…rather than the joy of life, a dark brutal transition. A metaphor for our choices in life, to kick and scream our way through a transition into a new life….Very well written DV and lots to think about.:)
Thank you so much, skinneyman.
Thanks for the feature, RR.
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