"His Late Night Moon - Her Misunderstood Monster" - - -
A piece that I came up with after truly analzying my art-piece which has the same name as this poem. Nice if I may say so…smilez….thumbs up to all that read and comment and fav….. yours colorblind
And you should know my inspiration my love…my moon….
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And shines light onto his soul …
That cries wail and echo …
Trapped in his cage of ribs …
Cries only her silent ears can hear …
She – his moon …
He – her misunderstood monster …
But to her “The Sun” ...
For he is like the Daystar …
Without no him there wouldn’t be no she …
For the Moon only shines from the light of Sun …
That x-rays from his lava lamp heart …
That sees thru her thick lucirous skin …
And sees the beauty she holds within….
Shoaib .
very nice bro
i like that lava lamp heart line
kudos
colorblind replied
thumbs up bro thanks man ..thats watsup
you already kno
Ty Beach
I like the image of the rib cage… where else would you place your heart :)
colorblind replied
thanks ty ….smilez…yea when i was writing this it just all came out once i looked at my piece
and it was like whoa…that was a nice one…thank you
wigs
wow just the mere imagery in your words sets this writing a light, but then i look at the image and can see where you found the inspiration for the words…. both pieces are amazing
colorblind replied
awwwww thank you so much….truly a smiley face of pleasure on this fair day …...smilez
colorblind replied
The real poem to go with it
Poem
wigs
Congratulations….......
You have been featured in Writing: Persuing Happiness
colorblind replied
AWWWWW THANKZ A MILLION…...TRULY
MAN I’M THIS GOT FEATURED THIS IS A PIECE OF MY HEART HERE
AND TO HAVE IT FEATURED IN SUCH A GROUP TRULY MAKES ME HAPPY
THANK THANK THANK U ….SMILEZ
Devalyn Marshall
Wonderful writing! The art is cool!
colorblind replied
Yea i change it after looking at it again…the poem that really goes with is this
Poem
thank you truly …daz
ShadowDancer
c-razy cool mr colorblind…. crazy cool
colorblind replied
thank you …smilez…a true hug to my heart ….
here the poem to go with it
Poem
raymondoantonio
CONGRATS CB!! GREAT WORDS AND IMAGE!! BRAVO
colorblind replied
thanks man
Isa Rodriguez
wow…..... women love strength:))). this is brilliant
colorblind replied
thats a good thing my heart holds alot of that …smilez
ricardo perez jr
yea ,i get dat my dats tight shit yu
colorblind replied
thanks homie…hope all is well with you
princessleah
Beautiful poem and lovely artwork CB…....
colorblind replied
THank you leah ….xoxoxo
cerphotography
“blackberry sky” “he is like the daystar” very nice lines and imagery. I really liked this I think you have a lot of talent.
colorblind replied
awwww thank you …truly nice ….daz….yea thats some of my fav. lines as well
Patricia Anne ...
Cassidy JK (Ra...
This is great and I love the art.
gretchen .
blackberry sky and lava lamp heart are completely where it’s at with words… such sweet writing! :-)
blackvixen
amazing work….trully amazing…..