Sama stood beside the mute ghost of her brother, and the chill rising from his proximity made her shiver again. She wrapped Auberon’s cloak tighter around her, although the ghostly chill penetrated her as if she were unclothed.
‘Auberon, you’d said you’d help me. Help me bring Gabe back.’
The Lord of the Faerie watched her impassively for a moment before answering. ‘I can return this spirit to his body. However, that is a much greater task than simply pointing you towards a ghost, as you originally asked. I will reserve further conditions upon our deal.’
Sama was well beyond caring about the details of her arrangements, as she was not going to walk away after having come this far. The open-ended deal she had made last night with the Horned God still hung over her as well, so she thought there really wasn’t much more to lose. ‘Yes, yes, Auberon; if you must quibble! What do you need to fix Gabe?’
‘His body.’
‘Oh,’ said Sama, thinking of the rites the priestesses of the Cult of Cybele had performed with Gabe, both before and after death. ‘His body’s been mulched,’ she said.
‘That is somewhat problematic.’
‘But you can still do something?!’ Sama asked, her face lighting up again with hope.
‘Of course. But you are asking for ever increasing levels of work in this agreement.’
Sama sighed and nodded. ‘Whatever it takes, Auberon.’
He smiled and said, ‘You will need to see our homunculi fabricators,’ and pointed to a cluster of short, green, dragonfly-winged sprites.
Oh shit! Sama thought, briefly hiding her face in her hands. Why did it have to be them? Although all she said out loud was, ‘What’s a homunculi?’
‘A magically created body.’
The two of them walked back to the green swarm they had only recently watched pick themselves up off the floor. Sama retrieved the disk of faerie-toxic iron that was still sitting on the ground and pocketed it out of sight. Many large eyes watched her from faces tight with anger. She looked around and smiled, showing her open hands as a gesture that she came in peace. She received growls in return, and their sharp little teeth showed clearly.
‘Oh, c’mon guys!’ she said, ‘lighten up! That iron thing was just a joke, right!’
The sprites put their heads together in angry little groups, seemingly to complain about why Auberon hadn’t killed her already.
‘My sprites,’ said Auberon, finally intruding on their gossip. ‘I need you to help this mortal.’ A few choked exclamations of disgust came from the sprites, as they listened in disbelief. ‘You will create a homunculus to house this spirit,’ he continued, ‘and you will start now.’
The sprites turned and walked from the hall with their heads hung low. Auberon followed them, bringing Sama with him, and the ghost of Gabe drifted behind.
The sprites walked through a wide doorway into a strange looking room filled with almost-scientific apparatus. However, instead of being gleamingly clean, it was dingy and soot-covered, and cauldrons bubbled on fires throughout the room. The last sprite turned and let Auberon pass, then held his hand up to stop Sama. ‘You’re not welcome. Stay outside.’ A thick, wooden door slammed shut in front of her, and Gabe drifted on through it, leaving her alone in the corridor.
She paced for a moment, then scowled in frustration as she looked for a non-existent chair to sit on. She had only just begun an internal monologue on the benefits of power tools in modern faerie taming, when the door opened again, and Auberon returned to her.
‘I’ve explained what we want to them in no uncertain terms. They will create a complete replica of your brother’s body, to the same proportions as the original, and including body parts he was missing when he died. The spirit will then be inserted into it, with complete control, as if it were born into it.’
‘Yes!’ Sama leapt into the air in excitement, twirled around, with the forest-green cloak flowing out behind her, and rushed over and threw her arms around the faerie knight. She embraced him happily for a moment, until it occurred to her that she was probably overstepping castle etiquette, and stepped back sheepishly.
‘I am glad you’re pleased, my witch,’ he said with a slight smile.
‘How long will they take?’ she said.
‘Long enough for us to eat and then rest. The Hunt began many long hours ago, and we should not disturb the sprites while they work.’
‘That sounds great,’ Sama began, and then hesitated, remembering. ‘Auberon? I can’t eat the food of faerieland! If I do, I’ll be trapped here forever. That’s what the stories warn!’
‘You can buy items safely, however you can not just take. That is the difference.’
‘Oh,’ she said in relief. ‘What sort of money do you use? Because I don’t have any faerie money.’
He smiled and shook his head. ‘You can buy it from me with a smile.’
