Untitled (for now)
Poem Collaboration time people :) :)
- The idea here is to add TWO lines of the poem and let someone else add another two lines as we form a poem around the photo that can be added to the Red Bubble Collaboration Hub. :) Get involved and let’s see what wonderful work we can all make together :) :)
- You can still leave normal comments if you don’t want to join in.
- You can also come back at anytime to add another two lines, just give others a chance to add first :)
HAVE FUN!!!
- View the other Poem Collaborations here
- Untitled thus Far:
(click the lines to visit the Author :) )
Blasting the sun should feel hot now,
But my morning holds it’s scolding tone down to a whisper
Supernova of nature
Verdant and bright, a new beginning
Nature’s lasers sunrays of light
You can hear the birds singing
You can see blue skies passing you by
Your soul sings and you feel like a bird on high
Sparkling gems, celestial rays
Herald the promise of happy days
So come what may, I have no fear
I dream of holding you oh so near
When you go far away
I will always remember this day
When we stood on the shore
Of our own creation.
And we dreamed of a world unknown
Yet we found peace right here at home…
So look for answers within your heart
And never shall you and happiness be apart
And when the flames of life lick at your soul
Don’t ever be afraid to reach out…
The light will guide the way and
The path will appear before you
I woke from a dream to find mother earth below me,
And the gods shining down above me,
Blissful peace like a zephyr across my skin.
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Helene Kippert
There’s another one of those awesome light effects that I can’t resist – great work Craig! :o)
Peter Horsman
I’m no good at poetry, so two lines is quite a stretch for me hehe
...but when I first saw this picture the line “Sacred heart of nature” came to mind…
Really love this shot Craig
kathleen
I love this stuff can I have a shot this time:
Blasting the sun should feel hot now,
But my morning holds it’s scolding tone down to a wisper
Di Edwards
Supernova of nature
Verdant and bright, a new beginning
Craig Shillington
VBS Thanks Helene :) :)
Craig Shillington
Hey there Peter :) Maybe if you check back from time to time and see how others are doing, you might add something eh :)
Craig Shillington
Awww Hi Kathleen, I always feel so guilty when I see you ;) Oops :) Thanks so much for starting this off for us :) {{{hugs}}}
Craig Shillington
VBS Thanks Di :) I can always count on you eh :) :D
Di Edwards
Hope so Craig :) Still learning though and really enjoying stretching myself with these. Never been much of a poet so still have my L plates on. Just try not to wreck your collabs :)
Di Edwards
PS: we country folk have to stick together (I’m from Ararat and Stawell) LOL
Craig Shillington
Ahhhhhhhh My old stomping ground Di :) I lived in Horsham for about 15 years before I moved over here to WA. :) Would soooooo love to get back to the Grampians at some stage :) Gorgeous up there :)
kathleen
DON’T FEEL GUILTY god man, lots to do and you know the universe times it all in somehow… It will happen when it’s ready to happen…
webgrrl
Nature’s lasers sunrays of light
You can hear the birds singing
Di Edwards
Yeah, have to admit I have a fondness for the Grampians myself. Living in Cairns is a little bit different ;)
What years did you live in Horsham? The road from Horsham to Stawell was where I learnt to drive my folks Chrysler Valiant LOL Spent many years driving round country Victoria when my brothers raced motocross.
Craig Shillington
Hehehe Okay Kathleen .. .I will try not to let it get to me {{{{hugs}}}}
Craig Shillington
VBS Hello Webby :) {{{{{hugs}}}} You are another I can always know will join in on these :) VBS Thank you :)
Craig Shillington
Hmmmm, Di …. I would have lived there from about 1989 – 2004 or thereabouts. Mum and Dad used to run a Cafe in Horsham called The Red Cherry. HAHAHA I learnt to drive in Ballarat!! Oops ;)
Di Edwards
I was well and truly out of there by ‘89 LOL
Left in ‘83 to move to the big smoke and get work, which was sadly lacking in Stawell. Better shut up now and let the poets have a go :D
Princessbren2006
have been to the grampians myself too been to quite a bit of victoria :) including ballarat
Princessbren2006
You can see blue skies passing you by
your soul sings and you feel like a bird on high
webgrrl
coughs Craig dont forget who actually started this.. in the beginning :P
lanced200
Craig – your from Horsham – I live in Horsham now – orginally from brissy though.
Small world
Suzanne German
sparkling gems, celestial rays
herald the promise of happy days
Jeff Burns
Brilliant shot! Love the rays captured
WitheringMoon
Great shot Craig!
WitheringMoon
So come what may, I have no fear
I dream of holding you oh so near
Tony Moore
Love this shot, great concept, beautiful light and great use of subject.
When you go far away
I will always remember this day
Michael Douglass
Nice idea Chris, like it, works well. I think you should call it Creation as the light through the leaf looks like a star being born and it will also fit with the nature theme, just a suggestion. Great work.
Michael Douglass
Um sorry, just read it was a poetry collab. Sorry to butt in everyone!
Michael Douglass
Craig I can’t concentrate on work now as I’m thinking of this image, like it! So thought I would drop some poetry off as well, feel free to scrap it as required.
When we stood on the shore
Of our own creation.
MissKristy
and we dreamed of a world unknown
yet we found peace right here at home…
HUGGGLES Craig :) This is a stunning shot in so many ways.
Craig Shillington
VBS thanks guys :) :) This is sounding gorgeous as well.
Kristy, I am soooooo tempted to end it on your words!!! Not sure yet. ;) I’ll give it a while :)
Pepper
so look for answers within your heart
and never shall you and happiness be apart
MissKristy
(Craig, I thought it sounded like an ending but I didn’t mean it to! Somehow this poem seems to be living a short life! awww! Thanks to Pepper for reviving it)
and when the flames of life lick at your soul
don’t ever be afraid to reach out…
Di Edwards
The light will guide the way and
The path will appear before you
Craig Shillington
VBS And we are off again ;) That’s okay Kristy .. .I knew you didn’t mean for that to be the end … It just sounded so nice there :) I need to think of a name now ;)
Sorin Reck
Fantastic. Great colours, and composition
maniac
great photo! looks like the sun was giving you a VBS!
Bree Tipton
i woke from a dream to find mother earth below me,
and the gods shining down above me,
blissful peace like a zephyr across my skin.