Inside

on my knees again saying please again
why don’t you come down here sometime?
i’ll show you the pain give into your game
when you’re down so low above you only shines

you flow so fast I can’t keep up
your silence should have warned me
i should have kept it all inside
kept it all locked up inside me

Inside

30th September 2002

  • burntblue

    burntblue, 6 months ago

    this is so powerful. would make a great spoken word piece as it has great rhythm. or a song? i like it.

  • JLHopgood

    JLHopgood, 6 months ago

    I can relate to this. Your way with words astound me.

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 6 months ago

    great work {{{hugs}}}

  • Deri Dority

    Deri Dority, 6 months ago

    Beautifully written, so full of emotion.

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van AlkemadeWordsmith, 6 months ago

    I see the date – it’s from the heart.
    Your words are wonderful, but I hope you are well and truly past this now!

  • Craig Shillington

    Craig Shillington, 6 months ago

    Awwww Thanks so much for such quick comments on this little one guys :) :)

    BB – A song it is … ask my friend Rhana, she’ll tell you ;) Seriously … most of my words are written as a song in mind and I want to record them all. :)

    Jo … from the heart (at the time) Feelings can and do change though. 2002 was a very confusing year for me.

    Thanks Deri and Anne :) You are spot on Anne, well past it and forgiven too!!! Lucky me ;)

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin, 6 months ago

    I’m SINGING again CRAIG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (insert V V V VBS here!!!)

    P.S. Melbourne is good =))) Catch up when I get home xx

  • Craig Shillington

    Craig Shillington, 6 months ago

    Hehehe WOOOOOHOOOOOOO Rhana :) :) Harmonies ….... harmonies ;) VBS Glad you are enjoying Melb. :) :)

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