silhouette hovers
in shadows of moonlight;
lover’s voice comes
clothes cautiously,
carefully,
slip softly
fan blows,
breeze bites at my skin,
waves of sheet suck me under
my arms stretch down,
reaching to pull him close,
his fingers enter
twine with mine,
warm lips
come down on me
breathy whiskers and
warm whispers pet my skin
(goose-bumped from the wind)
barely touching mouth,
soft, smooth, gently probing me
to move—I moan for more, him
Going Down
©1995
pinkyjain, 9 months ago
Oooooh, so very erotic, & beautiful. You should put these in a book with yours & Mike’s artwork & publish them
Crockpot in reply to pinkyjain’s comment, 9 months ago
Ya know, there was a time we talked about doing that, but most of Mike’s artwork isn’t really appropriate. Plus I just don’t think my stuff is that good. But thanks!! :)
LocoCow, 9 months ago
Very sensual pice down to the barely touching mouths…
Damian, 9 months ago
Yeah, I’m with pinky. I’ve been enjoying your writing; you’re too hard on yourself :)
Crockpot in reply to Damian’s comment, 9 months ago
Well thanks Damian – I really do appreciate you taking the time to read it and comment… it’s just been a really, really long time since I’ve written anything halfway decent at all and so much of this stuff I look back on now and wonder if it’s too cliché or pretentious. LOL – but I suppose every writer goes through that at some point! ;)
Shannon Rene' ..., 9 months ago
awesome work…now only if most guys could actually do that shit right, we’d be in business ;)
Crockpot in reply to Shannon Rene' Justice’s comment, 9 months ago
Do what shit right?? Sex? We got that shit down to a tee, baby girl…
;)
Shannon Rene' ..., 9 months ago
lol, im sure you do dear, im sure you do
Thomas Josiah ..., 8 months ago
Cherish is the word that describes a vibrant and sensuous relationship.Start well…finish superb
Crockpot in reply to Thomas Josiah Chappelle’s comment, 8 months ago
Wow – thanks Tommy!! That’s an awesome compliment…!