As pale as the flowers of the night

As pale as the flowers of the night by Damian
As pale as the flowers of the night by Damian

As pale as the flowers of the night

My first effort at doing the ‘poem as image’ thing :)

The poem is here on RedBubble.

This poem is about my inspiration for creative writing, my muse. She comes to me by night. The demands of the day keep us apart, and I miss her…

As pale as the flowers of the night belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical. and Writers' Market
  • Tallulah

    Tallulah, 6 months ago

    I’ve read it over and over about 4 times now….really beautiful words and haunting images…..fantastic first effort Damian…...keep them coming…...

  • Damian

    Damian, 6 months ago

    Thanks Lisa, I’m glad you like it :)
    This was my first poem, as well as my first time building one into an image.

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats, 6 months ago

    good work.you did really well

  • Catherine Crimmins

    Catherine Crim..., 6 months ago

    you diod a fantastic job Damian..i cant wait to see more

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 6 months ago

    Damian – this is hauntingly touching….love it!

  • Oddpixels

    Oddpixels, 6 months ago

    what a beautiful poem for your muse…beautiful!

  • Damian

    Damian, 6 months ago

    Thanks mlgkats, Catherine and Suzanne! I’m pleased you like it :)

  • Damian

    Damian, 6 months ago

    Hi Rach, thanks! Glad you think so :)

  • Karen Cougan

    Karen Cougan, 6 months ago

    lovely Damian
    xkc

  • Dee Boylan

    Dee Boylan, 6 months ago

    Beautiful Damian…I love the idea of a Muse….so romantic…..nice to see your softer less scary side…..: )

  • Cindy  Perrinjaquet

    Cindy Perrinj..., 6 months ago

    Really special Damian!!!

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 6 months ago

    Oh Damien…this is the most beautiful thing I have seen in a long long time.

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 6 months ago

    DamiAn* even…how rude of me to spell your name wrong! Forgive the typo? :)

  • Kym  Breeze

    Kym Breeze, 6 months ago

    this is wonderful Damian….good combo….cheers

  • umauma

    umauma, 6 months ago

    This is beautiful Damian…

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman, 6 months ago

    This is just excellent and one of my favourite ending…’the daylight that has stolen my soul from its muse’. Brilliant .)

  • Damian

    Damian, 6 months ago

    Thanks Karen :)

    LOL Dee, thanks! I don’t really have a scary side :)

    Thanks poppy!

    Thank you Kristy, I’m so glad you think so! LOL, no worries on the name, I’m used to it :)

    Thanks Kym, glad you like it!

    Thanks Uma!

    Thank you Robert, I appreciate that! :)

  • EdgeOfReality

    EdgeOfReality, 6 months ago

    The flowers are beautiful. And although I’m no great poet reader or writer, I find these words hauntingly lovely.

  • Damian

    Damian, 6 months ago

    Thanks EdgeOfReality, I appreciate that :)

  • karolina

    karolina, 6 months ago

    what a perfect image for this poem! nice work :)

  • Damian

    Damian, 6 months ago

    Thanks karolina, glad you think so!

  • anaisnais

    anaisnais, 5 months ago

    Just perfect, this is exactly the thing I wish to do to add interest to my writing, but I don’t have photoshop and am yet to discover how else to do it. I am so in awe of you! Favouriting this too!

  • Damian

    Damian, 5 months ago

    Thanks Anna-Marie! I’m glad you like it!
    And I did this in Photoshop, but if you don’t have that, maybe you have PowerPoint (in Microsoft Office)? You could make a slide with custom dimensions, and an image background, and add your writing in text boxes over the top, and then save the slide as an image file. Doing that could still get some good results (I think LOL!)

  • jaycee

    jaycee, 5 months ago

    I love the way you word things… very poetic and somewhat old fashioned.. well done!

  • Damian

    Damian, 5 months ago

    Thanks jaycee, cool comment :)

  • Emily Allison

    Emily Allison, 5 months ago

    Excellent…both image and poem…POWERFUL…brilliant!

  • Lucindawind

    Lucindawind, 5 months ago

    excellent Damian ..

  • kcranmer

    kcranmer, 5 months ago

    Very inspiring work, well done!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Emily Allison’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thanks Emily! Glad you like it :)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Lucindawind’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thanks Elaine!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to kcranmer’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thanks kcranmer, glad you think so :)

  • Brita Lee Miklouho-Maklai

    Brita Lee Mikl..., 5 months ago

    Beautiful poem, beautiful image. the Mystery of white flowers that bloom in the night

  • Rhonda Fulks

    Rhonda Fulks, 5 months ago

    Nicely done! I love poetry too…..

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Brita Lee Miklouho-Maklai’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thanks Brita, I’m glad you like it!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Rhonda Fulks’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thanks Rhonda, I’m glad you like this one :)

  • Rachael  Hope

    Rachael Hope, 5 months ago

    This is very capturing and simple in the most beautiful way

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Rachael Hope’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thank you littleditty, I’m glad you like it!

  • Kate Towers IPA

    Kate Towers IPA, 5 months ago

    great work !

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Kate Towers IPA’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thanks Kate!

  • JustPaula

    JustPaula, 4 months ago

    Another goodie Danian!!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to JustPaula’s comment, 4 months ago

    LOL, thanks Paula :)

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl, 4 months ago

    Fucking exquisite and so so so true.

    jen

  • DarwinsMishap

    DarwinsMishap, 4 months ago

    First try, and you hit it on the spot! The poem is fantastic, and the shot is a well. All around, a fantastic image, Damian!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to deliriousgirl’s comment, 4 months ago

    LOL, cheers Jen! Glad you liked it!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to DarwinsMishap’s comment, 4 months ago

    Thanks Dars, glad you like it! I don’t have that many poems to work with, LOL! Although I’ve thought about flash fiction as an image…

  • DarwinsMishap

    DarwinsMishap, 4 months ago

    You know, that’d work beautifully, I think. You need to try this…yes. Spooky, waggly, psychological thingamajiggy fingers Make it a flaaaaash…:)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to DarwinsMishap’s comment, 4 months ago

    Yes…must…make…flash…
    Heheh! Should be an interesting experiment :)

  • DarwinsMishap

    DarwinsMishap, 4 months ago

    LOL I think so! Dare ya! ;)

  • lolowe

    lolowe, 3 months ago

    This was beautiful….

  • Tara Sheffer-Archie

    Tara Sheffer-A..., 3 months ago

    Great work on this! I like!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to lolowe’s comment, 3 months ago

    Thanks so much lolowe!

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Tara Sheffer-Archie’s comment, 3 months ago

    LOL, thanks a lot Tara :)

  • Faye Ashford

    Faye Ashford, 2 months ago

    I’m blown away. The poem is so beautifully haunting and works really well with the image. Fantastic

  • Tabitha Borges

    Tabitha Borges, 2 months ago

    stunning words and piece…:0)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Faye Ashford’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks so much Faye, I’m glad you like them both :)

  • Damian

    Damian in reply to Tabitha Borges’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Tabitha :)

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