Coming Straight from the Heart - I Just Don't See It

I am not going to spend the time in this comment telling you how much your life is great and your talents which are so amazing will lead you to places that others only dream about..I won’t spend the time telling you how much your writing move mountains every time I read and just how in awe I am of your works..I won’t do that..instead I am going to tell you how remarkable this piece of writing is..how the journey through your words just moved to where I need to throw on the instrumental and write a badass piece..this is so crazy good…this is the type of poetry that when I read it it makes me just happy to be consider a writer along the likes of you..just an amazing talent you have, so I won’t spend the time telling you how incredible, how of this world is your future..keep on writing and dropping hits.

sometimes it really does get this close. You’ve expressed the thought pattern so succinctly and with guts.
I’m tend to go off into a fantasy of being torn apart by werewolves but hey I’m just that kind of girl.
Entertaining the dark thoughts
playing with them
releasing them without harm is the trick.

So glad you have found what it is that works your will…
xx

It’s a wonderful journey of the silent mind that you yourself hears and have to deal with with in yourself. No one can tell you what you need to do. No one can tell you what you are going to do. No doctor is able to give medication for the songs of the heart. A person knowing his true self, knowing his goals in life, tho he may stumble and fall and stray away from what he needs to do with life, he will be the one to see it threw. In the end we all have to deal with our choices, we can not take back every thing we put out there. it is a wise man who thinks it threw from start to finish before he opens his foolish mouth. It is a wise man who know the difference between the Heart… and instinct.

LOL :) i Now I FEEL loved. oxoxoxox

I am loving this ending a whole lot better..much more fire and meaning in this ending…well done.

I agree with T….not that U asked me or anything LMAO…..but it has such a punch to it ;))) love to U hun :)

awwwwwwwweeeee…...well here is the kiss :) MUAHHHHHHHHHH :)

I won’t leave no drawn out comment but it was strong CB u moved me with your words (snap, snap) ha ha it was good to go

oxoxxox

HELL IS HERE AND NOW!! I WOKE UP FEELING LIKE THAT TODAY…THE GREY DAY…WHAT THE FUCK IS IT ALL ABOUT..FUCK DAYS!! BUT WE MANAGE TO PICK OURSELVES UP AND CARRY ON AND TRY TO STAY POSITIVE!!! RESPECT!! POWERFUL WRITING!!

yo bay bro you really getting IT IN
damn son, this is another solid solid piece
you stepped it and stabbed it to the jugular with all the feelings in here
this is a intense piece that really gets the mind thinking
awesome work bro

Damn Daz, you have me rolling in tears here and I know that the last thing you need or want to hear is about precious your life is, you know that as your ending just kicks 10 different kinds of asses and then some. Your powerful words do come straight from your ever loving heart dear friend and that shows in everything that you write. The intensity of this piece makes me want to scream and give you a big hug, just to let you know that someone thinks of you and wishes for your days to be filled with lots of love and laughter, you are a rare soul dear Daz, you always touch your readers with your strong verses of pain and love and one day you will reap the rewards from such a talent. You are something special and you are here so embrace life and enjoy every minute of it even in the times you don’t feel like it and you think why the fuck bother cause it is in those times that you need it the most. Be well dear friend.

wow, reading this was like when i was a little girl and fell off my horse and the i thought i’d never take a breath again… my chest hurt and seemed to expand even though I wasn’t taking in oxygen.. what a powerful write of the journey that goes on in the mind when we’ve experienced so much of ‘life’, those secret conversations in both our mind and our heart.. often conflicting, battles raging.. love the focus on having a will to keep going.. the dreamer in me hopes that love itself isn’t completely shut out. :)

oh wow Daz, for a moment I was a bit worried. A really powerful write here, you certainly poured your emotion and hear into it. That feeling of desperation and hopelessness is felt.

The will to live is to just live ...Exactly my friend! Despite the fragile parts in here, I like how there’s strength as well. Balancing out the mind and heart can be confusing and difficult sometimes….but we need both in order to be whole.

Just live it up ....I like the positive energy in those words. We gotta learn from the difficult and be grateful for all the good things in life. Because that’s life, good and bad. :)

i feel yu on dis dogg ,yu kno i got yu i really kno wut yur goin through don’t stop my dogg ,remember wut yur big homi3 told yu da other night ,fuck’em

My heart goes out to you Daz, I feel you because I feel like that sometimes too. The writing helps a lot. Keep writing and keep producing powerful poetry like we here at RB all know you can. God is with you every step of the way, deep in your heart I think you know this. He will never give you anything, any problems in your life, if he didn’t think you can handle it. Take comfort in the fact that HE thinks you are strong enough to handle this. You are a strong warrior in this crazy world we call LIFE. Take care!! :)

Excellent write but the performance of it, hearing from your lips, in your voice, and the expressions of your mouth bring it so to life. Really awesome stuff mister.

This is just so real, and raw and extremely powerful and honest Daz. Reading/listening to it I was kind of a bit shocked but that comes from the pure honesty in this piece and to me that is huge! You are one talented guy who seems to truely be in touch with himself as scary as it may seem sometimes. I love the vid…..as I said before, it is like living art and to hear the emotion in your voice is even more moving for me. This just totally rocks on so many levels Daz….keep keepin’ it real :)

I follow my instincts
I make my own footprints
And my heart follows me
WOW!!! I am still shaking…awesome!

you are MORE not Less I love your write from the heart and I feeeeeeeeel it..angelx

the way you’ve done a combination written/spoken poem is powerful and effective, it really works, well done.

This is wonderful work my friend, well done it is always a pleasure

oh my freaking god!!!!!!
that was awesome!
i loooooved you reciting this poem and i loved the fact we just see your mouth. your inflections and rhythm and laughs and pauses and … damn all of it!
you go!

Wow CB.. this just hits it.. I mean really!!

...all I can say is wow…u got talent

powerful, very powerful..

woah…this is some of the best stuff i’ve read in a long time who hasnt felt that way i mean really…really nice joint

It was so awesome getting to hear your own poem CB. My fave lines
I follow my instincts
I make my own footprints
And my heart follows me
My heart might not see it
But I see it perfectly
I see a will to live
Everyday I open my eyes
Its like God paints the picture for me
And I see it
The will to live is to just live
Magnificent! Congrats on every well-deserved comment and faving too :D

Oh my word Colorblind. This is what poetry is all about. In awe.

This was so intense that my blood was rushing… in that pivotal moment comes the realization of what life is… there is a lot to be said about reaching that moment and pushing beyond it.. and you said it all!!!

you have gt me going wow..wow…wow…everytime i see urt art or writting…this is ne piece i think i can never forget …..its craaaaaaaazy…..itell you its just crazy man!!! i cannot help but to say..I L.O.V.E it!!!!!