Not Being Here
The most oblivious person in the world…
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You’re in your element
Which one are you?
Perhaps you’re iron
‘Cause this is a bit ironic
Judge me,
I ask the back of your head
You are a critic
You’re going crazy
Becoming hyper-critical
It’s a one way street
With two dead ends
Where nobody wins
But I always lose
It’s the story of my life
To be there when you’re gone
And miss you when you’re not
But I reflect the truth
You’re always gone
And I always miss you
I crave your ignorance
Your imperfections
The unquestionable manner
And you’re beauty
You’re full of it
It’s an endless race
20 minutes ahead
Means one day behind
And one step beyond
When I choose not to be here
Unknowing of where you are
Then it’s all over
SashaC
Well done once again, Cj.
I really like your writing style
wigs
this is a great write….. most enjoyable flowing read
wigs
Congratulations….......
You have been featured in Writing: Persuing Happiness
Crstfr replied
That is exciting! Thanks for reading and for your nice comments :)
Shaun Green
Nice work. First two lines had me. Nice use of double-blinds to illustrate the often frustrating nature of relationships – ‘the problem of others’. Cool.
Crstfr replied
Wow. I appreciate the thought you put into your comments!