Self Esteem

Danny
Author: Danny
Word Count: 175
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Why can’t I be like you?
With your perfect posture
And golden hair
Your perky breasts
That support themselves
Your sparkling eyes
Your beautiful smile
Why can’t I be like you?
With your washboard stomach
And chiseled features
Your spikey black hair
And your huge biceps
Why can’t I be like you?
With your great taste
Endless supply of cash
Your many friends
Your social life that never ends
Your latest gadgets
Your 50 word texting thumb
Your electronic savvy mind
Your first night attendances
Why can’t I be like you?
With your sex life
That rivals the movie stars
With your 9 inch dick
And your harem of beauties
Your men at your beck and call
And the fortunes they spend on you
Why can’t I be like you?
With your perfect prose
Wit and wisdom a plenty
Your debating brilliance
Your conversation skills
Your graphic flair
And your photography genius
Why can’t I be you?
Hang on I can
This is the Internet
I can pretend I already am
YOU
Just like you

Self Esteem

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  • Lawford

    Lawford, 3 months ago

    Wow. Social comment at it’s finest.
    Brilliant.

  • Cathie Tranent

    Cathie TranentAdelaide Meatspace Coordinator, 3 months ago

    Yes.

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 3 months ago

    hahaha. yes. you can be anything and anyone you want.

  • STRINGER

    STRINGER, 3 months ago

    FUCK….
    FOR A MOMENT THERE I THOUGHT YOU HAD SENT ME A BUBBLEMAIL.

  • nofrillsart

    nofrillsart, 3 months ago

    Ha! Thats funny…and true. Whats with that?

  • Danny

    Danny, 3 months ago

    It was supposed to be a Bubblemail to Stringer but I got shy

  • Chanel2

    Chanel2, 3 months ago

    hehe, the internet illusion…hate texting.

  • sjem

    sjem, 3 months ago

    I wish you wouldn’t share private information about my penis.

  • Danny

    Danny, 3 months ago

    you know i can go back in and change it to 2
    Not 2 inches
    2 penis
    You couldn’t have got that silly playing with one
    :)

  • Darren Stones

    Darren Stones, 3 months ago

    STRINGER, would have to flattered. What male isn’t envious of a 50 word texting thumb.

  • kseriphyn

    kseriphynNetworker Extraordinaire, 3 months ago

    Only nine inches? Sounds like the type of “in crowd” one reads about on TMZ.com

  • Danny

    Danny, 3 months ago

    9 inch dicks and texting…
    Focus people!
    you sad short attention span plods.
    I have a 9 inch texta i like to write on windows with when i’m inspired.
    It comes up with ideas like.
    Get rid of public journals – silence the multitude and gain control back.

  • Chris White

    Chris White, 3 months ago

    Try drugs.

  • Lawford

    Lawford, 3 months ago

    Get rid of public journals – silence the multitude and gain control back.
    I like the sound of that.
    Where do I sign George? Err……. I mean Danny.

  • Lawford

    Lawford, 3 months ago

    Oops. I’m a bit slow. I see that RB have already removed the journals from view.

  • andrea verstegen

    andrea verstegen, 3 months ago

    Totally and utterly brilliant. Haven’t read anything quite so ‘real’ in a long time.

  • Ange

    Ange, 2 months ago

    for some reason reminded me of a song by lovely welsh band superfurry animals.
    if you dont want me to destroy you…

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