Scouting the Way Ahead: A Beakface Story

Damian
Author: Damian
Word Count: 958
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He flew far above the birds. He gained a voyeuristic pleasure from looking down on them as they flew obliviously beneath him. They were the aerial masters; the agile dominators of the sky. He would never be allowed to mix with them, so he stayed far beyond the limits of their altitude endurance to demonstrate his own aerial skill, even if it was only to himself.

He adjusted the golden-yellow beak mask of strong metal he wore over his own leathery snout, his sharp teeth peeking out from behind. His grey and white feathers fanned out from his wings, and his powerfully clawed feet clenched. He was not a bird, despite his desire to be one. His kind had a common evolutionary ancestor as the birds, but had diverged much earlier and not followed a similar path. Some of his kind were like him, and had more than a passing resemblance to a bird. Most did not.

Beakfaces.

The birds had shunned his kind for more than a lifetime. More than even the eldest beakface in his clan could remember, and the eldest had been alive in the previous century. The beakfaces, and all of their related kind, had lost a war, and their ancestors had been banished for all eternity to a cold and barren land.

They lived, and they survived, and they multiplied, but they were never content. Many of their kind needed warmth to be active, so they were trapped in a state of sluggish inactivity, huddled around smoky gas-burning heaters until their blood quickened, and their thoughts raced. At least until the chill seeped in again.

Crislow, and many others, thought that the time had long passed for their return. If neither group could remember the past quarrel, why should they, the innocent descendants, be punished? Why should the birds be favoured? If they were as benevolent and generous as they told everyone, surely they could forgive, and the beakfaces could come back to their ancient home?

His eyes were sharp enough to see the lushness of the land far below. A stark contrast to the land he had grown up in. The city of the birds shone in the sun, and the air around it bustled with activity. Such excitement. Such happiness.

Crislow turned in a long, gentle arc and prepared to fly back to make his report. They were forbidden to trespass here under the ancient traditions, but this had never stopped him. The birds could do nothing to stop him from this height. He did not like to spy, but he knew it could help their cause in some way, so he continued without complaint.

He left the bird city far behind him, returning home, but far below he could see a lone bird following a trajectory similar to his.
‘What is this? Playing at my game, are you?’ said Crislow, talking to himself. ‘Luckily for you, you bright coloured birdie, that we have no argument.’
He drifted closer, dropping down to bird levels, carefully positioning himself with the sun so that the bird could not see him, even if it looked straight at him.

The bird was bright yellow, and was highly conspicuous against the ground below, appearing as a swiftly moving spark.
‘You’re going my way, aren’t you, pretty thing?’ said Crislow in amusement. He was close enough now for his exceptional eyesight to make out the red scarf around the birds neck, and the darker orange colour of its aviation goggles.

‘No quarrel,’ Crislow muttered, and then chuckled deeply. He could no longer contain his beakface urges, so abandoned all pretence. He dropped into an abrupt dive, flattening his wings against his body and holding himself straight, his beak lined up on his target. Like a grey missile he whistled down, loving every second of the acceleration, thrilling as the yellow bird rushed up into his vision.

The bird sensed the beakface’s approach, and flicked a cautious glance over its shoulder. The sun was no longer enough of a shield for the larger mass of the grey creature, and the bird dipped a wing in a desperate evasive manoeuvre. Too late.

Crislow’s taloned feet swung out at the last second and the speed drove the claws deep into the bird, and yellow feathers erupted into the air as the bodies collided. Crislow held firm as they tumbled, now spiralling through the air to the ground. The bird was flapping weakly, trying to grab at Crislow’s legs with its beak, but its neck was too damaged from the impact. Its eyes weren’t visible beneath its goggles, just the glare of sun-reflection from the lens.

As they hit the ground, Crislow extended his legs, used the bird to soften his landing, and then leant in with his metal beak to finish the job. The bird looked up at the large beakface and wheezed in pain. ‘You…think…we don’t…see you…up high,’ it said, and Crislow leant closer. ‘We know. We…know…what’s coming.’

Crislow was lost in thought as he slammed his beak into the bird’s head, silencing it. ‘They know?’ he thought. ‘What do they think they know?’
He carried the body into the air with him, and then out across the ocean. When he was far from the coastline he dropped it, and watched it fall to the water, and imagined it sinking into the depths to feed the ocean beasts.

‘If they know I’ve been watching them, have they been doing the same to us?’ he wondered. It may be necessary to move faster with our preparations.

Constructive criticism welcome.

© 2008 Damian Herde
Beakface concept and artwork © Kaitlin Beckett

Scouting the Way Ahead: A Beakface Story

This story is a collaboration with Firedrake, set in her world of the Beakfaces. I’ve wanted to do a story with her creatures ever since I first saw them :)

The Beakface I’ve written about is this guy, Yellow Beakface (Image © Kaitlin Beckett).

Scouting the Way Ahead: A Beakface Story belongs to the following groups:

Collaboral Damage, Fantasy Art, Parallel Dimensions and Short stories - Spherical Scriptings
  • LostBoy

    LostBoy, 2 months ago

    thats cool!

