After the Party (Spirit Walks Part 7. Blood Red)

Damian
Author: Damian
Word Count: 1139
previous browse writing next

The dining experience of Auberon’s hall lived up to his grand claim. Sama certainly had not had a meal like it before; but it went beyond just the food. The stone walls of the high-ceilinged room were lit by floating spheres of flickering white flame that cast a clean, white light across the space. A luxurious soundscape was created by the thoughts of an old faerie who sat cross-legged on the floor with his eyes shut tight, as if in meditation.

The table was shared by Auberon’s knights and many other faeries who were introduced to her with impressive titles, like Princess or Duke. The food was served by butterfly-winged faerie girls who fluttered in and out with food and drink.

Sama had a vague idea of what she was eating, but when she asked, all she was told was a list of improbable ingredients featuring sparkly bits of nature and dew drops picked from the first opened flower of the morning. She had half an idea that Auberon was teasing her, but she just couldn’t be sure after she had literally paid for her dinner with a smile.

The drinks hadn’t felt alcoholic, and indeed, Auberon had said they were not, but by the end of the meal she was feeling more than a little tipsy. As the evening progressed the conversations began to blur, and eventually faded as she slipped into sleep.

A warm shaft of light was sitting on her arm when she awoke in a fabulously cosy bed. The bed felt so good she took a moment more to stretch out and savour the pleasure of it. She eventually sat up and had a good look at her room, which was simple but spacious, and felt of sparse elegance.

At some point she had ended up in a long white nightgown of a wonderfully soft fabric. She didn’t remember how that had happened, but didn’t stop to dwell on it, instead changing back into her own clothes. She was pleased to see they still included Auberon’s forest-green cloak. She stroked it affectionately before throwing it around her shoulders, and then went to look for him.

She was directed outside by a trio of hand-sized flying faeries, and found him walking through a garden.
‘Auberon,’ she called, and ran to him.
‘Good morning Sama, how did you sleep?’
‘Wonderfully! I don’t remember getting to bed, but I’d had a great night.’
‘I’m surprised you look so well, considering how much you drank.’
‘Yep, that’s me, tough as nails. Particularly when it’s only flavoured water.’
‘Yes, but the intoxicating effects usually upset people if they have too much the first time.’
‘You said they weren’t alcoholic.’
‘That’s correct, no alcohol. But the herbs they do have in them can have quite a kick.’
‘Okay, whatever. A night’s sleep was all I needed to recover.’
‘A night? No, you’ve been asleep for a week.’
‘A whole week?!’ Sama squealed. ‘Why didn’t anyone wake me up?’
‘It’s always that way after the Hunt.’
‘You told me the sprites would have a body made for Gabe after we’d had dinner and a rest.’
‘Yes, and the dinner and rest would last a week. It always does after the Hunt, which gave the sprites time to work. I thought it worked out well.’
‘You knew it would take a week, right from the start?’
‘Of course.’
‘And you decided not to tell me?’
‘I didn’t think it was important.’

Sama growled in frustration, feeling her affection for this tall faerie fade to annoyance. ‘So is Gabe’s body finished?’
‘It should be by now, but let’s find out,’ he said, and extended the crook of his arm for her to hold.
She sighed in resignation and slipped her arm through his, letting herself be led towards the obnoxious sprites and her brother’s ghost.

Sama found herself back in familiar territory as they neared the sprite’s workshop, recognising the doorway she came in the day before. No, she corrected herself, the week before. For a moment she wondered whether time had been flying past in her own world, and whether she’d return to find her friends all old or dead, and that decades had passed for each day spent in Faerieland. Too late to worry now, she decided, and watched Auberon knock on the door.

The sprites opened the heavy timber door and motioned for them to stay where they were.
‘Auberon,’ said the closest sprite. ‘We sensed when you would arrive, so timed our work accordingly.’ Then he turned into the room and yelled, ‘Right, let ‘er rip!’ A humming sounded, and sprites could be seen busily mixing potions, waving wands, and wielding car jumper cables.

