As I Could Be

I raise my hands up to the sky
And touch the edge of heaven
I close my eyes, breath deeply
I fade into a realm of total relaxation
I see me as I am and as I could be
So far apart
For a moment I hate my present self
I then see myself as I once was
Witnessing first hand the progress I have made
The obstcles I have overcome to get to where I am this day
Any hate I feel is replaced with a calming sense of reassurance
I am refreshed and can carry on
In pursuit of the could be me
Leaving no one in my wake
Knowing in my heart that today
I am the best me that I can be
And that I will be replaced each day
By a better me,as I use each day’s experiences
To carve out the man that I will become.

  • Roger Sampson

    Roger Sampson

    Magnificent!! The writing itself is done very well indeed… what it says about you and your outlook in life… speaks volumes. So nice to see another that strives for goodness.

    Rog

  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you so much Roger. I’m so glad you like it. Love to hear your opinion on some of my other writings. If and when you have time:)

  • solareclips~Julie  Alexander
  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you so very much. I’m truely suprised, honored and humbled:)))

  • Nathalie Chaput

    Nathalie Chaput

    Awesome Robert, congrats on the feature!

  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you so very much Natalie:)))

  • Teresa Zieba

    Teresa Zieba

    Wow, this is wonderful writing Robert. I can relate 100% to it. Love it.

  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you so much Teresa. So glad you like it:)

  • amarica

    amarica

    Well done!!! Congratulations on being featured in the Freedom to Shine group!!!

  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you Very much:)

  • Enivea

    Enivea

    Lovely writing, and congratulations on the Feature!

  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you so much:)

  • Nicole Nomeland

    Nicole Nomeland

    Congrats on the feature!! A well deserved one if I do say so myself :)

  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you so much!!! I do appreciate you saying so yourself:)

  • Helga

    Helga

    You deserve the feature with (inspiring) words like these! Well done.

  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you so much Helga for the visit and comments:)

  • ANNETTE HAGGER

    ANNETTE HAGGER

    your deserve to be featured, your writing is so beautfiul…anna ; )

  • dancinfreakshow replied

    Thank you so very much…Means a lot:)))

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