Blue Moon

I waited thirty days inside

A glass box made of presumptions,
Expecting nothing.
Revolutions later
You turned your shining countenance
Toward my world.
Your cratered eyes looked down,
Your blue shadowed light streamed
Into my box.
You saw my ladybug wings
Folded closed around me,
So I wouldn’t shatter.
While I gazed at your face,
Your smile touched my flaming doubt-wings,
Cooling them to clear crystal.
After you wrapped me
In a woolen shawl of blue
You broke the box, and soon part of you
Began to shine in me
And I knew then, dear friend,
That while you were still full moon,
I would learn to fly.


Cyndianne

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This poem was written to express the gratitude that I feel towards my former boss/mentor/current friend who brought me out of my box.

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Comments

  • ein22
    ein22almost 4 years ago

    If only all bosses cared so much.

    You have a lovely peice here. Compassionate and admiring.

    Well done.

  • Cyndianne
    Cyndiannealmost 4 years ago

    yes, she is an unusual person-thanks!

  • Natella2020
    Natella2020almost 4 years ago

    Wow, your boss? That is really cool, what a unique and thoughtful tribute. Sweetly written.

  • lianne
    liannealmost 4 years ago

    Wow – this is just a fabulous piece of writing! The loveliest metaphor imaginable and with a lovely rhythm too. Wonderful tribute – how great that you had such a mentor!

  • Thanks Lianne, I agree, she is still a good friend.

    – Cyndianne

  • NoraFraser
    NoraFraseralmost 4 years ago

    wow-i am impressed

  • Thank you Nora

    – Cyndianne