Those Three Words
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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, ! ♥♥♥Love Is (Join us!)♥♥♥ !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Friends of RedBubble, Lifeline, Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season , Potentially Published High, Rising Star, Shameless Self-Promotion, Up & Coming Writers and Writing: Persuing HappinessWhen you told me about the breifing, you said it made you want, made you think. When I asked what it made you want, you said “to go back”, my world started falling around me, my vision was going black. Because I know that if you return, to that bloodied field, as strong as you are, your body will yeild. You would never return to me, never build your home. You would come back to go into a hole.
You would be getting out, and you wanted to go back in
I did not want my baby to return to that living Hell
it hurt you before, seeing and doing all you did
and the tactics used against your brothers hurt you again
But, you told me you werent,
you would not return
to that place that hurt you
to do what you yearned
To go back, go back to combat
After you had reassured me, and calmed my heart,
you went on to make me start
“Would it be wrong” you said, “if I said ‘I love you’ right now?”
I swear I saw heaven, i felt my heart swell
“Can I have a minute” I said, “to hyperventilate?”
You’re smile I could see, even though you are miles away.
When it was time for us to say bye, as usual, i wanted to keep talking to you
with a promise to talk later, you said those three words again. And I said
“I love you, too”
ktspinstu
WTF?! How come I wasn’t told???
CrystalNoellyn replied
I did!! I texted you bc you were at work!! You didnt reply!
CrystalNoellyn replied
omg, just checked the texts, n it didnt send! So sorry, my friend!!! but that was pretty much how he told me. I was like “OMG!!!”
CrystalNoellyn replied
so, out of curiousity, do you like this piece? Since all you said, being the bff you are, was why the hell werent you told. lol.
Shoaib .
wowwwwwwwwwwww thats so so romantic
i love this !!! and CONGRATS !!!
CrystalNoellyn replied
Thank you! I was so excited! It is rather romantic, isnt it?
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I’ve discovered that a lot of my recent inspiration has come from him. He broke a writers block I was experiencing. Little things he says or something he does… he is a hell of a tough man, but he can be so incredibly sweet. He may not think so, but he is utterly romantic. I love it!
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Thanks again!!
Nascha
Wonderful. xx
CrystalNoellyn replied
Thank you
ktspinstu
it’s a good piece, i just couldn’t get over the fact I WASN’T TOLD!!!
CrystalNoellyn replied
i tried to tell you! i just didnt realize that it didnt send!!! SORRY!!! but, i’ll let you know everything else, pronto! you’ll be the first to know!
ktspinstu
better be!
CrystalNoellyn replied
such a demanding best friend! lol
“there’s more to life than a volvo, that’s why you drive one.”
:D
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Can I have a minute” I said, “to hyperventilate?
Awesome. Great read my friend!
CrystalNoellyn replied
Aw, thanks, Cass!! The situation was sweet, and although he is no longer in my life, I still this piece and the conversation behind it.