What is a real friend:]
A real friend is someone that cares about you
but not just because your pretty or ugly or
the most popular in the school.
A real friend is someone that you can trust.
And someone who cares about you and love
you for who you are and what you are.
To me the most important thing is a true friend
that will stick up for you no matter what
happens to you and they will also help get you
through tough situations that whether the outcome
is good or bad.
And that is what I call a real true friend.
To me a great example of a true friend is
sharnai my best friend, thank you:}
written by Ebony Jane Avalos,
14.3.08
WHAT IS A FRIEND?
this is just a little some thing written by my 11 year old daughter Ebony, she is my second eldest and I am very proud of her for writing this the way she has.
bribiedamo, 4 months ago
great piece Ebony….......Sharnai is lucky to have u as a friend….........
dairygirl08 in reply to bribiedamo’s comment, 4 months ago
thank you for your comment, will let ebony know and yes they are great mates and are lucky to have each other as friends!
david campbell, 4 months ago
a friend is me
Jase812, 4 months ago
Dido !
mmills3080, 4 months ago
very well put for an 11 year old!
dairygirl08 in reply to david campbell’s comment, 4 months ago
how true is that!!, thanks for your comment
dairygirl08 in reply to Jase812’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks for your comment Jase
dairygirl08 in reply to mmills3080’s comment, 4 months ago
I have to agree with you 100% there mmills3080, thanks heaps for your comment!
pinkyjain, 4 months ago
Wow, that is awesome from an 11 year old. Ebony has much insight & talent, too. Such a beautiful name, too, Ebony
dairygirl08 in reply to pinkyjain’s comment, 4 months ago
Thank you very much for your lovely kind words about my daughter, she does have a lot of insight and talent and has a lot of inseration as well.
Thank you!
wolfman, 4 months ago
wow ebony this is a beautful written i think to have you as a friend would be an honor.
dairygirl08 in reply to wolfman’s comment, 4 months ago
it is great how she has written this!
daffodil, 3 months ago
Ebony is very talented ! I like the repetition of the words “real friend” or
“true friend ” at the beginning or at the end of the line.
She expresses her feelings very well.
dairygirl08 in reply to daffodil’s comment, 3 months ago
Thank you so very much for your kind words about my daughters work it is much appreciated!
Charlene Aycock, 3 months ago
awesome Ebony
David Harris, 3 months ago
Your daughter seems very well rounded and inteligent! That must be testiment to how you have brought her up and the values you have installed! Very well done on doing such a fine job, and congratulations to your daughter for such a lovely piece of writting!
dairygirl08 in reply to Charlene Aycock’s comment, 3 months ago
she has done a fantastic job with writing this, I shall let her know about your comment!
dairygirl08 in reply to David Harris’s comment, 3 months ago
WOW, thank you for your lovely comment, I can not take all the compliment my husband jason, her dad is a wounderful dad and could not wish for a better father for our 6 children and I could only bring my childrn up and give them a much better childhood then what I ever had by going through and learning what I did before I had my children.
Thank you once again for your lovely comment it is greatly appreciated and means a lot to me to have some one say such lovely words about my daughter :)
David Harris, 3 months ago
You are very welcome.
ebonyjane, 3 months ago
thank you that is some nice stuff you have got there
ebonyjane, 3 months ago
I would just like to thank you all for your nice comments about my writing and am very happy to know that it is liked by so many people.
thank you once again to you all.
Mark Peterson, 3 months ago
Very well written Ebony, wonderful job :)
juice, 2 months ago
so honest writing Ebony…you write so beautifully….I would feel so blessed to have you as a friend…thank you for sharing this one
dairygirl08 in reply to Mark Peterson’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you mark for your comment, I will let ebony know about it
dairygirl08 in reply to juice’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you very much Jewels for your lovely comment to my daughter I will let her know about it :)
eXposure, 2 months ago
you are very fortunate to have each other … a beautiful write
i have moved around over the last few yrs ,
over illness and seperation and lost mine
its now terribly hard to let people close …
gillsart, 2 months ago
What a mature 11 year old ..and a very nice person Ebony must be !!
lenaprehn, 2 months ago
what a talented eleven year old. . a credit to you.
Roscoe Davis III, 2 months ago
great poem from an eleven yr old.
Jim Marshal, about 1 month ago
Your daughter was more cluey than I was at 11! You must be very proud of her. Thanks for sharing.
dairygirl08 in reply to eXposure’s comment, 29 days ago
It is all ways hard when you move or loose some one close to then let others in close, I know this only 2 well my self and as you can see so does my daughter ebony that wrote this poem,
thank you for your lovely comment it is much appreciated
dairygirl08 in reply to gillsart’s comment, 29 days ago
thank you very much gillsart, she is indeed a very mature 11 year old and she is a lovely young girl
dairygirl08 in reply to lenaprehn’s comment, 29 days ago
Thank you very much!
dairygirl08 in reply to Roscoe Davis III’s comment, 29 days ago
Thank you kindly
dairygirl08 in reply to Jim Marshal’s comment, 29 days ago
I am very proud of her, she is very mature for her age.
Thank you for your kind words!
Els Steutel, 27 days ago
wonderful words of a 11 year old child…but she is soooo right about it:))
dairygirl08 in reply to Els Steutel’s comment, 27 days ago
Thank you kindly Els Steutel, that s what I loved about this when my daughter bought it to me and I read it, the fact about how true it is and how well she put it.
MtnMan, 27 days ago
Wise beyond her years.
dairygirl08 in reply to MtnMan’s comment, 27 days ago
she is indeed