Demands (Flash Fiction)

They came when the sun dropped away. Swarms of them, massing in the back yard and taking over my world.

There was no-one to help me, so I was forced to comply. Acquiesce to their demands, despite hating myself for it. Either that or suffer further at their hands.

I dipped my hand into the bag of candy, doling out sugar to the parade of trick or treaters.

When the children walked the streets on Halloween the darkness subsided offering a brief respite, a moment to collect my breath. If only it could always be like this, surrounded by the voices of children. Their demands were small compared to those of the hungry dead. Pale wraiths that rise nightly from their graves to steal the warmth of the living; I expect to understand their hunger soon.

© 2008 Damian Herde


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A Sugar High halloween writing competition entry, this one for the Flash Fiction Group.

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Comments

  • Paul Compton
    Paul Comptonover 3 years ago

    Oh, this is great Damian. Subtle chills. I like.

  • Thanks Paul! Glad to chill you, LOL :)

    – Damian

  • Anne van Alkemade
    Anne van Alkemadeover 3 years ago

    brrrrrrrrr

  • LOL, good response :)

    – Damian

  • wakeman490
    wakeman490over 3 years ago

    Mmmmm. Brain candy for kiddies.

  • Haha! They’re after something! Could be brains, blood or warmth ;)

    – Damian

  • ChainmailChick
    ChainmailChickover 3 years ago

    Nice! =)

  • Thanks :)
    I finally got one to stay under 150 words, LOL!

    – Damian

  • ChainmailChick
    ChainmailChickover 3 years ago

    I knew you’d manage it, lol.

  • LOL! All I had to do was start writing randomly to drown out all of the noise in the house (I’m sure being attacked by the undead would be worse…?) :)

    – Damian

  • ChainmailChick
    ChainmailChickover 3 years ago

    I’m not sure, lol. At least not over here! =)

  • Uh huh, I’m on your team on that one! :)

    – Damian

  • ChainmailChick
    ChainmailChickover 3 years ago

    LOL, I can imagine. =)

  • gypsycaster
    gypsycasterover 3 years ago

    Cool!!! Nice one!

  • Thanks Gypsy, just a little one this time :)

    – Damian

  • Krystle
    Krystleover 3 years ago

    Ha, cool. You always know there’s a twist coming with these, but that one caught me by surprise. Nice :)

  • Excellent! Thanks Krystle :)
    Haha, I tried to anticipate the anticipation :)

    – Damian

  • Alison Pearce
    Alison Pearceover 3 years ago

    Fabulous Damian!

  • Thanks Alison :)

    – Damian