Deprived of a life
Sterotyped
Once a person,
Now a Death
Peers want me dead
They dont care they say
De-Moralised into a coffin
A Coffin with no way out
Being forced to endure this
Every single day
Being told you ruin Lives
Even me, with no emotion
Cant help my heart dying
As i am told, to go and die
Why am i like this?
I have ruined everything for everyone
Being told No one loves you
No One cares about you
I am now souless for the end
I want death to be around the bend
Being told, i am not blind
Being made fun of, for writing poems
Why Me? Why me?
There is alot worse than me…
But Nothing close to home…
Its the end of an Era.
The end of a chapter in my life
I say i am not going to talk to them again
How can i not? I see them nearly everyday
The Heartfelt resement, of my whole life
Sometimes i wish i should be dead aswell
I say, i may aswell Embrace this
For this could be the last Conversation
Being Told your a Coward for not commiting suicide
How easy is it?
I am being driven to brink of Life
Driven towards my fate of Death
The People around me dont understand
Who i am
They dont accept me
Should i wither in my fatless soul
Get it over and done with
Make people happy
Judge my life, and withered and battered
Go and Die… and make everyone happy
Souless Being
This is after, My Love and just put a stop to this, and i lost a very good friend on the way Now i have practically no ffriends and i have a hoard of epople who want me to “go die”
deliriousgirl, about 1 month ago
Ohhh hunnybunny!!! What a great expression of angst! Believe me: This too shall pass.
TeriLee, about 1 month ago
You are so young to feel so defeated….if these are the kind of things you are hearing….you may be listening to the wrong people….some people like to put others down….cuz when others are put down, they feel better…it’s not right and it hurts….I have felt just that way before too….I think I was your age as a matter of fact….kids are so mean, but trust me, as you get older, the very things the girls pick on you about, will be what they love you for….be just who you are…and try not to focus on the ignorance and misguided hateful words of others….you are better than all of that….but it’s up to you to show the world how wrong they are….don’t accept their words…prove them wrong….don’t be a victim, be a survivor…and thrive!
Max Gatrell, about 1 month ago
Dan an excellent piece, but seriously, snap out of it dude. Don’t let yourself be dragged down by other people’s stupid opinions. You’re an Artist, you walk a higher path than they ;)
M
DanielMartin in reply to Max Gatrell’s comment, about 1 month ago
Yes but its my thoughts and people emotions that are dragging me down
Max Gatrell, about 1 month ago
Only because you allow it. Enjoy your emotions by all means, but don’t let them control you, it’s far better when you’re the one pulling the strings. Master this and your work will doubtlessly reflect it.
M
DanielMartin in reply to Max Gatrell’s comment, about 1 month ago
I can, its just the things after that. Because i will end up talking to him, i will end up talking to her etc.
Max Gatrell, about 1 month ago
Exactly, keep a positive frame of mind, things could always be worse ;)
M
stephfine, about 1 month ago
Who am I
Who Am I Still here with a naked eye
I’m not saying good-bye,
With a sigh……
I lay my heart on the line,
deciding to grind, dig, search deeper
into my soul…. I go. Discover.
There’s no need to cover up and rely
Is the wool over your eyes?
I’m crying inside, can you feel my pain
How did I get here, this place is not on my map
Not what I planed, but a rut I will not die
Please friends, family, loved ones…..
Help me find my way……
Life is like a block of clay….mold it,
Shape it, return it too its original shape we try….
Tiresome not to let it dry but cry a little and we will
Not salt away…. Purity, allowing us to be what we shape
Keeping me safe for options. I need the answer
too a question we all hope for…
Who am I
Stay positive!! keep witting and don’t listen to them… if they say that stuff to you
they are not your friends… move on, you will be a better man for it! awesome work..
when you find time read some of my poems… everyone endures pain in different
ways… keep smiling your too young to worry.. :-)
picketty, about 1 month ago
Hey Daniel….it will soon be saturday and we can have a long long chat!!!!!!!
picketty, about 1 month ago
Hey Daniel you are such a gifted a talented writer, I am sorry that life is treating you so badly, These evil people they don’t even realise who is pulling their strings. They are controlled by the very darkness that wants to extinguish your beautiful flame.
Remember darkness cannot put out light!!!!!! Please keep shining and I hope I am still alive when you publish your first anthology.
Talke later XX
Emily Robida, about 1 month ago
Only Special people carry heavy crosses
Karin Taylor, about 1 month ago
Daniel, when there is no-one else around to love us…we sometimes feel very lonely. I felt very lonely as a little girl too. I learnt to give myself the love i need, and i eventually learnt to love me.
the world always undervalued me, never even noticed me, i was so small and tiny and insignificant…or so i thought…..but things turned out okay for me in the end, and i think they will turn out for you too. You are wonderful, clever, and very very brave, and I am very proud of you, because you remind me of me.
Maximus, about 1 month ago
Tell them all to get stuffed. :)
juice, about 1 month ago
really like that you express so deeply that many others cannot…you’re an inspiration ….I feel your courage through your writing…I was bullied too and now…as time has passed…we can empower those to speak up who are being bullied…You are indeed a true writer…keep going sharing your most powerful voice…excellent…thank you for sharing your most precious words
JenniferB, about 1 month ago
;-)
There ya go kiddo! See, you’ll do just fine! you’ve got too much talent and a great future ahead of you to do otherwise. One day those bullies will be chewing off their own tongues wishing they’d have been kinder people to you! :-)
xox
Natella2020, about 1 month ago
A moving expression, emotive piece, but you’ve frightened me with the harsh reality behind this.
With your words, you enrich the world, what right have you or anyone to deny the people what you have to offer? Go die? Rather go live, and rise to the highest standards. It is their blind hearts that judge, and how sound can the judgment of a blind heart be?
I look forward to seeing more of your work.