The Sun Is Calling Menzies
A verse about experience and memory
The Sun Is Calling Menzies belongs to the following groups:
1 In The Beginning - Ancient Practices, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], First Things, Spiritual Art, The Healing Journey and The Word TreeThe golden rays spread across the burnt-orange earth,
where rocks now splintered are pebbles dispersed.
The aeons have passed where once there was lush grass,
now there is the blood-red dirt.
And the Sunlight of Gold says goodnight to Menzies once bold,
now worn and left in the cold.
As evening arrives with a chill to its breath,
in the still of the dusk,
you may hear the dead of the mines whisper,
We tried, and the day birds squawk as they swiftly fly by.
And down by the creek, on the edge of the town,
the peppercorn trees creak and rustle near beds now dry.
And the blak-fellas speak in whispers it seems,
as their night fires now crackle with warmth.
And the Sunlight of Gold knows their stories of old,
while the gold of the soul is now stolen all gone;
and the Earth weeps to its children in vain,
from its open wounds and deep holes from miner’s pain.
Yes the night does come again,
in the wake of the setting Sun.
And the listless town-folk saunter along
the dusty main road, as the Sun’s last glow
says goodbye to fellow travellers.
And as I stand out on the flat,
just beyond the blak-fellas shacks,
I hear a humming from days gone by,
a bull-roarer being twirled in the sky.
Then I listen to the spaces between the squawking,
talking birds. Ah, the land she is calling,
and my Tjamu he is singing,
and the sound of water gushing forth
from summer night storms come rushing;
and the trees and reeds and rushes,
by the sandy creek bed that looked dead,
drink deeply of this nectar from the Dreamtime Song Protector.
And the Sun dips its lights, winks and says goodnight,
and Menzies sleeps on desert site.
The Dreamtime beings of the night,
sing by campfires warm and strong,
by dusty, sandy creek beds,
under star-light where no walls block
the Song from desert hold, then sleep on earth-bound beds.
And all this is going on
while others of new ways close their doors,
in solitude they stay.
I wander in the night,
in chilled air with goose bumps,
my skin electric and alive,
as the moon lights up my path,
and the creatures of the dark forage
and watch after my passing by,
as my Tjamu watches closely,
while I feel my way through country
that is my peoples land no more.
Then in the dawn-light rising,
the golden rays drift across the threshold
of the red-earth’s door,
and the cycle does begin again,
as I’m called back from my Dreaming.
Then I wait and watch in solemn silence —
wait for the night to call,
so we can again go walking upon
the earth-bound plane once more.
Before I sleep I see my Tjamu standing
on a rocky out-crop landing,
one leg propped upon the other,
figure four with knee cap pointing,
as he ensures the Sun is calling Menzies awake
again at four.
© DjA “Crowmanic” (1997)
NOTE: Menzies is a very small mostly-deserted town some 80 miles or so north of Kalgoorlie, WA
Tjamu means grand-father, great-uncle. (A title of respect towards ones significant male elder)
jase8812
Wow that just took me on a wonderful journey ! well written a very good read !
Crowmanic replied
Thanks Jase … pleased to read you enjoyed this piece…
Wendy Slee
a beautiful and soulstirring verse…...seems like another rich moment of reflection on life’s great journey…..
Crowmanic replied
My “home-sickness” mourns this Country each and every day, dear Wendy, it is much deeper than any loss that is tangible; whilst I mourn the passing of Ways and cultural existence we shall never know or regain. That is how I feel, though perhaps of little relevance to any other.
Wendy Slee
Maybe not, but the parallels are there for all who honour the earth and walk the path that their soul guides them to….... I honour your walk, my friend, and all the memories and experiences you hold dear. My roots in this country may never be as ancient or deep as yours, but I love it in my own way too and am haunted by many things that the material world has no knowledge of…..
Crowmanic replied
Wendy [pause] Wendy [pause] Wendy, wherefore art thou Wendy …
helene ruiz
A heart wrenching reality…..I think some can relate this to their “loss” of culture, and world regardless of their “roots”, sadly not many even think about such things these days it seems…excellent and moving writing
nkbellani
being a man of prose and paint, i have some difficulty understanding poetry and most goes over my head…until a poem like this comes along and goes straight to my heart…this reference to the sun is so wonderfully expressed that this makes me relate to these times that we are passing through…thank you so much… very well written…
Crowmanic replied
... and thank you for such kind and thoughtful (heart-felt) comment. Much appreciated, and pleased to know your response. Namaste …
nkbellani
Welcome and Namaste to you as well…
Astoreth
beautiful and deeply touching. xx
Crowmanic replied
Thank you… I am pleased you enjoyed this.
Ushna Sardar
Crowmanic replied
Ah, my dear Ushna, once again you folks at C.O.R.E. honour me. Thank you.
RuthFroehlinger
This is so, so good. I love it.
Crowmanic replied
Appreciate your response and comment. Thank you.
silverstrummer...
Congratulations also for your writings – David