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Forever Can Euthanasia a War of Bullets

Let a bullet
A hot
piercing
smoking
faster than the speed of life
Bullet
Plunge deep into my head
Dive into my head
Drive
And mash into the depths of my mind
Splash a pool of blood
As it descends deep with in
That redecorates the room with life
Drip drops of my life
And let it run down these walls
For that bullet
THAT
ONE
BULLET
Would euthanasia these war of bullets
Ricocheting in my skull
Killing me
Dismantling me
From functioning
A riot of thoughts
That have assembled
And their cries echo
She is the one that is the originator
Of these 100 little curses
Of these ricocheting thoughts
The same she say, he say shit
The absence of her
The thoughts of her
The love I feel for her
Has left me hollow
and a head pregnant with these many thoughts
So to euthanasia the pain
I elevate the barrel to kiss my brains
Eyes closed
Sweat pouring from my pores
Thinking fuck this!
Unable to deal with these 100 little curses
Finger on the trigger
Ready to extinguish the riot within me
With this bullet
A hot
piercing
smoking
faster than the speed of life
Bullet
But the phone rings
The caller just happens to flip a frown into a smile
And changed my whole perspective on what I was thinking
The caller is
..she..
She euthanasias a swarm of bullets
That once buzzed within me ….
She is once again
My honeybee
Stinging me
Injecting me
With her love
A hot
piercing
smoking
Long lasting love
That will out live life
For our love is
FOREVER

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I was writing this last night Oct 4, 2009
I was venting out how a bullet would feel better than the many thoughts ricocheting in my head.
I was at the 10th or 12th line when I got a call from my girl…We had a wonderful conversation about alot of things and were trading word after word ……and when we were through she said that she would love to give our love a try again….so we are officially back again and I couldn’t be any happier than I am now…..smilez
Forever is she and me ….Forever is we ….Forever is our love

Comments

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockabout 5 years ago

    A head pregnant with many thoughts..that is a marvelous line and this piece is just totally cool..nice work my man..and congrats with the love thing flowing again.

  • Thanks truly my friend …..good to hear that from you …and yea you just don’t know how happy i am…to have her in my mitts again…..thumbs up on that fa sure …lol

    – colorblind

  • Christie  Moses
    Christie Mosesabout 5 years ago

    Wow this is intense love and it scares the shit out of me lol I wish I could fall that deep but then….what if they don;t fall the same? This is sheer brilliance in its riotous emotions and twists. I can feel your words like stings on my heart. I sincerely hope this love is eternal. Love C xoxo

  • smilez….thank you
    never be afraid to take that step to fall …and who wouldn’t want to go the distance with you
    i love that ….. I can feel your words like stings on my heart….truly well said…..i hope it is eternal as well….but if not …just the moments spent with her were a blessing and truly enjoyed…i love every minute of it …….thanks daz

    – colorblind

  • David Holmes
    David Holmesabout 5 years ago

    amazing words my best wishes go to you and the other half of your heart and i hope you stay joined forever :-))

  • I hope we stay joined forever as well ……thank you truly David….from the colorblind one….i’m glad you took the time to view my work ….thumbs up to you

    – colorblind

  • SanjaXOXO
    SanjaXOXOabout 5 years ago

    You are a pure genius Daz!!!!!!!!! Kinda left me speechless!! XOXO

  • Awwww xoxoxo to you…you know i’m a retard….over her …she brings the genius out of me ….you gots to thank her for allowing me to plunge in the seas of my mind and retrieve this hidden treasure …thanks Sanja….smilez from the kid

    – colorblind

  • wingsoffire
    wingsoffireabout 5 years ago

    Wow!!! I guess sometime we wish for something to end because it won’t stop playing in our heads, the intensity of this piece is awesome! Happy that you are back with your love Daz, best of luck to you both!

  • Thank you i’m still trying to calm my azz down …lol….like i’m still thrilled that we are a item again….i would wake up and just hope for the day to come that we got back together ..and that day has come…now i gots to keep it together …..thank you from daz aka colorblind

    – colorblind

  • JaneSolomon
    JaneSolomonabout 5 years ago

    wow Daz….intense stuff here my friend…glad you have her back!! xxx

  • Jane truly thank you ….i’m glad to have you pass on my work and “wow” you smilez…..colorblind

    – colorblind

  • Ushna Sardar
    Ushna Sardarabout 5 years ago

    hmmm color you’re amazing with words! i like this piece!

  • thank you for the feature it truly is a trophy to the heart to recieve it for this piece…thank you ….and i’m not the only one that is amazing with words you should peep out Ushna work….a true magician…..smiez

    – colorblind

  • Ushna Sardar
    Ushna Sardarabout 5 years ago

  • SlayerX
    SlayerXabout 5 years ago

    cool

  • cool of you to think so

    – colorblind

  • JenniferB
    JenniferBabout 5 years ago

    Awww… That’s GREAT news about you and your girlfriend colorblind.
    Love the writing she inspires in you. ;-)

  • smilez i know huh jennny lol….i love it as well and i’m glad to have her in my life to be able to write such pieces….because of her i can write something like everyday…..she is my everything

    – colorblind

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