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Drowned again my love regains
On my face your touch remains
Only now like a shell on a distant shore
No waves crashing down like they did before

And heaven begins where I end and you stepped in …


Just something I am working on at the moment, thought I would post it’s progress :)


Comments

  • Karla Pate-Bridges
    Karla Pate-Bri...about 7 years ago

    AWWWW I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Awwww :) That was quick Karla!! :) Thanks :) This is going to be a special one for me so it’s going to take a lot of extra thought ;)

    – Craig Shillington

  • I really really love that poem… I am actually working on another one at the moment so hopefully within the next 10 minutes I will post another one…..

    – Craig Shillington

  • I have been working on this for weeks Karla ;) Oops .. .And I know it won’t be finished for a while …. I guess like life .. .things change … this will evolve :)

    – Craig Shillington

  • Jodi Webb
    Jodi Webbabout 7 years ago

    Craig – yet again your genius is just too good! This is so lovely! I wish I had your talent with words, but am just as happy to read yours!

  • Awwww Jodi!!!

    YOU HAVE!!! Or rather …. I just write … and you can too!!! {{{{hugs}}}}

    – Craig Shillington

  • Karla Pate-Bridges
    Karla Pate-Bri...about 7 years ago

    yeah i know what you mean… i got into a rush with a lot of my other poems and wrote them and i got mad. i didnt think they were very good a lot of people said they liked them but i read some other peoples poems and i thought that mine were like chicken scratch compared to theres so i deleted them…

  • Ya dag!! I think we ALL feel that way about own own works …. be it poems, photography … or even just oirselves sometimes. Life can be a real hard Gig sometimes … but we get thru …. as long as we can express … who else can judge who we are …. but ourselves Karla. Easier said than done … I know!!

    – Craig Shillington

  • bobdollar
    bobdollarabout 7 years ago

    Thats really beautiful… i like this very much. Have you had the chance to publish any of your poems? i think their are a couple of books out there doing that type of thing. :)

  • Awww Thanks Elise :) :) I dunno that my work is good enough to be published though {{{{hugs}}}}

    – Craig Shillington

  • Karla Pate-Bridges
    Karla Pate-Bri...about 7 years ago

    yeah it is easier said than done but life wouldnt me a mystery without things like that. If we had all the answers to every situation and knew everything about the past present and future life would be so boring…. Like love and Pain you cant apreciate love without having pain…. That gives me another poem idea lol

  • OH Karla!!! That is so true!!! Pain hurts so bad … but gives so much perspective!!

    – Craig Shillington

  • Karla Pate-Bridges
    Karla Pate-Bri...about 7 years ago

    exactly

  • Tracey Bransfield
    Tracey Bransfieldabout 7 years ago

    You have all the girls swooning at your feet again, you smooth talker!!!

    It’s hard for me to believe that a man can actually express himself in such a beautiful way.
    Not that they do not have feelings of course. I just thought they would rather go to the bar for a drink with the guys, you know? ( that’s what I usually do) LOL….. pain..what pain?
    All in moderation of course…………….. seriously: you have the market cornered Craig, sheer genius!

  • VBS Awww Thanks Tracey. {{{hug}}} There is only one woman I want to swoon (well I don’t want her to swoon!!) {{{{{hug}}}}

    – Craig Shillington

  • hcroft
    hcroftabout 7 years ago

    lovely words Craig

  • flowerindattic
    flowerindatticabout 7 years ago

    Those words are so deeply… And also the meaning from my point of view…

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