Dark is my heart

Adriana Glackin
Author: Adriana Glackin
Word Count: 31
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Dark is my heart

Well, they didn’t call it the “challenge cafe” for nothing…let me take a happy snap any day! My entry for week 3, the theme “Dark”.

Arrogantly your words battered my brittle body
that left me forever infected
Black ice stagnates in my veins
Numb, my eyes that won’t see you
Dark, my heart that despises you.

  • Mark German

    Mark Germancommunity host

    Wow, dabble – strong words.
    xxx

  • Russell Fry

    Russell Fry

    This is very, very good…..

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks Mark and cvdad! Didn’t think churning out 31 words would be so hard! LOL!

  • Damian

    Damian

    Great work dabble, I really like this.

  • alistair mcbride

    alistair mcbride

    Wow! these words would be perfect with my last image that i posted,well done Dabble

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks Damian and Alistair. You’re welcome to use the words with your image if you like…

  • dairygirl

    dairygirl

    very strong and powerful, very well written

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks dairygirl! =D

  • Patricia L. Ballard

    Patricia L. Ba...

    Great work, Dabble. We’ve all been there. You express it well.

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks Patricia =)

  • Lisa Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Indeed these are very strong words, very well written…

  • Melissa Vowell

    Melissa Vowell

    ooh Dabs! I’m impressed my darling ;)

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks LisaG and Mellymoo! ; )

  • EmptyHead

    EmptyHead

    Strong emotions….
    Black ice stagnates in my veins ….. creative, like it.
    Take it easy….

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks EmptyHead =D

  • Helene Kippert

    Helene Kippert

    Great work dabble – really powerful

  • gordontant

    gordontant

    Hey Dabble, Very good, and brilliant descriptions

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks Helene and Gordon =)

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra

    “Numb, my eyes that won’t see you” The coldest of tears! ouch!!!!!

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks C.C. ;)

  • flower68

    flower68

    ouch.I felt every word!

  • Adriana Glackin

    Adriana Glackin

    thanks flower68 ;)

  • David Mapletoft

    David Mapletoft

    Dark, very dark; and sad.
    Forever…is a long time.

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    abstract .. i like ur style

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