I Am

I Am
By Dane Smith-Johnsen

Descartes said, "I think, therefore I am.”
So, can we deduce that?
If we do not think we are not.
Or do we always think?
In consciousness-
In unconsciousness-
In sub-consciousness-
In a submarine-
At a sewing machine
When eating meat that is lean.
Cutting a lawn that is green.
And thinking in between-
Eating a sub sandwich-
Just like a hungry man which
Thought he would eat a sandwich-
Before he felt his leg twitch.
Involuntary motion-
Could cause a life commotion.
If it prevented locomotion
And brought out sad emotion.
Every time a heart beats
And tingles bringing love treats.
When two souls in love meet,
True love must be thinking.
In consciousness-
In unconsciousness-
In sub-consciousness-
And if “we are” because of thinking,
Will we be eternally linking?
Hum! I was just thinking…
Perhaps we should stop shrinking
And away from Heaven sinking
And start to fill our minds
With all goodness that we find
Let us keep our hearts sublime.
For eternity is a long time!


Daneann

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The act of thinking, a marvelous gift to man, is considered in present and eternal perspectives in this poem. In a lighthearted way, the author lures the reader into the thinking process with a series of simple philosophical contemplations.

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Comments

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 2 years ago

    Dane, this has me smiling big!!! I am thinking adult version of Dr. Seuss!!! Much within your rhyming lines. Enjoyed very much!!! Have missed you – hope all is well! Hugs, shar xoxoxo

  • Daneann
    Daneannover 2 years ago

    Shar, I can’t believe I’m just getting back here. I’ve been busy with work and medical appointments. Keep your fingers crossed for me. I’ll know on the 3rd whether they will do hip surgery on the 9th!!! FINALLY!!! Thanks for reading this poem. I had a lot of fun writing it. Smiling Big, too… Adult Dr. Seuss… Hummmm it’s a great comment because sometimes I feel like I’m writing “adult Dr. Seuss” Thank you for your comment. Love and hugs, Dane Ann