on my knees again saying please again
why don’t you come down here sometime?
i’ll show you the pain give into your game
when you’re down so low above you only shines
you flow so fast I can’t keep up
your silence should have warned me
i should have kept it all inside
kept it all locked up inside me
Inside
30th September 2002
burntblue, 6 months ago
this is so powerful. would make a great spoken word piece as it has great rhythm. or a song? i like it.
JLHopgood, 6 months ago
I can relate to this. Your way with words astound me.
Anne van Alkemade
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6 months ago
great work {{{hugs}}}
Deri Dority, 6 months ago
Beautifully written, so full of emotion.
Anne van Alkemade
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6 months ago
I see the date – it’s from the heart.
Your words are wonderful, but I hope you are well and truly past this now!
Craig Shillington, 6 months ago
Awwww Thanks so much for such quick comments on this little one guys :) :)
BB – A song it is … ask my friend Rhana, she’ll tell you ;) Seriously … most of my words are written as a song in mind and I want to record them all. :)
Jo … from the heart (at the time) Feelings can and do change though. 2002 was a very confusing year for me.
Thanks Deri and Anne :) You are spot on Anne, well past it and forgiven too!!! Lucky me ;)
Rhana Griffin, 6 months ago
I’m SINGING again CRAIG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (insert V V V VBS here!!!)
P.S. Melbourne is good =))) Catch up when I get home xx
Craig Shillington, 6 months ago
Hehehe WOOOOOHOOOOOOO Rhana :) :) Harmonies ….... harmonies ;) VBS Glad you are enjoying Melb. :) :)