She Dreams of Cumming...

She dreams of cumming
Sex is just an unpleasant rerun every night
Of a poor quality porn flick
IN & OUT
OUT & IN
IN & OUT
OUT & IN
….again….and….again
She moans fake pleasure
As he dives into her
To find her buried treasure
He always comes up short
Breathing heavy
The usual less than 5 minutes of patty cake
Of him thrusting his sweaty bod
In between her parted thighs
And falls into a snoring slumber
And she….is left….unsatisfied – yet again
Dreaming of cumming
Just like the women she reads about
In her books of erotic romance
Sometimes she wishes to be those women
To just be them for a page or two
Or maybe be them for a whole chapter
Just thinking about has her going
mmmmmm….Orgasmic
And no longer would she be dreaming of cumming
She only around because he treats her good
And makes good money
Mother use to tell her she couldn’t go wrong
If she found a man like that
But I guess mother never found a man like that
Because other wise she would of took them say words back
Because this man is just like that
But his sex
Is the only setback
Laying on her back
The same position as always
-Missionary
The ordinary
No creativity to spark her sex drive into activity
She sometimes tells him
She’s not in the mood
So she wouldn’t have to relive another unpleasant night
She rather do it in the pitch dark
So he wouldn’t see the lack of emotions in her face
She just looks at the clock on the dresser
The red highlighted numbers just seem to be frozen in time
Wishing that his grinding into her
Would cease to a stop
At times she would have to just call it quits
Lie to him saying that it hurts
But it really hurts, that she isn’t able to enjoy making love
Debates in her head that maybe she should leave him
Leave in find herself like the women in her books
That indulge in pages after pages
Of chapters of orgasmic pleasure
And finally have someone to retrieve her treasure
By awaken the dreams of her cumming

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I came up with this when I heard in the lyrics of some music artist. While he ways reciting his words he said “She dreams of cumming”. I pressed pause on my ipod and just those words right there made me think hmmmm… that would make an excellent poem. And while things were slow at work started to go to work on it….and bam there you have it….I might add more to it though….don’t know I’m debating.

Comments

  • poeticgenius
    poeticgeniusabout 5 years ago

    nice son very nice good thing I beat the brakes off that let me calm but I felt that, I gotta step it man u bringing the real for real, real I been in a slumber and it’s apparant but don’t count me out !PG$ baby

  • lol dude you crazy
    but on some real talk
    you already got it ….u don’t need to step it up
    just need to find in the crevices of your mind where that good piece is hiding
    you know we got a plethora of hidden goods in our superdomes …you know this
    so now all you gots to do is find it or find inspiritation to find it
    glad you like son…peep out the rest of my work ….i got some killas…tell me which ones u like….real talk ….i’m jamming to that DOWN – by JAY SEAN AND LIL WAYNE….i’m liking it …i heard already just really listening to it

    – colorblind

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockabout 5 years ago

    Doing the damn thing again my poetic homie..your pen drops hits..taking no prisoner…

  • lol i likes that ….truly homie you do the samething though no lie

    lol …glad to see you like this man it brings a smile to a dude’s face truly. thank ya

    – colorblind

  • Christie  Moses
    Christie Mosesabout 5 years ago

    Damn! I think you are writing about some women I know LOL This is aaaaweesome!! xoxo

  • lol really….i feel for them lol….glad you tagged up my piece truly …lol thank you

    – colorblind

  • Erika .
    Erika .about 5 years ago

    Wow…I can only imagine how painful it must be for women to have to endure this. The expressionless face part really got me…I really feel for this woman. It must be really lonely feeling this and not being able to speak with her partner….Really nice write Daz. Definitely a reality a lot of women could probably relate to.

  • Thanks erika ….glad you commented on my piece truly ….yea the expressionless face ….oh that would hurt me to see my lover with such a face…..thank you for reading

    – colorblind

  • Leon A.  Walker
    Leon A. Walkerabout 5 years ago

    Speak your truth!!!

  • thanks leon glad you like this piece ….truth to you lol

    – colorblind

  • wingsoffire
    wingsoffireabout 5 years ago

    This is a great piece Daz!!! If I was that woman I woudln’t hestiate to move on, if things are not happening in the bedroom belive me she will find someone else to bring those passions that she yearns for and the orgasms that she seeks to life so that she can feel like a real woman.

  • Thank you …..i was hoping you would stop by ….lol ….i love your visits smilez…and true words of yours…lol

    – colorblind

  • Patricia Anne McCarty-Tamayo
    Patricia Anne ...about 5 years ago

    If she spent more time talking with him and less time in those damn books maybe she would get more out of it. After all he isn’t a mind reader. A passive woman like that with no voice of her own to speak what she wants. She just likes his money so she lets him think she likes him… I don’t feel sorry for her one bit, she’s a user. A real woman who loved her man would explain to him she needs more because she wants him to be with her no on her. A real woman WANTS to grow with her man, teach him what she likes and learns what he likes. Too many weman are lazy and expect the man to do every thing because he has a cock, Truth is it’s an organ, not a magic wond. She better wake up from her fantasy and get real! ;)

  • Whoa ….nicely stated Patricia….i made up the whole scenerio though…but i know there are women who live like this…..i so like this comment though….truly….you gets the lifeline banner for this one …..lol

    – colorblind

  • Patricia Anne McCarty-Tamayo
    Patricia Anne ...about 5 years ago

    WOW Honored! :D xoxoxoxoxo

  • lol i’m honored to have you spank my page with your greatness ….thumbs up to you..and much love …hope to see more …lol

    – colorblind

  • Patricia Anne McCarty-Tamayo
    Patricia Anne ...about 5 years ago

    oxoxoxoxox :) for sure man!

  • ricardo perez jr
    ricardo perez jrabout 5 years ago

    dats crazzzyy!lol yur dogg rick

  • thanks rick you already kno lol

    – colorblind

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