  • LostBoy

    LostBoy, 2 months ago

    dunno about birds being natural enemies though…ik would have thought lizards or some other clan of beakfaces…something she draws :)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to LostBoy’s comment, 2 months ago

    Cheers LB!
    And I think there’s probably some infighting with the lizards etc, like you say.
    I ran with it this way thinking that the beakfaces are so desperate to be birds that I imagined they’d be jealous of them ;)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to LostBoy’s comment, 2 months ago

    I was thinking the yellow bird was a more light-weight version of this guy

  • Michael Alesich

    Michael Alesich, 2 months ago

    Damian, very cool imagining of the setting.

    For some reason I’m now intrigued by the Bird city and the Beakface city

  • Firedrake

    Firedrake, 2 months ago

    HAHA I LOVE IT!!!!
    Yes I pictured the yellow bird looking a bit like the dude above. Though definitely lightweight as you say – I think purple bird would hold his own against yellow beakface!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Michael Alesich’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Michael, glad you thought so! I’ll have to visualise the cities in greater detail for any follow ups that happen ;)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Firedrake’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Kaitlin, I’m glad you like the world setting :)
    I love the purple bird, so held him back to save some fun for later, LOL! He looks pretty capable of looking after himself, that’s for sure. I wonder if he’d have avoided the death-from-above of yellow beakface though? Hmm, questions questions…

  • Firedrake

    Firedrake, 2 months ago

    I think if he were prepared, it would have been an even match.
    He is prone to being a bit dreamy though, coasting along on autopilot!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Firedrake’s comment, 2 months ago

    I imagine purple would totally out-fly yellow beakface, with an even match up :)
    And dreamy you say? Is that from over-confidence in his own abilities, or being caught up in personal ponderings?

  • Firedrake

    Firedrake, 2 months ago

    Personal ponderings, I think. Doesn’t even notice when his goggles fog up!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Firedrake’s comment, 2 months ago

    LOL, cool to know! That’s nicer than being arrogant and cocky ;)

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil..., 2 months ago

    Loved every word! :D

  • BLYTHART

    BLYTHART, 2 months ago

    I’ve always admired Kaitlin’s creations and after reading this fantastic piece of writing they seem more alive and real than ever … well done! Crislow is pure evil … scary!!!

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats, 2 months ago

    the image goes well with your writing, the words are awesome you can picture everything as you read it

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Paul Louis Villani’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Paul, glad you liked it :)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to BLYTHART’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Dave, I’m glad it rang true to Kaitlin’s images!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to mlgkats’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks a lot Mel, I’m glad you like it :)

  • BLYTHART

    BLYTHART, 2 months ago

    It rang true to Kaitlin’s images and added a lot more besides … you are a good writer.

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to BLYTHART’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thank you, that’s wonderful :)

  • MaKayla Songer

    MaKayla Songer, 2 months ago

    I really liked it! It worked really well with the drawing. There is one sentence that seemed kind of odd to me though: ‘Luckily for you, you bright coloured birdie, that we have no argument.’
    Wouldn’t it read better as: “Luckily for you, you bright colored birdie, we have no argument.”
    Or: “Lucky for you, you bright colored birdie, that we have no argument.”
    Anyway, very cool story!

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats, 2 months ago

    you are so welcome

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to MaKayla Songer’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks MaKayla, glad you liked it! And thanks for the suggestions, I’ll go have a look at that bit again.

  • gypsycaster

    gypsycaster, 2 months ago

    It’s amazing how one can rationalise their own innocence even during the very act of guilt.
    Great story, and great picture as well! (I like the purple birdy and his steam punk goggles!)
    Crislow scares the pants off me!
    :D

  • Leoni Venter

    Leoni Venter, 2 months ago

    Very cool. I kept feeling it reminds me of something – not the story itself, but the style or atmosphere … and I finally realized it’s like Stanislav Lem’s short stories. Something about a world with its own internal logic .. from outside it looks strange, but once inside, everything that happens makes perfect sense. In any case, well done, I love it!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to gypsycaster’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks gypsy! I like Crislow, dispite his faults, LOL! He’s the exact reason why the birds haven’t trusted them, yet he still complains about it, haha!
    The bird and his googles are very cool, I agree :)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Leoni Venter’s comment, 2 months ago

    Wow Lee, that’s a cool thing to say :)
    Glad you liked it!

  • Miri

    Miri, 2 months ago

    Damian – that’s pretty cool! great story around fantastic images – can see why you wanted to write something about them…..i’m hooked to yet another series on RB!!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Miri’s comment, 2 months ago

    LOL, thank you :)
    I’m glad you liked it, and the images are great aren’t they! I’ll keep this series on my list of things to keep working on :)

  • Paul Compton

    Paul Compton, 2 months ago

    You’ve really brought this imagined realm to life. Bizarre and wonderful.

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Paul Compton’s comment, 12 days ago

    Thanks so much Paul, glad you liked it :)

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