follow me

I see something
that i’ve never seen before
startled by beauty
i try to hop away
but this beautiful soul
follows me
sly and sleek
she sneeks and creeps
trying to find me
I hop faster
trying to find my way
my way home
evading this girl
and back into
what i am comfortable with
i remember
it’s only
a little bit
further ahead
i move with silence
and i hop slowly
towards my hole
but she spots me
I hurry
hop hop hop
towards the hole
but she grabs me
as i fall into my home
gravity pulls her with me
we tumble together
for what seems like
forver
while we are falling
we have the most
interesting of conversations
as soon as
we become comfortable
with one another
something grabs her
and pulls her away
what i was afraid of
i soon realized
that I liked
although in an instance
she was gone

to be continued….

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i am the rabbit
and she is alice

my sorry rendition of alice in wonderland

Comments

  • carolinewood
    carolinewoodover 6 years ago

    i love this little story, it’s better than the original one

  • thank you, i will be writing more and adding to it

    – conceited

  • HeatherTS
    HeatherTSover 6 years ago

    dope does that..pulls ya in and then leaves yu feeling like a piece of you is missin

  • i wasn’t talking about dope

    – conceited

  • HeatherTS
    HeatherTSover 6 years ago

    k…well then who left ya?

  • it was written about you. Though I haven’t
    finished it

    – conceited

  • JenniferB
    JenniferBover 6 years ago

    woohoo

    heather and conceited
    up a tree
    F.U.C.K.I.N.G!

    lol

  • JenniferB
    JenniferBover 6 years ago

    to be fair conceited, you write pretty well for a junked up, funked up, DJ boy… hahaha

  • lol

    thank you jen

    – conceited

  • JenniferB
    JenniferBover 6 years ago

    has it occurred to you and heather that when you first met, it was on a T Shirt entry about date rape??? hahaha, now aint that just something to tell your grandchildren about one day… lmao ;-)
    soooooooo romantic!!!

  • no… actually it started with her story

    white trash princess d=)

    and maybe my addicted love t-shirt

    – conceited

  • HeatherTS
    HeatherTSover 6 years ago

    i swear if anotha mf’r starts talkin bout babies imma freak!

  • HeatherTS
    HeatherTSover 6 years ago

    ha! hes right! lmfao…he looooves white trash hahaha! j/k j/k

    damn what are u some kinda infinity gig memory card?! howd u remember that?….

    ey baby go listen to …. Iio “Rebel” ….cause imma f*ckin rebel!

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