White were the lies told to protect me
Black was the mood it sent me
Green was the jealousy that engulfed me
Red was the anger that enraged me
Clear were my intentions to be
Blue were your lips… when I left the room
White were the lies told to protect me
Black was the mood it sent me
Green was the jealousy that engulfed me
Red was the anger that enraged me
Clear were my intentions to be
Blue were your lips… when I left the room
transmute
Love stark primary simplicity of the imagery Danny. Hope you find a collaborator.
Danny
Thanks Chris
Thanks for posting the forum and sharing your idea
kathleen
Oooh I’m gonna have a go at this toooo… coming up.
Robert Knapman
Hey Danny. Here are a few pics that might suit this poem. The girl just had to go. Might be able to resurect her and her skipping rope another time. Maybe one of these could do the job though? CrimsonRage
Chaos or SnappedBlackHeart
Cheers buddy boy.
Robert Knapman
Oh, and if they don’t work for you no worries. Its given me a mini project .) Cheers
Danny
Ahhhhhhh!
Robert
Back forth back forth
Crimson Rose Wins
Hard choice
Chaos has a lot going for it.
Robert Knapman
Excellent Danny. Glad you liked one. I had my own mini drama deciding which out of a bunch to upload. This one no that one but what if I… In the end I really liked Crimson Rage’s intensity (its actually me on a pretty black day in my life) and also because it places all the focus on the perpertrator. Cheers ,)
Melody
Really like this poem. A great idea well executed.
Danny
Thank you Melody
Nicole Goggins
briliant work!
kookylane
That is wayyy cool!!!!!!
rikkipaul
danny
great poem
the first line,
White were the lies told to protect me
sums up my self portrait (and the mood I was in when it was taken).
rp
Danny
cool image
rikkipaul
hey danny
inspiried by this, I have put up an image to try the reverse
love to see what you think
here
ThePyre
This is very good. Clever with your choice of sharp phrases and an excellent finish.