Sama craned her neck for a better look, not sure what she was watching. With a crackle of electricity and blue wand bursts, a shimmering person sat up on a table.
‘Gabe!’ Sama yelled, and started forward, only to be blocked by the door-sprite.
‘You won’t make it, so don’t try,’ it said in a high pitched, but gruff voice.

Gabe was still sitting, but moving his arms and hands around in excitement. His ghostly glow was fading as he unclipped the jumper cable clasps from his toes. He saw Sama and laughed happily, hopping off the table and walked to the door on slightly shaky legs.

He threw his arms wide for a hug, and Sama embraced him violently. ‘Wow, you’re cold. C’mon, let’s get out into the sun and warm you up.’
Gabe flinched and stayed still. ‘Sun? I haven’t seen it for so long that I don’t know if I’m ready yet.’
‘That’s cool. We’ll stay here and I’ll warm you up.’
‘Mmm, warm. You’re so warm Sama, and I don’t know why, but you smell so good.’
‘What?’ she said, pulling back from him in surprise. She watched him lying in her arms with his eyes shut, and thought his face looked subtly wrong. This one had a different feel to it. The lines of his face were missing, and he was pale. But the body had just been created, and maybe that’s how it works, she thought.

Gabe’s mouth opened and leant towards her, and she saw that he now had enlarged fangs and seemed intent on taking a piece out of her. She shoved him away and lept to her feet.

‘Vampire?! Your maggoty sprites made him a vampire body, Auberon?!’

On to part 8.

Constructive criticism welcome.

© 2008 Damian Herde

After the Party (Spirit Walks Part 7. Blood Red)

A continuation of a story that will travel across many of the groups in the Spirit Walks multi-group challenge.

This one is pretty raw, I admit! Pushing the midnight time limit, so it’s had little in the way of polish or editing. I’ll get back to it!
Now the comp time is up for new entries, part 8 will be the end of the story, regardless of where the story goes, LOL! Mainly due to the fact I won’t have to keep it to under 1000 words now ;)

Part 1 is here

Part 2 is here

Part 3 is here.

Part 4 is here

Part 5 is here

Part 6 is here

After the Party (Spirit Walks Part 7. Blood Red) belongs to the following groups:

Blood Red - All things vampiric and Short stories - Spherical Scriptings
  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 2 months ago

    brrrrr, there’s always a catch!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Anne van Alkemade’s comment, 2 months ago

    Haha, karma karma :)
    Now what does she do with a thirsty vampire?

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 2 months ago

    you mean you don’t know
    :o)

  • Gayla Drummond

    Gayla Drummond, 2 months ago

    Oh, I’ll grab the nail gun for those little suckers!! LOL…nice twist, D!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Anne van Alkemade’s comment, 2 months ago

    Oh I have my ideas! This story has a few threads to tie off in the next (and last) chapter.
    I’m just fishing to see what comes in, LOL!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Gayla Drummond’s comment, 2 months ago

    Heheh, there’s a nail gun coming! Whether it gets into Sama’s hands with the sprites is in doubt though. But it doesn’t seem fair to let them off. I wonder if sprite blood is toxic?

  • gypsycaster

    gypsycaster, 2 months ago

    LMAO!!! Knew there had to be a twist…nasty Fae! LOL!
    I hear nice dusty iron filings are very easy to find…..
    Well done you! Got us all hanging on every word!
    (not being critical I swear) This was the only clumsy bit.:

    ‘Wonderfully! I don’t remember getting to bed, but I’d had was a great night.’

    But I LOVE this story!

  • gypsycaster

    gypsycaster, 2 months ago

    oh…and now the Kim Harrison comment is even more the case! LOL!

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery, 2 months ago

    Oh dear, Karma indeed!! Makes me wonder what that boy had been up to while still alive..and human. Poor Sama…well like they say, you can pick your friends, but not your family!

