Whisper my Name

Craig Shillington
Author: Craig Shillington
Word Count: 179
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Whisper my Name

2nd September 2002

Whisper my name in the wind
and I’ll wake with you
Your lips on my skin like a breeze
and I’ll shake with you
Coming to you from within
and I’ll lay with you
And all the world will begin
just like fate with you

I look into your eyes
and see myself there
not a care in the world
you always take me there
All the things we can be
all the things we will share
just give me a chance
to show how I care
Nothing you can ever do
Nothing you can ever say
will change the way I feel for you
and make me long for better days
for there’s nothing in this world
as real and close as you

Whisper my name in the wind
I’m awake with you
Your lips on my skin like a breeze
I’m so in love with you
I came to you from within
I’m a slave to you
and all the world can be sin
because I’m saved by you

  • AmandaWitt

    AmandaWitt

    Great use of language and imagery.

  • Karen Cougan

    Karen Cougan

    oh oh oh Craig this is so beautiful…........are you in love mate

    Happy New Year to you too
    love Karen

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana GriffinRedbubbley Schweppervescence

    I’m singing again Craig!!! You simply HAVE to lay this down… so incredibly beautiful.

  • Craig Shillington

    Craig Shillington

    VBS Awwwww :) :) Thanks so much guys :)

    Karen …. I’m not saying ;) LOL I wrote this years ago actually … I was in love then ;)

    Hehe Rhana …. you took the words right out of my mouth!!! :) I see this as a song :) :)

  • sally williams

    sally williams

    Just beautiful, Craig.

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana GriffinRedbubbley Schweppervescence

    I HEAR this as a song Craig… Get your butt to a recording studio ASAP man!

  • elizabethrose05

    elizabethrose05

    .. its beautiful :) prints it to give to fiance

  • MissKristy

    MissKristy

    Yup..I can hear this…friggin brilliant song.

  • Craig Shillington

    Craig Shillington

    Haha Rhana ….. I PROMISE …. as soon as I get back to Ballarat :) :) We have a deal ;)

    Awwwwww Congrats on that too Elizabeth :) :) I read, just haven’t commented yet. More power to love sweetheart :) :) :) :)

    Hehehe Thanks Kristy …. I’ll let you know when you can grab a copy ;) VBS

  • Kym  Breeze

    Kym Breeze

    OMG this is special and I hope the love that inspired it back then is still going strong….what person wouldn’t love to hear these words said/sung to them…..wow…

  • Janelle

    Janelle

    This is gorgeous Craig reeeaaallllyyyyy love it… have missed you (((hugs))) =o)

  • Tania Rose

    Tania Rose

    As a fellow lyricist, definately worth turning into a song. It practically sings itself…smiles to you

  • Craig Shillington replied

    One day Tania …. for sure :) :) Thank you :)

  • ANNETTE HAGGER

    ANNETTE HAGGER

    so beautfiul, craig, dont think theres a lady out there that wouldnt love to hear those words said to her…..anna ; )

  • Craig Shillington replied

    Awwwwww I know one ;) The one I wrote this for ;) You live and you learn I guess. giggle

  • Debi Adams

    Debi Adams

    this is awesome craig, and it is beautiful to recognise that these feelings do exist in this fast paced world. thank you

  • Craig Shillington replied

    VBS Thanks Debi. These were true feelings for someone I thought I was in love with a long time ago.

  • Emmahleee

    Emmahleee

    Love is such a beautiful thing, yet so hard to find true.

  • Craig Shillington replied

    True love maybe the hardest thing to find Emmahlee. Maybe True Love is that which we have for ourselves? VBS

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