My Hidden Atlantis

Author: colorblind
Word Count: 130
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My Hidden Atlantis

I was thinking about how I woke up this morning with a face of drool and had a good night rest with an addition of a swell dream
Face matted in drool …lol
But hey what a dream…..smilez

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In the lost saliva of my sleep
In the form of pools of drool
On my satin pillow
Dwells a hidden Atlantis
My dreamland
or at least the residue of it
The ejaculated sensation of dreamy skies
Beauty only seen by concealed eyes
Is the island of my inner paradise
And here I wake to splashes of it on my face
That leaked from the shores of my lips
Left as pools of drool
To wash upon the beaches of my pillow
I love when I drown in my sleep
And left to rise
Back to surface
To the ambiance given off by the sun’s glorious tie dye morning glow
And wipe away the lost saliva of my sleep
Home to my hidden Atlantis
Where my dreams swim free

Trenchtownrock

You wrote about drool and made it damn good…I must admit I had a good laugh with your words describing the piece but you really made this very good…totally cool write.
colorblind replied

LoL ….yea i was up last night i would say round 2 something just thinking bout how i woke up and the dreams i had the previous night…lol thank you man ..truly glad you like this lol….it was one of the many random writes i was doing last night …this is one of many from last night…i really liked it ….thank you for hitting my piece up ….sincerely daz
Matt Roberts

Great poem. Great twist on the whole drooling thing :P Very imaginative :D
colorblind replied

Thanks matt ….lol it had me like whoa i really did a piece on drool…lol…but i like and i’m glad you like it as welll truly a plus …thanks
JaneSolomon

Oh cb a poem of wonder…...and drool…..wonderful friend! xx
colorblind replied

lol i hope i had you drooling …lol …thank you dear friend xoxo…. smilez to you
ambient-1

Brilliant!
colorblind replied

brilliant of you to think so friend truly ….thanks from the colorblind one..:)
Sally Omar

Awesome poetry!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxo
colorblind replied

thank you sally smilez to you….i’m glad you find it to be sos….xoxoxo
colorblind
erika15

So profound for a pool of drool! But this is creatively written, I love the metaphor. Makes me dream …
colorblind replied

thank you truly i’m glad you like erika …a reall big cheese smile b4 i go off to work…thank you chickorita…..smilez daz
Fiona Christensen

i love how you made drool sound brilliantly profound and poetic! thats skill! Its great, i love it! love the description too! ;)
colorblind replied

lol thanks Fiona….i truly thank you for viewing my poem and leaving a wonderful comment
i just posted another poem if you interested in viewing it and bored ..smilez…daz
thanks again
ricardo perez jr

love dat cuz i feel dat extra tight is da title
colorblind replied

thanks me cali homie …YOU KNOW ALREADY BIG DAWG ….lol…thanks for viewing and featuring it
wingsoffire

It is amazing what inspires us to write at times Daz, love the creativiy of this well written piece!
colorblind replied

i know huh…i was saying the samething to myself as i read works of our fellow bubblers..its truly inspiring to read such pieces ….and makes me draw more attention to the world around me…for anything can be composed into a poem ….thank you from daz the colorblind one
Shoaib .

damn man you coming with it hard
amazing work here
you rock bro
colorblind replied

thanks bro GO HARD OR GO HOME LOL thanks big bro
TAHill

to turn drool into the tool…...well done….tah
colorblind replied

thanks indeed tah truly
erika15

Really enjoyed this piece!

You’ve been featured in On Youth! :D
colorblind replied

AWWWWWW REALLY ….A BIGGGG THANK YOU IS EXTENDED TO YOU …THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL PLEASURE OF BEING FEATURED TRULY
RVRFNX

This poem soars high in the skies like a magnificent bird man. I’m glad I read this just before bed. I am jealous of your dreams man… I hope to have a nice one like that!
colorblind replied

lol nothing to be jealous about …i bet your dreamss are even better lol
thankss for stopping
Coronus

This was freaking amazing! your use of metaphors – genius.
The flow of this was like a bubbling brook.
Brilliant.