Sama laughed and beamed a radiant smile up at Auberon. He reached out and delicately mimed taking something from in front of her face. She felt something subtly shift, like a sensation deep within her jaw, and looked at him in amazement. ‘That wasn’t a figure of speech, that, buy it with a smile, line?’
‘No.’
‘You coulda told me!’
‘I did. Don’t worry, the feeling will pass. I haven’t taken your ability to smile, just that single smile. It’s helpful in some magical potions,’ he explained.
‘Right,’ she said, rubbing her jaw. ‘The food had better be bloody good for that!’
‘But of course. You’re a guest in the castle of the Lord of Faerieland. The meals here are the finest in existence.’
Constructive criticism welcome.
© 2008 Damian Herde
He Needs A Body to Love (Spirit Walks Part 6. Fantasy Art)
A continuation of a story that will travel across many of the groups in the Spirit Walks multi-group challenge.
Anne van Alkemade
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2 months ago
I just love this and I could see I think as you described it Damian. I like the modern vernacular mixed in with the mystic too, gives it a somewhat unique feel.
My only criticism is “she looked for a non-existent chair to sit on” sounds like she is wanting a ‘non-existent’ chair. I would suggest perhaps “she looked around her for a chair but there was none” or if you like the turn of phrase, perhaps “chairs were non-existent and so …” or something like that. Just the way I read it though.
I am going to have to back track to your previous ones. I don’t profess to be a fan of mythic tales, but KSeriphyn has converted my taste and now you’re feeding me. ;o)
Damian in reply to Anne van Alkemade’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks Anne! Haha, glad you’re turning to the fantasy side ;)
And thanks for the pick up too (I’ll get to it in the morning, brain’s getting sluggish, LOL!).
Now I’ve just got to finish this mini-series tomorrow :)
Gayla Drummond, 2 months ago
Going along swimmingly…poor Gabe! Yikes. Sama is one determined lady, though, and love that she’s doing all this for family. Great statement.
mlgkats, 2 months ago
yes you can picture every thing as you read the whole story , excellent writing
jcmontgomery, 2 months ago
I do like the humor more and more – I connect with it in a way. You see, when I am caught in difficult circumstances I tend to become quite the wise-ass because I simply can’t handle the amount of seriousness going on…helps me cope…I hope to see you work this in, but still mainiain that the edge it had in the beginning…
gypsycaster, 2 months ago
This is so much fun to read! Still…I can’t help things aren’t going to work quite the way Sama thinks they will…she’s trusting the Fae a bit much…
Damian in reply to Gayla Drummond’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks Gayla, glad you’re liking it! I thought the family thing would be funny after letting people thing it was a boyfriend or something. And we all think our siblings are idiots, yet still love and help them (and they’re probably not really idiots, but it’s a siblings duty to say they are, LOL!)
Damian in reply to mlgkats’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks a lot Mel, I’m glad you like it :)
Damian in reply to jcmontgomery’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks JC, that’s great of you to add that. I’ve liked writing it with a little humour; its been easier. I might work in both directions on this story, adding some of this humour into the first few parts, and dragging a bit more seriousness through to the end as well. I’m nearly finished (well the comp nearly is, so I’ve got to wrap it up today, LOL!)
Damian in reply to gypsycaster’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks gypsycaster! It’s almost over now. There’s one more (maybe two) parts and it’s done :)
Heheh, oh yes, she’s trusting the Fae waaay too much!
Empress, 2 months ago
will Gabe get any extra bits?
Damian in reply to Empress’s comment, 2 months ago
What, like two where he once had one? LOL!
I think the deal was that they’d not produce a body like the one he died in, which was missing a few key elements. But the sprites are not pleased, oh no, and are busily looking for a loophole as we speak :)
Damian in reply to Damian’s comment, 2 months ago
And there’s one key group I haven’t visited yet ;)
Empress, 2 months ago
well, of course … SSG
barebelly, 2 months ago
I am intrigued, continue please and soon
mlgkats, 2 months ago
you are so welcome :)
Alison Pearce, 2 months ago
I look forward to more Damian! Wonderful!
Damian in reply to Empress’s comment, 2 months ago
SSG? Super secret group? LOL
Damian in reply to barebelly’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks Tanya! More a bit later on (all things going well, LOL!)
Damian in reply to Alison Pearce’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks Alison! Now I’m racing the closing time :)