The Broken!!!

cortney baker
Author: cortney baker
Word Count: 195
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The Broken!!!

just how i felt so i chaged my life again

When your broken you feel like no one cases you feel all alone and you wont t die the stars in your ski have fallen and melted away till your ski is black. You feel like you cant change you life back to the way it was and if fells like the end you don’t wont to move or blink nothing in the world goes’ right for you. The world feels like its closing in on you, you cant move you cant breath from the pressure of the world crashing down on you from your loneliness and pain. You cant see anything but darkness in your eyes you sit on the ground all curled up looking at your feature with all you pain and loneliness tears rush down you face you scream in a crowded place but no one can here you nor do they care ass you fall to the ground you feel you body dying and that’s when you give your life to God. You feel changed a new slate you life and sins have been forgiven never fore get the people that love you with all there heart and so dose God.

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