  • Empress

    Empress, 2 months ago

    That Auberon … what is he waiting for? Unless he’s lulling Sama into a false sense of security and about to pounce in the 8th.

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to gypsycaster’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks gypsycaster! Haha, I don’t think the Fae are being nasty (okay, maybe the sprites are, LOL!).
    And thanks for that typo spotting! I must’ve been halfway through deciding which way to take that sentence. I’m happy for those sort of suggestions, so keep ‘em coming ;)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to gypsycaster’s comment, 2 months ago

    And I’ve gone and bought a Kim Harrison book today, LOL :)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to jcmontgomery’s comment, 2 months ago

    Haha, they’ll have a hard time explaining this at christmas dinner :)
    I don’t think Gabe had been particularly bad, but gullible and hung with the wrong crowd (ie the cult priestesses!).
    The karma was probably Sama’s, since she sorta antagonised the sprites :)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Empress’s comment, 2 months ago

    Hmm, I don’t know, I think he’s just taking things as they come. He didn’t authorise the vampire upgrade, that was sprite spite (and that’s not being hit in the back of the head by a can of lemonade, heh)!
    I dunno about Auberon, he’s got this facade to maintain, and he also generally doesn’t care about mortals one way or the other, but he might sorta like her a little. Or maybe he really wants a nail gun.

  • gypsycaster

    gypsycaster, 2 months ago

    Glad to help! Hope you like the book…I’m kind of addicted!

  • gypsycaster

    gypsycaster, 2 months ago

    ...nail gun…definately…

  • Empress

    Empress, 2 months ago

    you do realise Kim Harrison falls into the romance category, right?

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to gypsycaster’s comment, 2 months ago

    Hope so :)
    I’ve just got to finish a Neil Gaiman book first!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Empress’s comment, 2 months ago

    Oh hush, LOL!
    So it’ll be good for me to get a few pointers for the romance writing challenge then, heheh!

  • Empress

    Empress, 2 months ago

    Actually, considering book 4 in the series … NO!
    But also look for Lilith Saintcrow’s Dante Valentine series … has a very cool website and newsletter. As for the name – makes me so jealous.

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Empress’s comment, 2 months ago

    LOL :)
    I’m sure I’ll cope with the romance as long as there’s plenty of fantasy/horror/sci-fi going on too!
    Ha, Lilith Saintcrow! I bet you could do better than that with an author identity (or is it you…?)

  • Empress

    Empress, 2 months ago

    The really amazing one is Sparkle Hayter. True. Writes tart noir

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Empress’s comment, 2 months ago

    Oh lordy, that’s a cracker! And sounds like you’ve hit on a cool forum topic, LOL!

  • Miri

    Miri, 2 months ago

    i somehow missed all these…duh….but you’re no on my watchlist so no escape!!!
    Just had a fabulous half hour reading from the beginning!! what a great world, enjoyed being lost in it, liked all the little twists (like he was her brother) & the humour & the characters (the sprites are my favourite!)& how clever to interweave between groups…..but please pretty please don’t leave it there.!!!....i want to see how the vampire adds a whole new dimension – looking forward to the next bit :-)

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis, 2 months ago

    Excellent writing Damian. I am sorry I am reading them out of order, shame on me. I am going to go back and start at one, and go through the whole series. Smiles from Jane:-)

  • Alison Pearce

    Alison Pearce, 2 months ago

    Fabulous Damian! Can’t wait for more!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Miri’s comment, 2 months ago

    Haha, thanks Miri :)
    I had a lot of late nights to get them done in time for Spirit Walks, so had a break once the deadline passed. I’ll finish it if I don’t get distracted writing too many other things, LOL!
    LOL, those sprites remind me of grumpy little old men ;)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to JaneAParis’s comment, 2 months ago

    LOL, thanks Jane, hope you enjoy it from the start :)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Alison Pearce’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Alison, I’ll get onto the last bit :)

Add your comment

You need to login or signup to add your comment to this work.