The days are long
The nights are cold
I lay alone
no one to hold
The waters flowing
My eyes are wet
still alone
feeling regret
The house is empty
My heart is black
I sit alone
Wishing youd come back
I pray to God
I hope you will see
That I’m alone
And your the only man for me
My cell phone rings
Its you of corse
Alone I’ll stay
You want a divorce
My thoughts are racing
What have I done
Alone for good?
No, I’ll get the gun!
Heavy in my hand
I have it cocked
Alone, I pull the trigger
But the saftey is locked
My life flashed before me
In a blink of an eye
Alone in that instent
I didn’t want to die
With my new found self
I walk out the door
I’m happy alone
I don’t need you anymore
mkl .
Very honest and poignant. Beautiful, yet vulnerable…...........
dannielle replied
Thank you mkl!!
Ushna Sardar
awesome writing dannielle!
dannielle replied
Thank you Ushna!
Paul Rees-Jones
Wow…Great…you really captured a host of emotion…I can relate to every line. Well done…
dannielle replied
Thank you so much!!
Hayley Cafarella
Oh I was all steeled for tragedy! I’m glad she walked out in the end :)
dannielle replied
Thanks rella!! yea, wanted to pg13 it for the kiddies! lol
lolowe
This was really powerful. Great job.
dannielle replied
Thank you so much lolowe!!
Alecs Lindsay
beautiful, why haven’t I seen your work before??
dannielle replied
Thank you!! I have been out for a while :)