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Crockpot
Author: Crockpot
Word Count: 22
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©1993

a junk pile
of old
rusted leaves
t U m b l e s
through the alley
like dead skins
on
fire

  • pinkyjain

    pinkyjain

    Oooooh, love this Lorie, it’s short but very vivid, i can see it in my mind’s eye, the pleathery leaves running through the alley on fire

  • Damian

    Damian

    Ah, made me smile :)

  • Crockpot

    Crockpot

    Sweet! Thanks so much Pinky and Damian!!

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