8 bullets

I have a gun with 8 bullets
I could kill a man with each one
People say I’m crazy
and that this cannot be done
But I beg to differ
I will kill myself 8 times
7 to different body parts
for each deadly sin
and 1 for my long lost head
since that’s where it begins

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die, kill, deadly, sins, bullets, 8

I have fears that I may cease to be.

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Comments

  • RVRFNX
    RVRFNXalmost 5 years ago

    Holy shit wow this is amazing :)! Great writing!

  • Oh, wow, thank you. Thank you very much! :)

    – Kirstine Dieckmann

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockalmost 5 years ago

    A very strong piece of poetry my friend….terrific writing.

  • Thank you very much! I appreciate your comment :) And I am happy you like it.

    – Kirstine Dieckmann

  • wildwomenlove
    wildwomenlovealmost 5 years ago

    this made me laugh out loud, it’s great and naughty and punchy ! I like it. well done Kirstine. big love x

  • Aw, thank you! I was in a bit of a “screw it” mood when I wrote it, glad you could feel it :)

    – Kirstine Dieckmann

  • Tom Krantz
    Tom Krantzalmost 5 years ago

    aw spare that pretty head of yours, without it we wouldn’t see that beautiful face or read your beautiful words. I like this piece a lot, I love the captivating flow it has and those last two lines. Really powerful stuff, you’re an amazing writer.

  • I will try and spare my head. But sometimes it just takes control. I don’t have gun though ;)
    Thank you, I’m thrilled you think so.

    – Kirstine Dieckmann

  • Alain Christopher
    Alain Christopheralmost 5 years ago

    Eight times killed by you it means etrnity
    Eight times touched by your boullets makes my soul clear more than clarity
    Eight times killed and ressurected by one single letter of your poetry
    Shoot baby shoot!!

  • S .
    S .almost 5 years ago

    love this piece
    careful of that head of yours
    -s

  • I’ll watch out. And thank you! :)

    – Kirstine Dieckmann

  • Mark Ramstead
    Mark Ramsteadalmost 5 years ago

    In your face writing! (gun in your face) O.O

  • bloorain
    bloorainover 4 years ago

    wow I can believe I never read this! the most powerful I read all day.fav!

  • Oncemore
    Oncemoreover 4 years ago

    Powerful impact on me…great work:)

  • Jet ...
    Jet ...over 4 years ago

    incredible. fave!

  • Oh, thank you!
    I always found this piece kind of simple, but apparently that works :D

    – Kirstine Dieckmann

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