Decay
Poem Collaboration time people :) :)
- The idea here is to add TWO lines of the poem and let someone else add another two lines as we form a poem around the photo that can be added to the Red Bubble Collaboration Hub. :) Get involved and let’s see what wonderful work we can all make together :) :)
- You can still leave normal comments if you don’t want to join in.
- You can also come back at anytime to add another two lines, just give others a chance to add first :)
HAVE FUN!!!
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- Decay (Thus far)
She spun webs with her pulsing veins
The sun drying away her pains…
A mindless shell of what she used to be
Incomplete within her misery
But is there hope for her today?
To wash the numbing pain away
No longer will her prey come near
Empty ravening is her fear
Full of sleep she dreams of a past happiness,
Only to wake to this nightmare
The painful price for existence
The easing only with substance
Red blood, red deep
She hopes no nightmares in her sleep
Or breaks in heart;
It hurts to cry,
Her only release
To be free, die
In decay, release
Goodness returns to earth
And from these inner most feelings,
She will give birth.
Life seductively, finite
Womb life…life shivers
Will this new life bring meaning to her own
Or more imprisoned in a world all alone
She wept tears that spun into tormented years
But felt an emotional embrace releasing her fears
Her spirit, her fire her life and her love
Born down below now free, flies above…
Her works of art , the webs she wove
Stays strong and perfect, with gentle hold.
They flutter gently, in the breeze,
Only her can they appease
Her physical body may be gone…
But her art lives on and on.
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WitheringMoon
oooh has an eerie fell to it!! i like =) will join in with this peom but i’m not creative enuf to start it off lol!!! =)
Craig Shillington
Hehehe Thanks Kelly ;) And I disagree greatly about you not being creative enough!!! Tsk Tsk :)
Jessica Tremp
she spun webs with her pulsing veins
the sun drying away her pains…
Craig Shillington
AH HA!!!! Thanks for starting it off Jess …. :) :) VBS {{{{hugs}}}}
MissKristy
a mindless shell of what she used to be
incomplete within her misery
Craig Shillington
VBS :) Thanks Kristy :) :)
Halcyon007
But is there hope for her today?
To wash the numbing pain away
Craig Shillington
VBS G’day there Stuart :) :) Thanks for that mate :)
Di Edwards
No longer will her prey come near
Empty ravening is her fear
WitheringMoon
Full of sleep she dreams of a past happiness,
Only to wake to this nightmare
gaypony
the painful price for existence
the easing only with substance
EarthquakeBee
red blood, red deep
she hopes no nightmares in her sleep
kseriphyn
Or breaks in heart;
It hurts to cry,
gaypony
her only release
to be free, die
Durotriges
Ye gods, this is a cheery one, isn’t it? Now let me see…. How about -
“In decay, release
Goodness returns to earth”
Marilyn Brown
And from these inner most feelings,
she will give birth.
Popular Mr
Hmmm…another one that I would enjoy printing in the darkroom if it was a b/w negative.
Good one
Lisa Jewell
Life seductively, finite
Womb life…life shivers
Durotriges
Like that couplet MBartworks – nice one! :-D
Kayla Vernon
Will this new life bring meaning to her own
or more imprisoned in a world all alone
Pepper
she wept tears that spun into tormented years
but felt an emotional embrace releasing her fears
Suzanne German
her spirit, her fire her life and her love
born down below now free, flies above…
Marilyn Brown
Here’s another image that I thhink would suit this poem. Womb by Cliff Vestergaard.
funkyfacestudio
Her works of art , the webs she wove
stays strong and perfect, with gentle hold.
AmandaWitt
They flutter gently, in the breeze,
only her can they appease
georgiegirl
You guys are all amazing!! I’d join in but I don’t have any decaying thoughts today!! I’m happy reading what you create!!
Suzanne German
Hey Craig…what’s happening with the collaboration?.....is it somewhere else on the site and I;ve missed it? probably LOL – I am not that quick with IT stuff yet – need to improve my computer skills!!! S:))))
lareejc
Her physical body may be gone…
But her art lives on and on.
Craig Shillington
WOW!!!!! VBS!! WOW Everyone that is sooooooooo good :) :) I think I’ll end this one on Laree’s two lines … seems to close the poem so well :) Thanks so much everyone. I’ll organize this with credits and post it in the Forum :) :) VBS